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Spiral really has no idea what they're doing and they hope you like what you're reading.

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Discord holds the weekly meeting of the fan club for the television show 'My Little Human', a popular cartoon amongst fillies and foals, and especially adult ponies, nicknamed 'humonies'. The only members of their fanatic group? Himself and Lyra Heartstrings. Watch as they confound others with their love for the show, and the adventures it takes them on.

A semi-sequel to The Villains Anonymous Support Group.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 61 )

Why is there no Lyra emote?

Once a god of disharmony and chaos, always a god of disharmony and chaos.

3228736 They also need Luna and Discord emotes

Oh yes, I like this :pinkiehappy: This is going to be very fun to read.

Dude, some words: Little Luna from previous story joins the club. On the moon. Bitch.

Eh.

The composition was lacking and some sentences felt like they were missing something.

Case in point:

the pony infamous obsessed with humans

Definitely requires some expansion.

Overall though, I just didn't find it to be all that entertaining, nothing much happened in the chapter, and it was all pretty predictable as well.

Not my cup of tea I suppose.

So what did they think of Season 3 and "Humestria Girls"?

At the start of Season 2, the humans had to fight Q. Then at the end, they had to battle an invasion of "Aliens". And finally, at the beginning of Season 3 there was the battle against the shadowy villains Darth Vader and Emperor Palpatine and the power of the Dark Side.

All leading up to the primary protagonist, Dimlight Spackle, ascending to a Vorlon.

:trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

3229708 YOU MADE A BABALON FIVE REFRANCE! AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Comment posted by Cerulean Starlight deleted Sep 20th, 2013

Exactly one thousand word intro?

Colour me intrigued.

I loved your last story, I don't see why some more self-referential meta-humour won't impress.

Nerds! Is there going to be return of the other villains? Maybe turn them into fans too. I did like the previous story.

How comes I had the exact same idea as this one week before I saw this?:pinkiegasp:*GASP* ARE YOU A SPY?:rainbowhuh:

next time im with my friends im just gonna randomly go "Human fist!!!" Made me lol

Lyra was being really cute in this, I just want to hug her.:twilightsmile:

Okay this is turning out to be a lot of fun! <3

Meanwhile Sombra is now Human-phobic. Shivering under his wetted sheets, as he heard the god-awful theme song of his most hated animated show ever.

I know, Lyra... Changing the theme in Season three after the whole "aliens" finale of season two was really something. But you have to admit, it was an awesome song.

I'm enjoying it so far. Please continue!

Even in his own fanclub, discord is still a troll

- bigger on the inside *suddenly think of doctor who theme and a cardboard box flying through the time vortex.

You fucking didn't...... I love you, you bastard. :pinkiehappy:

I liked it. When Discord whispered in her ear. I couldn't help but think of how he whispered in this comic.
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I wonder if he does that at the humonie meetings when they get hungry.

YES! REVENGE ON THE CHANGELING QUEEN!!! :flutterrage:

It's been a while. I am glad to know that both you and your story are still alive. This is quite a good chapter. Very continuous and smooth. Please continue to keep up the excellent work that is your writing.

Interesting, so Twilight is in on it too. This should be good.:twilightsmile:

So Lyra is the 'slice-of-life' humie, and Discord is the 'adventure' humie. I'm betting that Twilight is the continuity fetishist who combs through every episode frame-by-frame to weed out plot holes and inconsistencies.

WHAT THE.... HIVE SUDDENLY CHEESE HELP HE GOT THE WRONG HIVE CHRYSALIS IS THE BADLANDS IT BUUUURNS

I don't think he. All I really do is see him hang around
and all of his collected wear simple disappeared
Twilight facehoofed and sigh

1. I don't think he does. (Forgot to add a word here)
2. Simply.
3. Sighed.

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She also probably wanks over world building fanfiction.

LunaLunaLunaLunaLuna.......

3539655 Who doesn't love worldbuilding~:heart:

I'm having too much Doctor overload! I NEED CUP-OF-SOUP!

Hmm, now how would Discord know that Twilight watches MLH?
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No need to thank me.:raritywink:

WAS THAT A TOM BAKER REFERENCE???

WAS THAT A TOM BAKER REFERENCE???

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3540222They do seem to be popping up. Now, would you like a jelly baby?

3541125 No thank you. I will take a gallon of PCP if you have one lying around :pinkiecrazy:

Why is suddenly having a huge mound of cheese a bad thing?

Not bad. Want to know what happens next though.:ajsmug:

3540222 I think that was a Tom Baker referance.

That 'phone both' is a TARDIS not a police box, you idiot Discord.

". . . Human fist." Lyra finally gave in and chuckled, pumping her hoof against his clenched hand. "Now, how about a hug?" The unicorn added, extending her hooves out with a sweet smile upon her face. Discord visibly gagged and rolled his eyes. "What's up with ponies and hugs? I get enough from Fluttershy . . . though, hers are nice."

"Please? It will reestablish our friendship after our argument." She wimpered, adding the whole 'big-eyed looked with tears brimming'.

:yay:Though, hers are nice.:yay:

"Yay! Now, all we need you to do is start bringing the snacks. Lyra won't do it, and I certainly won't. I'm pretty sure that's why my last group failed." Discord hissed, mentally willing somewhere somepony's certain changeling hive to entirely become melting cheese. He chuckled, hearing a faint scream of anger come from the direction of the Everfree Forest.

:pinkiegasp:NOOOO! CHRYSSIE!

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:flutterrage: YOU THINK YOU CAN GET AWAY WITH THIS! :flutterrage:

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The moment you put Star Wars with anything, that thing becomes awesome.

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