YEAH!!! FUCK THOSE MUZZLES!!! I like the idea of the 'bolts taking part in mass orgies.
Perhaps that could be how this ends? Lionel goes to lock the hotel up one last time before going home, entering the ballroom or something to find each and every memember of the pegasi show team sucking, licking, and fucking each other. Dash then slips him a pill with wink, and he downs it with a glass of water.
Cue the next morning when every mare is whimpering softly, their cunts, throats, assholes, and manes filled with the spunk of every stallion and his. They are all seated at the bar, backs against the wooden panels as they survey the damage. Cue high hooves/fives all around as they sip their beers.
There were way too much "helplessly". Like seriously too much. And a lot of "groaning" too. you need to work on that.. nice job though, was really hot.
May I add that fucking like rabbits inside a sauna is like, an absolutely TERRIBLE idea? At least, if you're using it on proper temperatures (70+ C), it is.
Not that I mind, of course, in a literary sense. ;) But in case anyone wants to reproduce (heh) this particular scene in real life...yeah, don't. You'll be begging to pass out, or worse.
Ok that was pretty hot chapter. A little weird and disturbing with the whole wonderbolts having lots of weird orgy parties. Well a lot of weird and nasty but still. Also I like the fact that now spitfire is now having feelings toward him that was pretty great. I just hope rainbow will have the guts to tell him her feeling about him or else spitfire will swoop in and take him all for her own pleasure. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Oh man just reading made me feel all kinds of dirty! I need a hot bath and steel wool Just for my skin to rinse of the sex in this chapter! God this is probably the top 20 most hot sex chapters I ever seen.
hot, but I don't like the idea of Dash being a nymphomaniac. Sleeping around, even if it is just for fun is probably one of the least loyal things someone can do.
3391314 In the 2012 Olympics in London, the city of London provided seventy fucking thousand condoms to the athletes of the Olympic Village. Not the spectators. Not the fans. Just the athletes of the Olympic Village itself.
They ran out.
There is heavy precedent for sexual proclivity in peak athletes. They're in peak form, perfect fitness, and they spend great amounts of time sweating and heaving alongside eachother. Of course they're going to fuck.
So, it's not really a case of them being sluts, it's more the fact that they're in the top percentile of athletes and work, and live together. Plus, Spitfire pushes them towards being sexually active with each other so as to strengthen their bonds. Because you're less likely to argue with someone if you're fucking eachother senseless every other night.
3391367 That isn't a problem of Loyalty, unless there's an understanding of the rules of relationship had between the involved ponies of a relationship. Loyalty isn't "Monogamy at all times! You must be chaste!" so much as, well, being LOYAL. So long as you do not betray the expectations of the relationship, I don't see how it's disloyal. The worst that Dash may have done is be unclear of the terms for Soarin, or perhaps she suffered a case of "cold hooves" when the idea of a real relationship came up after all that casual sex.
What's clear, though, is that the girl didn't cheat on anyone. Have a nonstandard situation, as our own sensibilities go? Yes indeed. But no cheating occurred.
3391455 Well, that much is fine, and you're entitled to your own opinion as far as that goes... but I don't follow how her being "loose" or whatever the term you want to use for this situation qualifies her as acting disloyally. That's the point I was really pointing at.
3444036 yes yes, mussolini (not sure if I spelled his name right), and no I'm not leaving out the leader of the guys *cough* japaneese *cough* that got nuked, Tojo. Well technically, if my memory serves me right (its been a few years since I've read and studied about ww2 so don't blame me if i get some stuff wrong), Hirohito was the emperor but Tojo was actually in control.....damn all this talk about ww2 is giving me the sudden urge to play some random ww2 game I own. *thinks* Meh, why not? * plays random ww2 game*
3447820 *round ends and Zixten respawns next to Scar* Huh?! How'd you get here? Oh, um i mean, heeeeeyy buddy. Glad to see you're alive. So how's life been besides the zombie apocalypse? Good? Good. Now umm....you stand right here, and I'm going to...uhhh...get some 'help.' Sooo...I'll be back. *runs away again*
3502551 I didn't. I was making a reference to a online parody-movie titled 'G-rated Porn'. In one scene the dude's dong is covered over by one of the soft-ended drum-things, and he's hitting a drum with it.
3644840 Well, according to most of the frozen pies I've bought from stores you need to poke a few holes in it for steam-venting. Though I get the feeling that THAT is not the reason...Is it a ? If so, that explains why it has holes in it. (And I wonder how much they had to pay that guy to get him to do that in that scene, or if he thought it was funny)
3646317 Probably quiet a pretty bit, but it was funny though. I feel sad for anyone who didn't get the joke, and are like 'what are these two talkin' about' ya know?
3649184 Oh, you thought it was a cooking show? *Snicker*... Bwahahahaha I watched the First one, the Second one, and the Wedding which I think was number Three.
3649668 I was a VERY sheltered child, and once my classmates in High school found out exactly how much so I fell into the role of that one girl from Lucky Star that everybody hid the dirty mags and games from. My classmates wanted, for the most part, to help the poor clueless guy retain his innocence. At the time it was annoying, but looking back it's funny how much of my life looks like the almost-stereo-typical male role from a semi-slice of life anime, minus the hordes of girls that had crushes on him. ...although, there was this one girl in middle school and 9'th grade that I think did have a crush on me at one time, but I didn't see it until I'd made a fool of myself enough times that she looked elsewhere. Oh well. *Shrugs*
3650234 I was sheltered in a different way, I was uh... sheltered from people vs. content, so I DID have that type of stuff, no mags but I had some stuff like that, but no one to share it with. A lot of GTA and 'conkers bad fer day' was played in those days, but now I tend shy away from people. Now a days I have such crippling shyness I can't talk to people hardly at all with out having to whisper the first part of the conversation until I feel comfortable, even in/on a voice chat I can't really talk, I have to use text first until I find some one I semi-relate to before I can talk to him, even more so if its a girl, I feel so awkward that I can't talk AT ALL.
3652214 That's why the internet is so wonderful for conversation. You can finger-talk all day to complete strangers and not have to even be in the same country they are. Sure helps in preventing stage fright.
Grr, why must you update when I'm at work and can't fa... uh, I-I mean, give the story the attention it deserves...
Will read later!
I have the biggest boner anyone has ever had in band class.
3387740 heh...sneaky wank
3387782
Obviously, your band class is too damn tame then, if this givves you the biggest boner you've ever had in it.
One time, at band camp...
3387782 you just won the internet
YEAH!!! FUCK THOSE MUZZLES!!! I like the idea of the 'bolts taking part in mass orgies.
Perhaps that could be how this ends? Lionel goes to lock the hotel up one last time before going home, entering the ballroom or something to find each and every memember of the pegasi show team sucking, licking, and fucking each other. Dash then slips him a pill with wink, and he downs it with a glass of water.
Cue the next morning when every mare is whimpering softly, their cunts, throats, assholes, and manes filled with the spunk of every stallion and his. They are all seated at the bar, backs against the wooden panels as they survey the damage. Cue high hooves/fives all around as they sip their beers.
There were way too much "helplessly". Like seriously too much. And a lot of "groaning" too. you need to work on that.. nice job though, was really hot.
I fear reading this now.
Damn, son.
May I add that fucking like rabbits inside a sauna is like, an absolutely TERRIBLE idea? At least, if you're using it on proper temperatures (70+ C), it is.
Not that I mind, of course, in a literary sense. ;) But in case anyone wants to reproduce (heh) this particular scene in real life...yeah, don't. You'll be begging to pass out, or worse.
Ok that was pretty hot chapter. A little weird and disturbing with the whole wonderbolts having lots of weird orgy parties. Well a lot of weird and nasty but still. Also I like the fact that now spitfire is now having feelings toward him that was pretty great. I just hope rainbow will have the guts to tell him her feeling about him or else spitfire will swoop in and take him all for her own pleasure. Can't wait to see the next chapter!
Oh man just reading made me feel all kinds of dirty! I need a hot bath and steel wool Just for my skin to rinse of the sex in this chapter! God this is probably the top 20 most hot sex chapters I ever seen.
I nutted again.
So, the Wonderbolts are a bunch of sluts. Good to know.
hot, but I don't like the idea of Dash being a nymphomaniac. Sleeping around, even if it is just for fun is probably one of the least loyal things someone can do.
3391314 In the 2012 Olympics in London, the city of London provided seventy fucking thousand condoms to the athletes of the Olympic Village. Not the spectators. Not the fans. Just the athletes of the Olympic Village itself.
They ran out.
There is heavy precedent for sexual proclivity in peak athletes. They're in peak form, perfect fitness, and they spend great amounts of time sweating and heaving alongside eachother. Of course they're going to fuck.
So, it's not really a case of them being sluts, it's more the fact that they're in the top percentile of athletes and work, and live together. Plus, Spitfire pushes them towards being sexually active with each other so as to strengthen their bonds. Because you're less likely to argue with someone if you're fucking eachother senseless every other night.
3391411 I don't think you understand. That wasn't meant in the bad way. No need for justifications.
I see them as depraved sexual deviants, but that's personal opinion. If it works, it works.
3391367 That isn't a problem of Loyalty, unless there's an understanding of the rules of relationship had between the involved ponies of a relationship. Loyalty isn't "Monogamy at all times! You must be chaste!" so much as, well, being LOYAL. So long as you do not betray the expectations of the relationship, I don't see how it's disloyal. The worst that Dash may have done is be unclear of the terms for Soarin, or perhaps she suffered a case of "cold hooves" when the idea of a real relationship came up after all that casual sex.
What's clear, though, is that the girl didn't cheat on anyone. Have a nonstandard situation, as our own sensibilities go? Yes indeed. But no cheating occurred.
3391439 say what you will, but the idea simply just doesn't sit well with me
3391455
Well, that much is fine, and you're entitled to your own opinion as far as that goes... but I don't follow how her being "loose" or whatever the term you want to use for this situation qualifies her as acting disloyally. That's the point I was really pointing at.
Come on, Lionel, if you want Dash then go get her, don't let her just get away!
Am I the only one more interested on how that episode of "Mythbusters" turned out then how the relationship between Lionel and Dashie will turn out?
3388102 "Gentlemen, it has been a privilege fucking mares with you tonight." *slow music starts*
This story is my favorite :3
This story has so much sex and win I think I could read it a thousand times and never be tired of it.
BTW - I'm about half way there
good sir, i believe Loniel is the tsundere character and not rainbow dash given all the hostility he is showing in chapter 1.
*random guy rips off mustache*
Damn... can't talk fancy without a mustache.
3444017 i think you forgot a certain leader from italy that also ruled italy during ww2 and was hitlers buddy :)
3444036 yes yes, mussolini (not sure if I spelled his name right), and no I'm not leaving out the leader of the guys *cough* japaneese *cough* that got nuked, Tojo. Well technically, if my memory serves me right (its been a few years since I've read and studied about ww2 so don't blame me if i get some stuff wrong), Hirohito was the emperor but Tojo was actually in control.....damn all this talk about ww2 is giving me the sudden urge to play some random ww2 game I own. *thinks* Meh, why not? * plays random ww2 game*
3445351 good good, let the history flow through you.
3447244 XD sure I'm letting it flow.....hmmm, whats that? *looks far away*
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Damn it.....didn't i kill those guys already in CoD WaW? Well only one logical thing to do. *runs away*
3447726 ok worven scar,it's time to kill some zombies *turns around* now i know ther- HEY GET BACK HERE!!!
3447733 Me? back there?! *thinks* Tell you what hold this, *hands activated monkey bomb* and I'll just keep running. *continues running*
3447740 oh thank you but why does it look like a monk-BLAM- (i know what a monkey bomb is)
3447820 *round ends and Zixten respawns next to Scar* Huh?! How'd you get here? Oh, um i mean, heeeeeyy buddy. Glad to see you're alive. So how's life been besides the zombie apocalypse? Good? Good. Now umm....you stand right here, and I'm going to...uhhh...get some 'help.' Sooo...I'll be back. *runs away again*
3447820 well nuff off role-playing bout zombies. i got a story to edit. See you around.
3448526 todalo,now my dear scar,i will see you soon in hell..... what,no i did not say anything!
3448735 heh heh. yeah. See ya. whitehouse.gov1.info/photos_obama_face/obama-saluting.jpg
3387782
Well, that's one way to play the drums...
3499923 How the fuck did you know I play the drums?!
3502551
I didn't. I was making a reference to a online parody-movie titled 'G-rated Porn'. In one scene the dude's dong is covered over by one of the soft-ended drum-things, and he's hitting a drum with it.
3503595 3502551
I think what we SHOULD be asking is why (and how) he was reading this in BAND CLASS!
3644582
And this ONE time, in Band Class-
3644730
Ya ya I get your point... Now you want A Pie with that or not, it has a few holes in it though.
3644840
Well, according to most of the frozen pies I've bought from stores you need to poke a few holes in it for steam-venting.
Though I get the feeling that THAT is not the reason...Is it a ? If so, that explains why it has holes in it. (And I wonder how much they had to pay that guy to get him to do that in that scene, or if he thought it was funny)
3646317
Probably quiet a pretty bit, but it was funny though.
I feel sad for anyone who didn't get the joke, and are like 'what are these two talkin' about' ya know?
3646654
I've only seen one of those, and I only saw it about...oh...three or four years ago. Up until then I thought it was a cooking show.
3649184
Oh, you thought it was a cooking show? *Snicker*... Bwahahahaha
I watched the First one, the Second one, and the Wedding which I think was number Three.
3649668
I was a VERY sheltered child, and once my classmates in High school found out exactly how much so I fell into the role of that one girl from Lucky Star that everybody hid the dirty mags and games from. My classmates wanted, for the most part, to help the poor clueless guy retain his innocence. At the time it was annoying, but looking back it's funny how much of my life looks like the almost-stereo-typical male role from a semi-slice of life anime, minus the hordes of girls that had crushes on him.
...although, there was this one girl in middle school and 9'th grade that I think did have a crush on me at one time, but I didn't see it until I'd made a fool of myself enough times that she looked elsewhere. Oh well. *Shrugs*
3650234
I was sheltered in a different way, I was uh... sheltered from people vs. content, so I DID have that type of stuff, no mags but I had some stuff like that, but no one to share it with. A lot of GTA and 'conkers bad fer day' was played in those days, but now I tend shy away from people. Now a days I have such crippling shyness I can't talk to people hardly at all with out having to whisper the first part of the conversation until I feel comfortable, even in/on a voice chat I can't really talk, I have to use text first until I find some one I semi-relate to before I can talk to him, even more so if its a girl, I feel so awkward that I can't talk AT ALL.
3652214
That's why the internet is so wonderful for conversation. You can finger-talk all day to complete strangers and not have to even be in the same country they are. Sure helps in preventing stage fright.