Nopony can do a hot & passionate, lustful clop scene quite like you AP. I hope next chapter Spits gets to join in on the fun, maybe with some assistance from Dashie's toy chest
Heh, I was suspecting that Spitfire knew what there were doing from the start. I wonder if she was acting like she didn't notice anything because she was messing with them, or because she was just used to that stuff. I am curious about the story from the Wonderbolts' locker room too…
“Contains tsundere Rainbow Dash, (…)” - taken from story description I reread that and realized something. Japan is not alone adopting in the area of adopting foreign words into their own vocabulary. Although they do it rather quicker due to English being commonly taught in school. (We only had Spanish and French classes available at mine. )
2235711 Exactly. Its sort of like comparing Dark Knight Rises and The Avengers. Yeah, they're in the same sort of genre (Superhero movies & Clopfics) but they each do it in a different way.
So, I'm wondering if I should read this or not. It seems interesting from the description, but having just finished Ingress, I'm worried that I'm going to run into the same abusive, misanthropic parts mixed in for no apparent reason. I haven't seen any comments talking about the protagonist being a moron, so that does make me want to look, but I noticed several comments about the abusive stuff.
So, I guess I'll just ask before reading. Are the ponies in this fic as abusive and rude as they were in Ingress?
2938100 Well, since the last chapter of this, I've written a milky way story, a nightmare moon ingress story, more affliction, and more affliction clop.
Although it's pretty cool, I find it hard to read. Too much fucking, too little of everything else. Those type of fics got their own value, but you don't watch porn thinking "what will happen next in the storyline", so for me it should stop at being oneshot, or go beyond fucking every five minutes. Better example of this type of story? "Gentleman for Mares".
And next chapter things get.................hot..........
i.imgur.com/kFBC3.png
hawt!
Calling a threesome here... Definitely, a 5-star hotel, nearly abandoned with only a male human and two Pegasi mares.
Awww.....Spitfire's my least favorite.
Also, when could we expect the next chapter of Antecedence?
yay
I always know I have something to look forward to when you add another chapter to this story.
Well what do you know, old Spitfire showed up......I guess you could say that the situation is about to get a lot more...heated? Yeeeeeaaaaaahhhhh
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that'd be a treat.
Dang, that was steamy!!
I like how Spitfire doesn't give a shit that one of her Wonderbolts is fucking some random human.
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Oh, you know Spitfire's gonna want to get a taste of that (and the rainbow) if she's half as randy as the fandom says she is.
I think something might need fixing in this sentence:
Otherwise, funny and sexy as usual. Keep on trucking.
2383253 Hawt.
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'gentlemen for mares' spitfire has her own chapter in this continuity. and i'd wager it happens a few hours after the events of this chapter
Commence read.
Ha.
And then Spitfire will want him to do a threesome or be a shipper on deck and do everything she can to make sure they stay together.
Yeah, those berries sure are hot and arid.
Suddenly I wanna go on a vacation too
...Well, that was pretty damn hot. Definitely some of the best clop I've seen thus far.
Also, confound this damned button! It will not let me upvote twice!
Sweet mother of holy flying spaghetti balls, I love you Anon.
2383253 DAMIT that pic wife get the lube the power just cam back on ill be back just need to get my oil friend vodka
Somebody's got game...
Nobody else got the Eddie Murphy RAW reference? Disappoint.
Nopony can do a hot & passionate, lustful clop scene quite like you AP. I hope next chapter Spits gets to join in on the fun, maybe with some assistance from Dashie's toy chest
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EDDIE
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE FOR ME LATELY?!
Woohooo! So glad I checked back on this story!
Heh, I was suspecting that Spitfire knew what there were doing from the start. I wonder if she was acting like she didn't notice anything because she was messing with them, or because she was just used to that stuff. I am curious about the story from the Wonderbolts' locker room too…
“Contains tsundere Rainbow Dash, (…)” - taken from story description
I reread that and realized something. Japan is not alone adopting in the area of adopting foreign words into their own vocabulary. Although they do it rather quicker due to English being commonly taught in school. (We only had Spanish and French classes available at mine. )
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EDDIE.
I AM AN AMERICAN WOMAN NOW.
I WANT WHAT'S COMING TO ME.
I could have sworn i had already posted that this chapter was awesome...
Whatever.
This chapter was awesome. Thanks, AP.
Heh that was hot!
2235711 Exactly. Its sort of like comparing Dark Knight Rises and The Avengers. Yeah, they're in the same sort of genre (Superhero movies & Clopfics) but they each do it in a different way.
*Spit-take* ROFL
2548017 That was 15 weeks ago
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I'm crazy I don't care about time
That ending was so much better than the threesome I was expecting!
So, I'm wondering if I should read this or not. It seems interesting from the description, but having just finished Ingress, I'm worried that I'm going to run into the same abusive, misanthropic parts mixed in for no apparent reason. I haven't seen any comments talking about the protagonist being a moron, so that does make me want to look, but I noticed several comments about the abusive stuff.
So, I guess I'll just ask before reading. Are the ponies in this fic as abusive and rude as they were in Ingress?
Well, that's ONE WAY to ride a pony!
2740283 20 weeks old, dude.
spitfire aint dat stupid dashy
2758728 Hmm... I see.
You uh... you like that word "cunny" a lot, dontchya? And "plothole"... I dunno, I always preferred "ham wallet" and "pink sock," respectively.
It's been over 3 months since you last updated! Are you still working on it? Or are you just too busy on other story's?
2937435 If you follow me, you know I've written heaps of other things in those three months.
2937973 I do follow you! I think I've read about half your stories. But i didn't think to check the times they were posted.
2938100 Well, since the last chapter of this, I've written a milky way story, a nightmare moon ingress story, more affliction, and more affliction clop.
2938210 Well I know I couldn't do that in a month! Forgiven?
2938271 Frogiven~
Although it's pretty cool, I find it hard to read. Too much fucking, too little of everything else. Those type of fics got their own value, but you don't watch porn thinking "what will happen next in the storyline", so for me it should stop at being oneshot, or go beyond fucking every five minutes. Better example of this type of story? "Gentleman for Mares".
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I know this comment is over two years old, but by crikey, I only read it today and had to put me 2c in.
Hey Gus, what the fuck does Goonie-goo-goo mean?
P.s. Finally glad to see a fellow Aussie in here.
caught on
her
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Definition of Cottoned on
to begin to understand a situation or fact
Example
I'd only just cottoned on to the fact that they were having a relationship.
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/british/cotton-on
5862812 YEEEEEESSS!!!! I love you!
Don't bring a Big Foot in my home, Gus! The bitch can't talk, she can't walk a flight of steps. She's not trained well, Gus! Sh can not walk steps. I bet sh climb the fuck outta tree though, don't she, Gus?
Also: Aussies rule!