Very funny with Lionel being dragged to the skies as Rainbow Dash was filled with satisfaction as she witness him being afraid of heights. Well done I have to say. Keep up the good work
Lionel reminds me of Neku from The World Ends With You: He's uncaring, solace, unsocial, and prefers to do what he wants and get on with his own life then interact with others.
And yet he is still a likable character, despite his weaknesses. Good show, AP. I also like Rainbow Dash as a tsundere, especially the way she stays in character, even as a tsundere. The great thing about Lionel is that he is not afraid to push off the tsundere.
Good chapter, but i'm confused on what happened on the roof. Either there isn't enough description or i'm failing to see the obvious. Was Lionel actually laying on a cloud with RB? Or was he on top of her? Like, what stopped him from falling through?
Rereading that bit, i think i'm getting it, but i feel it could have used some more detail. Rainbow dash flung Lionel up to a cloud, flew up to it quicker than he fell, and landed on it so that he would land on her. That all happened in two sentences, and there is no mention of a cloud until a couple paragraphs later. You just have to get that from the context, which i didn't the first time around.
I dunno, maybe that's just me overthinking a scene while trying to figure it out. No one else seems to have had a problem with it, but food for thought.
So how many chapters will we have to wait before the tension gets too thick to cut with a knife and these two just rip off clothes and go at it like wild beasts? I'm rather looking forward to the destruction as any available surface is used to prop Dash up.
If nothing else happens, I know he'll have one guest staying at the hotel next year during the off-season. *Wink wink, nudge nudge, knowwhatImean*
The pegasus’ lower half was completely exposed though, and her odd position became immediately apparent. Rainbow Dash’s legs were splayed, her rump lifted into the air and tail pushed aside. With her chest on the floor, her forehooves were freed up to push between her hindlegs, and a violently pink vibrator was being pushed and rubbed against her drooling cunt with an urgent motion of her hooves.
I certainly hope Lionel uses this to get back at rainbow soon when she messes with him again. Or at least does something, cause I hate when the guy just let's the girl walk all over him. This story just has everything I want :D
(And why do I feel like when rainbow said she didn't believe him, her plan was to get him to do it to her?)
DASH CALLS HUMANS WIMPS?! WHO ARE THE ONES THAT WENT OUT IN OVER 500 DIFFERENT WARS IN THE LAST 1000 YEARS OR SO? AND WHO WHERE JUST SITTING THERE,PRETENDING NOTHING WAS HAPPENING AND BEING ALL HAPPY AND SHIT? i'm not being serious right now but seriously dash,humans?wimps? no
3388220 I agree. Humans are as dangerous as shit and love blowing shit up. Example: Stalin, Mao-Tse-Tung, Hitler, Hiroshima and Nagasaki.....yeah I thinks thats enough of a list. XD Of course, i'm just being funny about the whole thing. keep that in mind.
Very funny with Lionel being dragged to the skies as Rainbow Dash was filled with satisfaction as she witness him being afraid of heights. Well done I have to say. Keep up the good work
Well this was a fun update! I lol'd, nice little surprise at the end there. Me Gusta
That was awesome! Here, have some cloud! t1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRhPPvutj1--xn9aBha21-DH8BloY4UK7A4K_HD315SoBJPHuGA
this is good
lol the ending was so awkward keep up the good work
So he's trained in the art of wingboner and has no qualms about human/pony relations..........I like where this is going.
Lionel reminds me of Neku from The World Ends With You:
He's uncaring, solace, unsocial, and prefers to do what he wants and get on with his own life then interact with others.
And yet he is still a likable character, despite his weaknesses. Good show, AP.
I also like Rainbow Dash as a tsundere, especially the way she stays in character, even as a tsundere. The great thing about Lionel is that he is not afraid to push off the tsundere.
Good chapter, but i'm confused on what happened on the roof. Either there isn't enough description or i'm failing to see the obvious. Was Lionel actually laying on a cloud with RB? Or was he on top of her? Like, what stopped him from falling through?
Rereading that bit, i think i'm getting it, but i feel it could have used some more detail. Rainbow dash flung Lionel up to a cloud, flew up to it quicker than he fell, and landed on it so that he would land on her. That all happened in two sentences, and there is no mention of a cloud until a couple paragraphs later. You just have to get that from the context, which i didn't the first time around.
I dunno, maybe that's just me overthinking a scene while trying to figure it out. No one else seems to have had a problem with it, but food for thought.
Good chapter, i will continue to read.
My immediate reaction to reading this:
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And if I was drinking:
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HAHAHAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHHA, I love it when when stories do the I caught you mastubating thing.
awesome
Oh please do update soon.
"her ears splaying back as he pushed harder at the ground with her hindhooves,": I guess "he" → "she"
"masseuse. Ponty studies were very": "pony"
Uh, the what studies?
So how many chapters will we have to wait before the tension gets too thick to cut with a knife and these two just rip off clothes and go at it like wild beasts? I'm rather looking forward to the destruction as any available surface is used to prop Dash up.
If nothing else happens, I know he'll have one guest staying at the hotel next year during the off-season. *Wink wink, nudge nudge, knowwhatImean*
Boy, does Robin Williams have a lot to explain to you.
bow chicka bow wow
Here's what I would have done I would lean back against the door of the room smugly and say sooooooo.........
2005375
Fuck crooke
2005366
got any pictures of yer wife? eh, eh eh? knowwattta mean eh? mums the word eh? bobs yer uncle eh?
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Commence read.
Now to see what the vote holds up.
I want an image of this!
Kidding
2007408 I want an image of it too.
2007425
We all do
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2007427>>2007425 It's amazing....something even Google can't find!!!
Is this turning into a clopfic?
2008404
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2008517
I'll be taking that as a yes, then.
Have you ever played "The World Ends With You"?
2008520 Don't think so.
2008529
Sorry, but Lionel reminds me of Neku (from the game)
I explained why earlier in the comments
2008517
But Menege a trois is not a romance. It's just a sex story.
I certainly hope Lionel uses this to get back at rainbow soon when she messes with him again. Or at least does something, cause I hate when the guy just let's the girl walk all over him.
This story just has everything I want :D
(And why do I feel like when rainbow said she didn't believe him, her plan was to get him to do it to her?)
Not the biggest fan of clop, but this looks like it might get pretty hilarious, so I just gotta keep an eye on this and see what'll happen next...
2007408
You might not want to see this but dear lord I WANT A PICTURE. OR even better this to actually happening to me.....
2028769
I do,actually
2005095
Hello again
2037653 Hello!
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2008404
Really?
2003350
Dude, you're freaking everywhere! It seems like every other fic I read has at least one comment from you!
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Because the rating didn't hint to that at all.
Lionel's reaction?
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yup lost my shit
DASH CALLS HUMANS WIMPS?! WHO ARE THE ONES THAT WENT OUT IN OVER 500 DIFFERENT WARS IN THE LAST 1000 YEARS OR SO? AND WHO WHERE JUST SITTING THERE,PRETENDING NOTHING WAS HAPPENING AND BEING ALL HAPPY AND SHIT? i'm not being serious right now but seriously dash,humans?wimps? no
3388220 I agree. Humans are as dangerous as shit and love blowing shit up. Example: Stalin, Mao-Tse-Tung, Hitler, Hiroshima and Nagasaki.....yeah I thinks thats enough of a list. XD Of course, i'm just being funny about the whole thing. keep that in mind.
3388220 Wimps, no, morons, very much so
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