More Than A Promise

Rarity is very ill, and has been for several months. So when she finds out she's pregnant, she asks Twilight to raise the baby if anything goes wrong.

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Siras-chi

Siras-chi #1 · Sep 15th, 2013 · 1 · ·

That is sad.

mbpony 512

mbpony 512 #2 · Sep 15th, 2013 · · ·

So...where's Spike in this tale ?

Exodus45

Exodus45 #3 · Sep 15th, 2013 · 1 · ·

It seemed a bit rushed.

articunos bitch

articunos bitch #4 · Sep 15th, 2013 · · ·

Hmm. I would say you missed a lot of background, but this is the intro to a much longer story so I see why. But, why wouldn't Rares trust Applejack with her baby? She's clearly the best mother to be of all Mane 6 right? <shrug>
I look forward to this. Will track. I have subscribed to you so when you post an update that will appear on my feed right?

Drakkith

Drakkith #5 · Sep 15th, 2013 · · ·

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Way, way rushed.

Author, it would help to slow things down a bit. Do you know what that means? (Not making fun of you, I'm asking in case you don't really know)

Prince_Dark_Bane

Prince_Dark_Bane #6 · Sep 15th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Beautiful man (or girl) just beautiful.(sniffing a little after crying for five minutes)

Arctic

Arctic #7 · Sep 16th, 2013 · · ·

Well shit. Good first chapter if a little rushed. can't wait for more

MagicalEntaty

MagicalEntaty #8 · Jan 10th, 2015 · · ·

RARITY NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! wait what about her daughter what her name rarity should have at least named her and God when will the next chapter come out I have too many questions