Sixty five million years ago was the end of the Dinosaurs. but, by the slimest of events occur, five predatory birds find themselves where the land where predators are scarce and prey is rampant.
will they prove themselves worthy of this second chance? or will they blow it like their ancestors?
not sure if i just like dinosaurs... or that this is an interesting concept. i am willing to see where this goes though
This looks like a good story keep it up.
Not bad, not bad at all. Do continue, you've got me interested
Hmm, not bad. I'll give an upvote. Please do another
Raptors, my favorite type of dinosaur!
Keep going with this, there definitely aren't enough (if any really) of these.
Me like please continue.
bit confusing but sounds like you know where you are going. i will be watching you carefully now.
Few grammar mistakes here and there. Seemed a little rushed I think. Good though
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thats what happens when i make a chapter in about an hour
Mutha flipping dinosaurs. Yes please.
needs more OMNOMNOM
Ever since I was little dromeasaurids have always been my favorite dinosaur, and I guess I only clicked on this because of that, but seriously man - I like what you've got going on here. It's a little too early for me to really stamp 'good' or 'bad', but I shall continue to watch!
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if i did that, there would be no conflct between the ponies and the raptors.
and besides, Pod already munched on some of Fluttershy's pets.
So awesome.
A crossover with Dinosaur Planet? Never thought I'd see this.
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yes, you found the refrence.
you win
Raptors...
it makes me happy to see this, I don't know where you came up with the idea but bravo good sir.
From what I've seen so far (and their dipictions in the documentary), I'm going to guess Pod and White Tip are going to become goood guys eventually.
Frank.... I like that name.
can we name him Squishy? and will he be your Squishy forever?
My god... Dinosaurs and ponies. My two favorite things, now in one story. I fucking love you man.
Frank is pretty awesome.
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imagiane his voice is british, like Pod's.
Frank is best bird.
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bad squishy...
How is it that I'm only now noticing this is a reference to Dinosaur Planet, one of my three childhood favorite TV shows? Along with Walking with Dinosaurs and When Dinosaurs roamed America. (Shut up I'm not a fucking nerd)
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did you record dinosaur planet on vcr?
i know i sure as hell did
1918836 I can't even remember anymore, I know I owned a bunch of dinosaur video tapes though,
Pod has always been my favorite raptor, its kinda wierd seeing him as the villain
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who said he was the villian?
1951064maybe I shouldn't of jumped to conclusion right away...
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its ok, he does seem to fit the more 'vilianous' appierance. its not surprising that someone might think that.
the real villian is someone you'll least expect.
Moar?
Prepare yourself, White tip.
OCD unicorns are dangerous when wounded.... with curiousity.
NEW CHAPTER
I like this story a lot. There needs to be more Dino in equestria stories.
This... will either end badly or brilliantly, depending on your view of the world.
*eye twitch* There should be a 'n' between the 'o' and 'y'.
Yeah, I can see a lot of spelling errors.
The story idea is interesting, though.
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hmm, i never could remember how to spell it.
also, where are the other errors? i need to find them
I wish for more of this delectable story!
maybe I should add these five to my story.... It would be like that scene in the first JP movie, except that would be in twilight's library and Ethan would be replacing dear old T.Rex.
Take as much time as you need. Inspiration is important, and I won't mind waiting for this to update.
I am deeply saddened by this decision, but see your point.
I hope for a swift conclusion to any problems and offer my assistance!
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wait...
are you the Spino story guy!?
2127087 yep, and I am still with Pinkie after she adopted me as a pet. f
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nice.
also, i would be honored if Pod, White tip, Red Claw, Pounce and Frost were in your story.
2127300 I'll see about that, it has to depend whether a certain draconeequs decides to make life hell by turning me into a spinozilla.
size comparison, Apex to person.
check out my latest blog thingy for Frost's, Pounce's and White tip's heights.
upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/1/1d/Tarbosaurusscale.png
You do realize that Tyrannosaurid did not have any feathers. It have been scientifically proven that they didn't in fact have any feathers at all as first thought.
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hush, and just roll with it