Life can be cruel. These nine have been through hell. Their bodies deformed and broken, the only thing that kept them going was this: survival. But, is there light at the bottom of the pit they've fallen into? Or is it a whole new meaning of torture?
You know, it's sad how many authors neglect the poor, shivering, orphaned, short description.
By the way, ninjaing Regidar, here.
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my sister was singing that when i got the idea
i love it
This is awesome!! Keep up the good work
Gave you a thumb for the title alone, gunna read later
Huh you remembered the witches sugar addiction.
Nice, on my watch list.
One question: Who is screamer?
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a cut infected from the first game. i decided it would be interesting to include him
http://left4dead.wikia.com/wiki/The_Screamer
You better work on raptor I've been waiting for a new update forever in that and this fic
Ps great job
(Joke) Alt. Title: Live And Let Suffer
I love it! Could use a few fixes though...
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what needs to be fixed?
2027218 Alot...Spelling errors, Capitalization, and some parts don't make sense
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ok, i'll get right on to fixing thise whenever i can
Two different, good Left 4 Dead crossovers?
Anyway, this is absolutely brilliant. Each infected acts like themselves, with just a little intelligence added. I'm really enjoying this so far.
When either Witch or Tank freaks out....
Oh dear.
Let's hope that doctor has plenty of sedatives... Maybe some stun guns as well.
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if Hunter needs the amount an adult tiger needs then they're going to run of of sedatives fast
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Hey on my chapter I announced it in the AN go check it out
Chech
* Check
Bester
* Better
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bester was intentional
I would have thought witch would have gone with but maybe that would be too obvious.
Oh dear.... They're split up, and they can still go loco at any moment...
This ain't good.
If you and SCP are still having that contest, I vote for this one. I really feel a tension in this story, waiting for the bomb to finally go off, so to speak.
Also, who was the idiot who stuck Witch with RD? That's a disaster just waiting to happen.
Finally, Screamer's retort about Rainbows...
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well, Tank is at RD's house
>>Dihinner
Wait, what? I thought Tank was staying with Applejack.
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who is the other Tank that we know of?
the green one?
Oh, right.
"I like turtles!"
2107980 It says up there that Witch is going to RD's, not tanks.
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Rainbow has a pet named Tank.
why does nobody remember that?
Make it Clear that NOBODY REMEMBERS TANK THE TURTLE!
Tortoise you idiot!
TANK THE TORTOISE!
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when have i ever called him a turtle?
2113711 Everyone mistakes for a turtle... he's a tortoise
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indeed
Jockey's theme should be "There coming to take me away."
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never heard of it.
link it?
I think this should work.
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huh
well, that easily ties into a part i'm going to do with Screamer in the next chapter.
there was a reason Screamer was put away.
he knows too much for his own good
P.S. (its a origin chapter, it works well for Jockey)
Witch with rainbow?
oh lord
2127196 i had totally forgotten that song
thank you
animal i have become - three days grace
get out alive - three days grace
blood on my hands - the used
perfect insanity - disturbed
had enough - danko jones
slow burn - atreyu
blow - atreyu
so far away - avenge sevenfold (if smoker wants to go back for a reason)
just some suggestions, don't know if any of those fit
in any case i really like your story. compared to SCP Pinkamena's story, your's have a lot more actual story. keep the good shit coming cus im liking this
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you don't know how fucking perfect so far away fits into my plans.
like, its nearly dead on perfect to what i have planed later
2127638 it would seem that great minds do think alike
have a good day sir, i look forward to the inevitable drama that that song indicates
Confusing Chapter.... I told you In a chapter I will explain every thing.
Hmmm.
I got nothing. No cookie for me I guess
The blue eye moron is Wheatley from Portal 2.
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have a cookie.
unfortunetly i don't know how to put pictures on this but use your imagination
2136960 "YAY! COOKIE!" I said as I pick the cookie and take a bite out of it. "Thank you!"
ack... conflicting emotion.
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given the speed i can write chapters sometimes, i'll probably update this by sunday