• Member Since 29th Aug, 2012
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Dihinner


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The end has come for Equestria. The moon is falling from the sky and nopony knows why.

Exept for a young colt and filly.

They are the only thing that stands in the way of life and a brutal death.


inspiered by Nintendo's Legend of Zelda: Majora's mask and all the depressing 'apocolyptic' stories recently.

for info concerning updates, check my blog thing.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 45 )

don't worry

i still have the cheeseburger apocolypce and the bionicle one on my mind

Awesome when comes next chapter

So, this isn't really a 'Zelda' crossover... It's a 'Majora's Mask' crossover. I know, I know, Majora is from Zelda, but from what I see, you aren't putting much emphasis on that.

Other than that (and several punctuation and tense errors), this is a good first chapter. Hope you finish it.

I've never beat Majora's Mask yet. I am really close, however; I'm on the canyon dungeon now. I'll get back to you when I finish the game.

I now beg of thee, please make more, the game was so awesome and I can tell this could be just as good, if not better.

1604523 nah, no spoiler for me. Thanks anyway, though.

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appier to have done something right...

*checks later* 1 dislike

trolls...

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uuuuuuuuum, I might read this later.:unsuresweetie: I LOVE Majoras mask, and anything related to it, but the very short chapter is kinda turning me off.

I'll check it again later, don't you worry!:scootangel:

thanks to you all this is n the popular stories list.

this calls for...


CHAPTER TWO!!!:pinkiecrazy:

So the forest first, just like the game, I can't wait to see what evil monster you make up for the villain. Maybe something like skull ponies?

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nope

that comes in later

(sorta)

He pulled out a BOOT titled: ' History of Ancient Equestria'

*stares at his feet.*

*thinks*

If anything, wouldn't it be a horse shoe?

LOL

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would you belive i wrote chapter 1 with that song playing the entire time?

'cause i did

Skeleton ponies, I KNEW IT! also on a criticizer note, I saw that you forgot to finish words and sentences, so it might be a good idea to double check before uploading to help prevent that in the future, but still a great story so far.

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i did?

can you tell me which ones 'cause i cant find them.

>>Dihinner in the third chapter, you called link "lin", you can't forget the k, and I can't find the one sentence, but there was a word missing that I knew should have been there, just remember to triple check after the double check to make sure you didn't miss anything when you double checked it.

what's this?

could it be?!

IT IS!

UPDATE!

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actually, i was never gone at all.

just working on a diffrent story

1737305 I meant I was happy you returned to this story.

Ah yes, the dreaded Bush Dungeon, home to the Mirror Shield. Not the most difficult dungeon perhaps, but it is still not one for the weak of heart.

I really like the idea behind this story, but it does feel pretty rushed.

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bush dugeon?

you mean the gibdo well?

Link already got the mirror sheid back.

this is the equestrian countepart of Snowhead

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I meant how it took him two paragraphs to find the shield, which was just lying there under a bush. It just doesn't seem very Zelda-y.

that was a cool story...so far

awesome. cant wait for the next chapter.

thus feeling. I know it

Dood, that's gonna be awesome!

WHO CARES ? TAKE YOUR TIME OR I'LL KILL YOU !

Of course they can't push the moon back into orbit Link.
1. that would be too easy and a bad/boring story.
And 2. They couldn't do it the first time they tried while you were in Ponyville, so of course they wouldn't be able to now. That's the problem with time travel, people make the same mistakes over and over again.

Reading this story is about as frustrating to my Grammar Nazi side as beating the Water Temple in Majora's Mask was to my gamer side. As a point of interest, I never finished said temple, just as I'm not going to finish your story, or even this sente

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hence why I'm going to re do it

ok. so I'll unfav this since (for some strange reason) it wont get out of my fav box though i read all the chapters. An since apparently I dont have to worry about it updateing again. I dont need it faved anymore. No offense. I liked the story and I just wanted to give you a reason why I'm unfaving it

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