Great so far. :)

It's funny how these kind of fan-fictions are becoming more prominent than the actual Gary Stus we hate.

Hmmm I'm interested on seeing how this story will pan out but more interested on how everypony will behave once the curse is gotten rid off on how they will interect with emeris compared to the other story

i see this ending in one of two ways, either Emeris curse is broken and he manages to find a home and live his life though probably with years of counselling though seeing how the ponies react when its broken would be interesting. the other way is that eventually the curse proves to much and emeris decides to end it, though i hope that doesnt happen

Well, isn't this all sweetness and light?

Hm. I'd love to see the reaction to the typical comeback for "Go to hell"

Emeris looked at the sobbing mare with eyes just as rimmed with tears. "I'm already there."

As said above, if he manages to get the curse broken again, it would be most interesting seeing as how the others would react to him and how they'd interact with him.

Though this does have Tragedy tagged. . .

fantastic, as usual

Interesting. Good to see a different take on this concept.

So how's this for a dark ending:

Emeris tries to kill himself (or get Celestia to do it) due to all the devastation he keeps inadvertently causing, but his power renders him unable to die. This leads to either:

A) He ends up being imprisoned / exiled far away from Equestria where he cannot do any more damage.

B) He gets his powers stripped as per the original story, and while everyone feels horrible for their treatment of him (inverting his treatment in the main story) he is unable to cope with the trauma and guilt.

C) You cut the poor guy some slack!

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>>18182741818274

I know, evolving "meta-game" I guess. I just hope this one's worth the look

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>>18184331818433

>>18187181818718

I do try to warn you

>>18188651818865

... I have got to find an opportunity to work that in.

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>>18191321819132

Happy to provide!

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>>18203291820329

So how's this for a dark ending:

Emeris tries to kill himself (or get Celestia to do it) due to all the devastation he keeps inadvertently causing, but his power renders him unable to die. This leads to either:

A) He ends up being imprisoned / exiled far away from Equestria where he cannot do any more damage.

B) He gets his powers stripped as per the original story, and while everyone feels horrible for their treatment of him (inverting his treatment in the main story) he is unable to cope with the trauma and guilt.

C) You cut the poor guy some slack!

Well, what the hell. Bring it on!

Though, you did ask permission to use the character, right?

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Yes, I checked with myself, it went a bit something like this:

Andoriol: Hey, me, can I use this character for this plot bunny?

Andoriol: I don't know me, it's kinda dark.

Andoriol: But it could be totally awesome and poignant and cool!

Andoriol: Again, very dark.

Andoriol: We haven't flexed our writing muscles much y'know, and writing creepypasta/horror isn't something we've tried before.

Andoriol: True, but still, do we really want to torture him like that?

Andoriol: Duh?

Andoriol: Touche. But what would be the point of it? We shouldn't just torture the character just to torture him.

Andoriol: I have an awesome idea, see?

Andoriol: Hmm, true, that could be rather heart-wrenching... Alright me, you can use him.

Andoriol:

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Man, you also took his user name? I do not want to know the conversation on that!

Awww, so in this story Celestia adopt Emeris as his son, that explain the whole prince thing, that is a very nobel gesture from her, I can't wait to see how this will continue and how did she will get rip of the curse

So when they remove his curse the reception the general population's reaction would probably be the opposite from the other story?

I can't figure out the comment that started mind clearing it up a bit I'm a bit confused

also DEPRESSING AS ! but really brilliant

I'd prefer it to be lighter, but it is still interesting.

However for me personally Emeris's interactions with other ponies after curse is lifted (if you plan any not dark ending of course) is much more interesting.

Launched into the earth's core, enjoy your eternal hellfire emo kid~!

Well, way I see it, when (or if) they get to the curse removal it'll either remove the curse and leave him as an Earth Pegasus (as opposed to an Earth Unicorn) or, and this one's more likely in my opinion, since the Element's of Harmony were needed to remove the curse in the original story they'll only make things worse.  Think about it, when they were first used on Nightmare Moon, they banished her to the moon for 1000 years instead of turning her back to Luna.  Here, not only is Emeris/Nega-Gary (what I'm calling him) a source of chaos, but the mane six get all, well...(no angry Rarity icon sadly).  The results won't be pretty.  I'm putting money on what >>20033402003340 said and he'll be banished to the core and burn!  And of course, being the Elements of Harmony, they'd make it as painful as possible.  When/If he gets out, he'd be insane!

...shit, I just gave you an idea didn't I?

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No comment~ Spoilerz.

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Sadly, this is supposed to be a bit depressing. But what are you confused about? I'll try to help

>>19968481996848

Glad you like it, hope you'll enjoy what I do with it once I get to that point

>>20033402003340

Ya gotta admit though, he's got better reasons to be emo than most

That said, he shouldn't come across as whiny, sad and a little emo (in the negative connotation of the word)? Yes. But not whiny. If he has, please tell me.

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No comment~ Spoilerz

>>21247582124758

it's not too bad, I was just getting in on the action

>>21247582124758

Looking forward to see it. :)

Although I hope work with Twisted reflections will not delay one of my favorite fics (I mean Consequences of course) too much.

>>21247582124758 the comment which inspired this

...why doesn't he just off himself?

Well, okay, then there'd be no story, but I can imagine it'd be a solution that would cross most people's minds and there's just no mention of it in his dialogue as to why he didn't do it.