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Queen Chrysalis wants revenge on Twilight Sparkle. She ruins her life, making her the Queen of the Changelings and hiding her natural body away. Now, with, everypony chasing her for crimes she didn't commit, she must find a way back before her soul is lost. forever.
*EDIT: I am cancelling this story, as I am losing interest in the MLP series as a whole. Basically, I have lost interest in my story, as well as the show. I am sorry if you were expecting more chapters.*
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This interests me.
Please continue.
If Twilight was smart about this, just think about the tactical applications for this. a little truth potion and Twilight has to tell the truth from Chrysalis's point of view. she could tell them what happened to Twilight, how to fix this, what Chrysalis's plans are, where the hive is... this would be an even bigger blunder then the wedding.
The potion making her tell the factual truth rather than what she believes to be truth makes no sense. If it worked like that then what's stopping you from learning everything ever with such a potion?
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Sorry for the mix-up! In the story I meant it to be a DEFECT potion. Should I try to change it?
this is so OOC, but so awesome
it's like watching an ed wood movie
i want to say it's bad, but it's just too much fun to read
good job
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Thank you!
More please? This has potential, I can see that clearly.
Can I please have some more?
Another body swap?
Btw reminds me of
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2233156 That's hilarious.
will twilight get back into chryssys body?
after all thats why i started reading this^^
and what is chrys. doing with cadences body^^
You (the author) cram much nonsense into a short-chapter fic. I gaze at the fic critically. I nod sagely, refrain from facepalming, and continue to read and wait.
Spongebob Squarepants movie reference?
Well, this is really good, in fact much better that I was expecting, and it got very interesting towards later chapters. Good job so far, keep it up
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This is on my "Read it Later" list but, to be honest, that attitude grates on me. Some of us like to be a bit more discerning and I can't help but think in terms of a scale of -2 through to +2.
I can compact the negatives and positives into "thumb down" and "thumb up", but it just doesn't feel right to bias zero in either direction. I suppose, since you asked for it, you could earn a star and a thumbs down if, once I read your story, I decide it's interesting enough to follow but didn't earn a thumbs up.
Narnia reference?
3102420 Dang, that is probably the third time somebody has asked me about if something is a referance! No, not alot of my stories hace referances, and that is not a narnia one. Sorry! It's different.
For anybody who has been waiting for another chapter, I haven't gotten one done in a while. My computer broke down and I do not have any access to one except for at the library. At the moment im writings this on a tablet. I'll get one done asap. This story isn't dead.
Holy Snot.
"Looks like your finally awake." = "Looks like her finally awake."
What you want is "Looks like you're finally awake."
I tried but the spelling errors make me want to smash my head into the wall
how exactly is applejack okay with this?
Huh....well...it's a very entertaining story, so nice job!
Wow, I can see why this was abandoned. This is just throwing crap at the wall to see what sticks.
(I stumbled across this randomly, saw that I'd read half of it in some distant time, and decided to reread it.)
This premise looks incredibly interesting, but seeing your message in the description has made me think to ask this:
Should I even start reading if you are not going to finish it? Also, you've really lost (lossed?) interest in the show? That's so sad...
5997987 I mean, you can start reading it as it may entertain you, but I will most likely not come back to it. At least for right now, anyways (finals and crap). As for losing interest in the show, It's more like gaining more interest in other things to the point where the other interests overshadow the show...
But, just saying, if I were to go back to it I'd edit most of it to get a better result. As 'FinalFan' puts it: "Wow, I can see why this was abandoned. This is just throwing crap at the wall to see what sticks."
5999978 Ah. Well, I'll think about it. I generally don't like to start a story if it's going to have cliff-hangers that don't get resolved. I don't know yet though.
Sorry! And the story was interesting. Apparently I had never read it until the end.
Wow, so out of character for everyone of them. the premise is interesting and that's what im reading for but I do recommend you get an editor or proof reader on this, or a spell check.
That's a giant red flag of what's the quality of this story.
The good parts are the emotional parts.
The logical explanation parts.... are pure garbage.
A little overhaul and this can be a good story.
The fuck? How does that even work?
too short, confusing.