The day before the royal wedding, Twilight Sparkle and friends wake up to find themselves in the Everfree Forest - All as different animals.
Now, lost and separated, they must find their way to Canterlot to somehow stop an evil being from invading their land.
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Cool I like it can't wait till the next chapter is out
Outside of that though (and the possible need for an 'alternative universe' tag), this has the possibility to be a very cute little fic!
All I can really suggest is to slow it down a bit. Beyond that your spelling and grammar are good and the premise is very interesting! Keep it up!
Seems a bit rushed, and the writing could use improvement in a few other areas, but I like the premise. I'll have to keep an eye out for updates to this fic, just in case you decide to return to it.
La la la la la la la
Can't wait till next chapter!!!!
Update!
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Well this has potential to be interesting you just need to slow the pacing down some, being a bit more descriptive wouldn't hurt and watch out for those grammer and spelling errors, a pre-reader would help immensely with that, I shall now proceed to await the continuation of this story.
2894568 No singing! You are making this serious story to silly so stop!
It's abandonned right ?
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Oh, yeah. All my stories are, sorry.
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Hello darkness my old friend