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K.J. Cragon


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Scootaloo finds out that, with the right piece of mind and willpower, you can switch somepony else's cutie mark, even if you don't have one. So, naturally, she tries to switch everypony's cutie mark, with no success.

Thinking that she got cheated out of another cutie mark opportunity, she goes to check on her friends. What she finds there might just be a disaster... or an opportunity.

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Comments ( 22 )

Yeah... I would use the scootangel emote, but that just doesn't fit for this one. So... Have a trollestia instead. :trollestia:

This is actually very interesting. I'll keep on reading it if you keep on writing it.

Thanks for the positive comments :) I was originally going to make this a two parter. Do you guys think that it should turn into something more? If so what would you like to happen? I will most likely not make it exactly off of reader ideas, but I might base stuff from them. :moustache:

This is pretty interesting, I don't think I've read anything similar to this in quite a while. It's certainly a good idea, however perhaps you could build on the whole "imagine-you-have-a-cutie-mark" idea? The idea of just imagining and willing it sounded just too... plain for me. Maybe some kind of dormant magic lying inside Scootaloo involved, or something along the lines of that? Like, how Pegasi can manipulate clouds and such. Although, you probably have your own ideas about how the whole magic-cutie-mark idea will pan out.
It was a nice twist with Twilight Sparkle going :twilightoops: and that particular section was very well-written (in my own opinion, at least). Iron Will x Fluttershy shipping is an interesting idea as well, although it seems rather out-of-character for Iron Will to be nervous about asking out somepony. But, hey; that's just me, and it was needed to move the story along. :derpytongue2:

Also, I happened to spot some slight errors whilst reading; if you ever need a proofreader, I'll be happy to lend a hoof. :raritywink:

yeah...i'm confused but it sounds cool :scootangel:

1637993 What confuses you? I might be able to explain :duck:

This is so strange and so awesome at the same time that there's only one simile that would make sense. This fic is like Pinkie Pie. :pinkiehappy:

Seems very interesting and I'll look forward to the next part. :rainbowwild:

no fluttermac disgusting

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Actually, I am not very big on 'FlutterMac' 'cause I think it is used for 'Shy's shipping a little too much. Then again, that might be because there are not many guys in the show :eeyup:

1650456 I hate fluttermac cause it has no basis in the show they've never interacted so it doesn't make sense

New chapter guys! Sorry, it was so long that I decided to cut the story short a little bit to put it out. Hope it is worth it!

1650531 I just hate how everyone seems to ship them, it gets old really fast and with the exception of maybe a few fanfic Fluttermac is a ship that has been done to death alongside Appledash. :eeyup:

Also it looks like Scootaloo accidentally caused Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Sweetie Belle, and Apple Bloom to swap bodies, well I know somepony who's gonna wish they could fly well. :duck:

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No, they didn't switch bodies. they switched something else... :rainbowkiss:

To some extent I could imagine this as an actual episode, although it would be Sweetie Belle who causes the mix up by trying to perform magic and messes up a spell leading to the body swapping. :eeyup:

Also Scootaloo your technique is impressive and you don't even have to yell "Change, Now!" Just wait till I tell Captain Ginyu. :rainbowlaugh:

1690704 Thank you Thats why i stick with Flutterdash

a slow start but now it looks like is picking strenght well done now this is fav

Oh body the cutie mark is the window to the soul, this will not end well for

Wait, this has happened before?

Comment posted by K.J. Cragon deleted Jun 11th, 2013

random anomaly, but Fluttershy's eyes aren't pink

Comment posted by K.J. Cragon deleted Jul 12th, 2014
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