This was it, the day Twilight became a full grown mare, and after a wild day of partying, she receives a note from the Princess, requesting that she comes to Canterlot to learn about an almost unheard of type of magic. But this type of magic feels...off to her, and she will come to find out what it really is, and why this magic has stayed a secret for so long.
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oh, well you shall get my standard probationary fave to track this as it looks interesting
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Well thank you! I hope the story will keep you interested all the way through!
sounds like Celestia knows a variation of Discord's magic, and Twilight's getting lessons. ohhhhhh horseapples.
Interesting .. interesting, heh. Nice premise, liked and faved
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Also, some minor things/typos:
Chapter 1:
see* (I think?)
Chapter 3:
what/who/whom or something alike? :)
I don't usually point this stuff out, I'm not that good at grammar and writing rules, so correct me if I'm wrong, heh.
Anyhow, here you used the word "rushed" twice in the same sentence. One suggestion that popped into my mind was to add some words the second one; "rushed after her", or "rushed to her side for her bags", or something alike.
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Please, take no offence in me pointing this stuff out, heh, just trying to be helpful
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I think Twilight should not accept this.
whats twi gonna do?!?!?!?!?!?!
2019024
Maybe, or maybe it's something even more chaotic than Discord (Dun, dun, dun!)
2019055
Fixed, fixed, and fixed! Thank you for pointing them out, anything to help the story read/flow better!
And thank you for the kind words, hopefully I can crank out another chapter by tonight/tomorrow, since this ice storm has stopped me from leaving my house. 
2019433
But you know Twilight, she always has to get herself into some kind of shenanigans.
2019526
Probably cry, she's been doing that a lot lately. Maybe they'll learn a spell where she stops crying...forever
You know, using the void should be considered illegal. Just saying.
*GASP*
twilight nuuuuuuuuu 
why'd you do it? 
cant complain though... id probably want to learn it to
lol keep wrighting! 
Stupid Celestia , you are giving this king of knowledge to a unicorn with OCD and a unhealthy need to learn , really ?
Oh , Trollestia....
Faved for tracking purpose.
Wow.......just...wow.... I LOVE this story... Please.... Don't stop
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It's really Luna who keeps Equestria together, Celestia is just the face of the operation
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Thank you so much for the kind words! It means way more than you know!
I don't plan on stopping anytime soon, and I'm trying to stick to my "Every other day" schedule I've managed to keep so far! Hooves crossed it'll stay that way!
Rather short chapter, to be quite honest. Didn't have as much time as before, but I'll make up for it next chapter, promise!
I honestly thought this would be an average twicorn fic
But I was completely wrong
ooh about to get messy I think, may take a few chapters but this has promise. so Discord was once a pony that got corrupted by void magic? nice
nice chapter mate
I'll be waiting for moar
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Well thank you! I aim to surpass expectations. Thanks for giving this story a chance!
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Celestia has never told Twilight how Discord is related to Void Magic, only that he is different than normal ponies. Who knows how Discord is related to The Void!
But I'm betting you won't have to wait long to find out
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Thank you once again! It might be delayed for a few days, as work currently has me on a tight leash, but I shall be working on it with all my spare time, and hopefully get it by the fourth!
Interesting. The void is getting to Twilight, now.
This is getting interesting. I'm liking it. Yet I always like dark story's of beings or in this case twilight being taken over by some dark force and being corrupted.
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Something tells shit has hit the fan
Hello Defecation? This is Oscillation. Sorry for running into you the other day!
Yay update! keep 'em coming
Well, as soon as FIMFiction wants to cooperate, I'll have the new chapter up.
I'm gonna go on and put it out there, this may be one of the weakest chapters thus far. But it had to be done in order to get the story where it needed to be.
But it shouldn't happen again, so rest easy knowing that it was a one time thing! 
Hope you enjoy anyway!
nyawh crap.
I think void Twilight shoved real Twilight into the mirror and smashed it so Twilight couldn't get any help. interesting. I wonder what will happen next.
soon....very soon!!!
keep going mate
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Twi why'd you not tell Celestia about the creepy pony who smiled at you in the mirror??
ya should have told her!! now your ether corrupted, kept hostage and replaced by the evil you from the void, or simply this is all a bad dream! i really hope this is a bad dream!
but don't worry, your friends will always be here to help you through this
they will realize that's not actually "you" and help you!
MAKE MORE CHAPTERS!!!
insanity walks in their rows....
if you want it quick, trollestia gives it slow
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