When Time Turner saves Twilight Sparkle from an attack from strange creatures, he brings her along to find the source as well as a means to stop the threat before it takes over all of Equus. Twilight, along with Turner and his assistant Derpy, will search for those with the skills to help defeat the monsters but can Twilight keep her wits around Turner's (aka The Doctor) shenanigans and dimension jumping while still being able to save her home?
A/N: Crossover of Final Fantasy X and XII
Formerly Yu Yevon Strikes Back. Rewritten from the ground, up.
Cover is just something I found.
Chapters (1)
Story contains Auron?
Adding to my read later list! 
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Most likely in part 3 since Balthier is next on my list. What do you think of the story though?
Oh and... Auron is the ultimate bad ass!
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Not to mention hot!
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I WANT HIS OUTFIT!!
For me it's his outfit and attitude.
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I also love the way he does things, the moment in the dome when he saw his past self..
It made me sad
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When they first enter Zanarkand and saw his 'ghost'? havent played FFX in ages but yeah that made me feel sorry for him. he went almost quite literally through hell and back and you could see how it scarred him physically and emotionally. I hope I can pull it off when he is introduced.
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he is more reserved before he went to Zanarkand, but the "ghost" as you said is a projection of his past self, the dome records their memories and projects them back at those that are inside.
but yea.. i can almost see it, Fluttershy giving Auron a hug saying "it's okay"
i can almost remember all of FFX story, yay me
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I can see her do it too. It would be so funny. Sadly given his nature, Auron would not instantly open up and cry even to Fluttershy. He's a manly man. Suddenly the song 'I'll make a man out of you' from Mulan comes to mind. 
I still have FFX and remember quite a bit of it myself.
Hope you dont mind if i use that idea though it will be funny.
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....now i'm remembering that one too.. *watches it on youtube*
curse you for inciting disney songs!
but yea, he is a manly man.
but looking forward for next chapter
Auron was the only good thing in FFX. I'm reading this.
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Sorry about the reference but as i said earlier though I plan to bring Auron in come Part 3. Even tough it has been a while since I've played FFX, i have the wikis regarding them all bookmarked for reference and description purposes. I still remember how they acted tough. Thanks though, this kind of support helps push me on.
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He was the best part of FFX-2 despite only ever having a very minor speaking role. Sadly in my opinion FFX-2 failed in almost every aspect.
FFX on the other hoof had a decent twist in the end. I liked how they hinted to Auron being an Unsent though most would have figured it out before reaching Zanarkand
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I really couldn't stand FFX at all. X-2 had some redeeming qualities, but the only thing redeeming FFX was Auron.
As for your story, and please don't take this as an insult, the punctuation needs work. Sentences run on too long at times, and periods and commas should be more prevalent.
Sorry, it's a pet peeve of mine, and I can't bring myself to read a story with constant poor punctuation.
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Thanks will edit it. Appreciate the input.
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i wouldn't say that auron was the best thing in FFX but he was a big, and i mean BIG plot character.
i do like Kimahri too
also yes.. FFx-2 sucked, even the game couldn't be 100% completed unless taking the walkthrough to the letter, i made it halfway until i didn't want to play it anymore.
Tidus sucked in both
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on the other hoof.
do you need a proof reader
*nudge nudge hint hint*
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Everyone has their own opinion, I suppose. I disagree with yours in that I think Auron was the only good character, but I respect it enough that I won't argue against it.
1787757 I wouldnt mind honestly but i wouldnt know how to send the story to you to proof read them i dont know how the site works entirely.
I can be a little hopeless.
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yea my bad for formulating it in that way, but thanks for being mature
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When I want to share my story with my co-author, GeodesicDragon, I copy and paste my story in a private message, one chapter at a time.
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what i'm doing for the moment.
i'm currently proof reading for another author and he sends them by Email as word files, then uploads them.
so if you're interested sent me a PM and i can give you my email
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Funny thing is that i copy and paste from Word and that is not entirely reliable.
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I'm gathering it's the letter symbol by your profile, correct?
*Spoiler* I got the idea of meeting Balthier from a Doctor Who Christmas episode I've recently watched. So if you've watched those of the Tenth Doctor you may just recognize it.
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Funny thing is that i copy and paste from Word and that is not entirely reliable.
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I'm gathering it's the letter symbol by your profile, correct?
*Spoiler* I got the idea of meeting Balthier from a Doctor Who Christmas episode I've recently watched. So if you've watched those of the Tenth Doctor you may just recognize it.
On a seperate note: i hope i got Daring Do ok in this. I feel i tend to suck with descriptions. Another note though: I feel a bit sorry for your avatar and Twilight fans everywhere due to my other story.
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Word Processor or Microsoft Word?
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1787821 Huh. Never had that problem.
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Currently trying with chapter one. Some sentences will have to be reworded but its no big issue.
What i'm refering to is your comment on my extra long sentences. Word does not restrict or offer to shorten the sentances but i will try to make them shorter but i sadly can not promise anything.
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I didn't quite get that
And i haven't seen much of doctor who, so..
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No worries the reference is in part 2 not part 1 and that episode is the only one I've seen in ages.
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No worries the reference is in part 2 not part 1 and that episode is the only one I've seen in ages.
1787831 No need to make them shorter, they just need periods or commas.
example:
I would write it like this:
That's another thing. The words need emotion. But do you see the difference?
1787851 Yes thank you will add them now.
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ahh ok, but seems crimson is already doing the work i offered so i'm gonna let him help you out
1787869 Thanks to both of you.1787851 Shall i send you them then when i finish with them? Oh and back to the other topic i brought up. Do you think i did Daring Do alright with how to get her onboard with saving a world other than her own as well as her world? I sadly tend to worry a lot.
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Actually, I'll let Flutterderp handle it. I'm currently out one computer. I'm on a computer @ college, now.
1787924 ok no worries.