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This story is a sequel to Doctor Whooves Episode 15: The Christmas Ponies
The Doctor, Twilight, and Derpy decide to take Donna to Equestria. However, they accidentally end up in the year 56, where Equestria is currently caught in a bloody war with the newly-founded Changeling Empire. When Derpy and Donna are taken captive, the Doctor and Twilight must team up with a hardened Celestia and a simple farmmare in order to stop the merciless Queen Esmeralda.
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Yes finally!
And they're back in Equestria! 
Although I was looking forward to a Donna pony. Oh well. Let the awesomeness commence. 
YAY! I was hoping that Donna (my personal favorite companion) would remain in human form!
Can't wait to see how Celestia handles her.
2532390 I was hoping she'd be a pony. I was looking forward to that.
Donna has the best lines in this! She's a great addition to the story.
You know I just realized that now with Donna running about in Equestria, this is now a human in Equestria story.
However instead of a self-indulgent, thinly veiled self-insert, Mary Sue OC, it's Donna Noble, one of the Doctor's best companions! 
It's got that going for it, and I can't wait for more!
I'm sure the comment about the Doctor's name is because Doctor's name will be revealed in the upcoming season finally in a few weeks.
I also enjoy this different take on Changelings.
Ugggh, the suspense is killing me!
What's going to happen next?!
These stories are getting pretty dark.
This title seems ironic. It tingles my inner hipster.
No, Twilight, no!!!!
The Doctor had one of his moments again.
Is the Erik the Dragon the dragon from Dragonshy? That's how I imagined him anyway.
Darn it! This is a two part story!
Is there going to be more soon? Please. 
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that stupid little changeling!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
first I was like
then
then
Additional thought, cue Doctor Whooves theme:
Additional thought
This is one of the most awesome lines in this series!
Additional thought
Celestia has Time Lord technology!
Celestia here reminds me a bit of the Celestia that appeared in Twilight's nightmare in "The Crystal Empire".
Additional thought. You know "Angie" isn't such a dumb name for one of Applejack's relatives if it's actually short the name of an apple cultivar (like McIntosh, Granny Smith, or Braeburn) with the word orange in it, like Blenheim Orange or Golden Orange.
And oh my gosh! She was almost violated! You hope not to expect that in an MLP fanfic.
Additional thought
Thalia?
And once again, Donna finds herself the most important person in a universe.
2574542 I realize now that Erik can't be the dragon from "Dragonshy" because that dragon had yellow eyes, and this one has green eyes.
2946913 well, that was an interesting video. i havn't watched them when you posted them, because i have mostly been reading here on my psvita, and it doesn't like to play videos in browser, it'll try to either download the video, or play it through the youtube app on it.
this "Queen" Esmerelda seems to be full of Bragadaccio. it's annoying. if i was able to jump into the story, i'd change that, she would have multiple reasons to not want to rule gaia. "six angels guard the light, but one alone, guards the night." i am the night's guardian. the night angel. (kudos to whoever gets the reference)
2559450 actually, the new season will be aired Nov. 23rd
2947858 yes, the night angel's face of Justice almost made my try to kill the soldier for commiting rape, but however, since he hadn't commited the act yet, i was able to resist. for which he was lucky, if he went through and twilight wasnt there to stop him, he would have to say goodbye to everything he cherishes in life. life included.
a changeling got twi?!?! ok, the changelings are now screwed. i will spare the intellectuals who do not wish to fight, but Esmeralda and her generals will feel the wrath of the night angel. she thinks she's powerful? my dreadnaught has enough power to fire it's weakest cannon at the center of the multiverse and blow time and space into non-existence. i will not go that far, yet. in hope the doc will stop her.
the changelings are sooo lucky they didnt kill twi, the doc would have torn them all apart, then there's me. I would resurrect the all, torture them for 5 years at a time, kill them in the most painful, brutish way possible, resurrect, repeat. they will know the true meaning of pain. (as i stated in a different fanfic, if i seem like i am being too dark, blame the species my name and avatar represent)
2986646 That comment was from several months ago right before the Season finale of Doctor Who and Nov. 23 is not the season premiere. It's the 50th Anniversary special.
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I think he might have been referring to the MLP season 4 premiere.
Seriously, I'm still shocked that the MLP season 4 premiere is sharing the same day as the Doctor Who 50th anniversary!
This should be interesting
Let its read on
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Lol I'm not sure if this is what you meant but i get a kingdom hearts vibe from that like when sora said that both him and riku with guard the door to darkness since the door to light already has six protectors
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You must be so disappointed lol
Welp those soldiers have to die not only was it rape but out was a COLLABORATED EFFORT
Welp if twilights gone and Derpy and Donna are nowhere near him i can concluded that absolutely no mercy will be shown to the changlings
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Lol called it
3027844 lol, i did not know about that from KH. i meant the night angel trliogy, but whatevs.
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nope it's next August
it reminded me of this:
Seriously what is with all villain queens underestimating Doctor and get their ass handelded to them.
Why is it that I picture this younger Celestia with Lin Beifong's voice from Avatar: The Legend of Korra?
Um... even if they do manage to successfully storm the camp, they still won't find any of the Love they feed off of, I mean will they simply FORCE a pair into love or ...what??
I know that these Changelings are essentially "stupids" but even they have to see something wrong with this plan of theirs.
AH yes these puny ponies and changelings amuse me. They have no idea why they are truly battling well that's one advantage of being a GOD HAHAHA
I'm also new so 
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(sorry about the RP couldn't stop myself.
2946913 Are you going to do that fat the beginning of every episode?
3874977 Yes.
ooh they ARE going to the past again!
that's three sentences, first off, and second, THATS A SPEECH.
seems that way... Oh, J. Can you help me out on the Dark Continent? You know how much I hate the idea of-
being a slave to talking giant lions? Me too.
sorry guys. You know I can't do anything until tomorrow morning when Parker comes over. But anyway, that's not what's happening here.
yeah, yeah. We remember. 'No talking about irrelevant things when Doctor Whooves is being read.'
yup.
hey remember that time...
when we met the Doctor? Yes.
ha, just cause he helped Max out with that evil Helmet, you're mad at him?
YES!!! He ruined my chances of finally taking her over once and-
don't say 'for all.' That's just stupid.
says you, who talks her way out of EVERYTHING! And you always do those long, cliche speeches about not giving up, or facing your fears, or that no matter how many turn against you you'll never quit or something like that.
hey, MM, blame her for that! And anyway, they aren't speeches. They're like, two sentences. Usually something like, "I'll stop you. I don't care how many turn against me, how much power you get. I'll stop you. Like I always do."
MM has a point. Oh, and it's four, not three.
I thought just a minute ago you were complaining that we agreed!!!
yeah, but your not me.
YES WE ARE!
YES WE ARE!
not what I meant.
--MM/J
"Fight like hell." Ha!!! Hey, guys, sound familiar?!
when Max was--
I loved that.
(
)
OMIC SOO MUCCHHH EPICNESSS
yeah...
ooohhhhh I remember!!! Back in the Clone War! Luke and I were surrounded by Blue-Jays, and he asked how we were gonna get out and I said-
"Fight like hell."
you would, you bloodthirsty insane maniac.
thanks!
but we didn't have any other Rebels around when we got attacked... I remember getting captured. But we took out, like--
pretty much all of them! The only reason we got caught was-
because when they cought him, they threatened to kill Doc.
yeah... But it was still the coolest ever! And then we were at Lord Malo's base, and I was almost killed, and we escaped
quick! Get a sedative! She's gone nova!!!
what sedative is strong enough!?
let's try the elephant tranqs! That might work...
hey! That's not... Faaaiirrrrrrrhhhhhhhh bbbuuukkkkk yyyouurrrgghhhhhhhhh
well.... That's taken care of. MUFFINS.
'm not getting you any buckin' muffins.
MUFFINS!!!!
fine. *grumbleeee*
--MM/J
I like Queen Esmerelda.
I like the Doctor.
I like Celestia!!!
haha, your own hero is annoying you as much as I do!
eeyup.
You would.
does he remind you of... Say, someon- PONY down the street?
shut up Max.
I annoy her and you all the time. It's what peopl- ponies of our personality do.
--MM/J
yeah, we understand about the wars... Don't we?
STOP! LEAVE ME ALONE!!! :
he has. More than us.
maybe you guys!
yeah... Yeah, we really do...
man... I really miss Jay... And Rook... And Luke... And... The old Doc.
cryfillies.
buck you, MM. You can't feel pain or sadness. You're pure hate and insanity. Like Discord. You're our Discorded versions.
ha, yeah! Discorded Max and Discorded J-
don't say it. DONT. SAY. IT.
leave her alone! Don't hurt her. I know what we've been through is rough but don't take it out on her. You know that's what she wants. And anyway, the Doctor has been through so much more than us.
he hasn't watched every single one of his friends die! He hasn't seen them all die over and over and over again and tried so hard to save them but fail every time. He hasn't been betrayed by his best friend, who he loved. He hasn't had to go through that.
yes, J, he has.
look, can you have an emotional breakdown somewhere else? Someponys gonna start staring!( I'm never gonna get used to using somepony and all that. Wee still humans, guys!)
--MM/J
well.... I would let Mm take control here, had those bloody bastar-
sorry....
it's my NAME. literally. Mad Max.
ahem.
no,no, let her finish! When would you let me take control?!
she WONT let you have control. You're still MY demon, MM, and you always will be. The only reason you can mess with her head is because she is syncd with me and your in my head.
nope, I'm about as mad as you are right now.
I'm always mad.
WE KNOW MM.
WE KNOW MM.
--MM/J
Max. Hold me back.
dont get me wrong, I love your rage but... Where ya gonna go...?
to Equestria, of course.
but Mia only JUST started on her dimension traveling device and we are humans from Arcadia.
BUT ITS NOT FAIR! I HAVE TO HELP HER, MAX. I HAVE TO!!!
i know... But you can't. Just cheer the Doctor on, okay? Just like you help me, let the Doctor help Twilight.
but- I can't sit back and-
chick, that's ALL you can do right now.
SHUT UP, MM. you aren't helping.
not trying to.
I'll be fine. I was just remembering what happened with the Helmet...
it's fine... Just calm down.
--MM/J
hey, Max! That sounds like when YOU lose control to MM!
yeah!!! I love those moments.
yeah.. It does. Isn't it strange how much the Doctor and I have in common? Just coincidence, of course. I don't want to put myself up there with someone like him!!
Max!! You may not have done the things he has but you've done a lot! You belong high up there. Not near as high as him, but way up there.
meh... Whatev.
--MM/J
ooooohhhhhhhh
eh...
COOL!!!!!
--MM/J
Esmeralda as in the... omg if it is