This.... actually seems like a great story. Will read now

Yup. Definitely a good story.

Now this is what deserves to be in the featured box.

EDIT: Totally called it.

>>18624761862476

If I had a dollar for every time I wanted to say that, but didn't because I would be saying it too often...

Chapter 2 - Princess Celestia Fixes Everything

Twilight drug her aching feet through. dragged maybe?

Good chapter, I remember reading another where Sweetie Belle turned out to be a cyborg, but I don't remember what it was...well, anyways, when the part about the "clicker" came up, I thought of that. *sigh* memories... hope to see more of this later!

>>18625291862529

Well, with a box full of sequels, common crossovers and "My Little (Somepony)s"/"(Somepony)'s (somepony)" knockoffs, I don't think anyone would mind some fresh content.

Nice!

I love it.

Nice writing, and although it's 6000 words, it feels short.

Can't find a grammatical error, which is refreshing.

The future is plausible, which I like.

The author's note and your humor also boost your rating.

Most future fics would just have a lazer that would zap Sweetie back to health.

You made a rational fix, which is good.

Rating:

Moustache-Applejack smug.

Comparison: 9.3/10.

Well, this is really something. A story with pacing at the speed of light but actually pulls it off, and pulls it off well? As the first fic I picked out from the featured box in quite some time, I can definitely say that I am not disappointed. On to the next chapter!

>>18631431863143

From the feature box? What are you talking-- *checks*

Holy crap!

edit: Great I jinxed it.

Ah, fascinating chapter. Loved the idea of everypony having horns and wings through some sort of magic gem-things, and Twilight being Sweetie Belle's surrogate mother should definitely prove interesting as the story goes on. Definitely looking forward to more!

Does "everpony" include the other races? Are they at peace with the Changelings?

I declare this story impossible unless someone changes the character tags.

>>18631661863166 Heads up! Your story is now back in the box.

This is awesome. One of the best I've read in a while. Can't wait until Twi meets Celestia...only Celstia isn't going to be Princess anymore, is she? Or maybe not remember Twi? I dunno...

this is great.

did you know that the part that your summary gets cut off right after the line "I want to go home." So if you want to see the credits? no that doesn't sound right.....hmmmmm meh i think you know what i mean

OH MAH GAWD I HIT THE THUMBS UP AND IT CHANGED FROM 43 TO 47 OH MAH GAWD

I was reading this story and taking everything very seriously (I mean, a filly's life is at stake! ).

Then I fell out of my chair laughing when I reached the author's note.

This is kind of reminiscent of Millenium Wake. Hopefully that doesn't include the three-month-plus waits...

Oh wow i want more.

Great story!! words, sequence, conversations, EVERYTHING!!!

@I'm part mechanical now!!, made me laugh

Based on the description, I have seen this concept four times in this fandom. I have seen it literally dozens of times across books, movies, and television. I always read these stories, because it is one of the single, best setups I can imagine for a story. I'm going to read this right now, I'll let you know if it holds up.

[edit] Yup. Yup indeed (thus far). Tracked.

I like stories set into the future. More!

??? When did one thumbs up equal 2?

85, i hit thumbs up, 87

WTH?!

Good story though, love it ^_^

"Yes, listen to your mother,"

"What?"

ROFLXD

And we now have Sweetie Bot, v0.001.

>>18642221864222

*rolls eyes* because someone else thumbs up'd it.

>>18642521864252 I know, i was joking.

>>18642221864222 Because somebody else thumbed it up before you, so your thumb made it load that one. Seems like it'd be kinda obvious, but since this isn't the first comment like that on this fic alone.... *shrugs* I guess not

From the description alone, it seems very similar to two fanfics I've read: Lost Time and, as >>18640201864020 mentioned before, Millennium Wake. I just hope I will not be disappoint by blatant similarities. Will read later to hopefully be proven wrong.

>>18642771864277

I haven't read either of those, so any similarity will be purely coincidental, promise.

(Where's the happy Sweetie Belle emote I want a happy Sweetie Belle emote.)

>>18642771864277 Like i said before, I KNOW!

Hello Celestia, it is I, Twilight Sparkle, your protege...  

Celestia spits out her tea... "But you vanished centuries ago?"

>>18642771864277 "Lost Time" eh?

...

Dammit. Now I'm tracking another story that hasn't been updated in months...

>>18642931864293 When I was reading comments I proceeded to skip a lot of them that didn't seem important, so.... That first one just caught my eye cause of similarities

>>18642901864290 We shall seeeeeeee..........

>>18643191864319 Take it! Take it and deeeaaaaaal with it!

Originality. I love it.

Even if it wasn't in the feature box, I'll still read it.

Anyway, I've read both the prologue and chapter 1, and it's already good to me.

You have promising skills.

:O Omgah, this is really good! To the next chapter!

bullshit pinkie pie knows exactly when they will be back

>>18644101864410

You spoke too soon. I just saw this from said featured box.

>>18645081864508

Funny how that happens.

I'm not surprised though. It's a really great read!

I listened to this idea of yours awhile ago and I've this to say:

I'm impressed

10/10 Mr. Void Chicken

timey wimey wibbly wobbly

You did well. In fact, you did so well that I'm going to write a special commendation for you in the "extra credit" section. Ooh, there's LOTS of room here!

this might take a while

either way,

Image: https://encrypted-tbn1.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcR4MLrmj7Mb18hHImoKtNy-2h_QpV_S9VoCTK40PlEW7abWi-uREw

Was the alternate title 'Tree Fiddy'?

Fascinating story. It lacks the menace of other time-travel scenarios I've seen so far, but it doesn't sound like it stays that way. They're probably trapped; maybe advanced magics are illegal? That one pony seemed flabbergasted by Twi's teleport spam.

And thus, Sweetie Bot was born!

Great story. MOAR.

THIS Is a neat idea! I WANT MOAR

part mare part machine all adorable!

Considering my father has exactly what Sweetie Bell has... and, as of last year, is now the proud owner of a new "ticker" himself, I could relate so incredibly well with this chapter. More so than alot of thigns that I read on this site.

I'll definitely be tracking this.

I wonder how Celestia and Luna has been holding up for the last 350 years.

This. Is. Amazing. No more words.

~Dess

Wow, this is amazing. Great story. At the rate this thing is going, we are going to have here perhaps one of the most popular stories on the site.

>>18642901864290 I REQUEST MORE INTERESTING CHAPTERS ON MY DESK ASAP if you don't mind

This sounds interesting. will read later.