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Tundara

Joined February 2012
667 followers

Stories (8)

  • The Longest Night
    On the first night of Luna's banishment Celestia finds two alicorns in a crater.

    6,218 words · 15,332 views · 1,575 likes · 26 dislikes
  • Myths and Birthrights
    Twilight has to deal with new powers and troubles as an Alicorn.
    275,164 words · 9,022 views · 1,470 likes · 42 dislikes
  • Tiger Bloom
    Applebloom finds herself in the Everfree with a guardian that may be more dangerous than the forest.
    26,634 words · 2,364 views · 211 likes · 3 dislikes
  • Velvet Sparkle and the Queen in Stone
    Myths and Birthrights side-story: Velvet Sparkle recounts her younger years in a nation north of Equestria and the events leading up to her becoming the mother of Shining Amour and Twilight Sparkle
    34,736 words · 1,583 views · 161 likes · 4 dislikes
  • The Apple and the Fox
    4,417 words · 872 views · 113 likes · 5 dislikes
  • Sins of the Ancients
    161,867 words · 1,841 views · 63 likes · 8 dislikes
  • Before The Fall
    12,635 words · 345 views · 14 likes · 1 dislikes
  • Helena
    2,237 words · 325 views · 8 likes · 2 dislikes

Blog Posts (116)

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This story is a sequel to The Longest Night

As her twenty-first birthday dawns, Twilight Sparkle finds her simple life turned upside down. While her birthright forces itself into her life, Twilight also has to deal with the arrival of three Alicorns. No pony knows where they came from or what they want, and the Alicorns seem intent on keeping themselves and their purposes hidden. To uncover the truth, Twilight will set sail for distant, ancient lands with old and new friends.

Side-quel to The Longest Night.

Side-Stories: Velvet Sparkle and the Queen in Stone, The Apple and the Fox

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Pre-readers/Editors: Honey Mead, WNA, Cerulean Voice

Cover art by Companda

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First Published
3rd Dec 2012
Last Modified
20th Mar 2014

Comments ( 2,200 )

#1 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4h ago · · ·

I've been looking forward to this.

#2 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4h ago · 3 · 1 ·

AND THE FEATURED BOX SHALL TREMBLE.

#4 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4h ago · · ·

This story totally needed to be made, how could we be anything less than extremely excited to see more from what happened in Longest Night?

#5 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4h ago · · ·

>>1728991

Dancing Luna ftw!

>>1729000

I know, right!?

>>1728979

I hope so, I hope so. :twilightsmile:

>>1728969

I've been looking forward to sharing this with everyone. :twilightsmile:

#6 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 4h ago · · ·

Not sure if I should reread this or not.  Oh wait!  You linked me!  OH NO!  I haven't cleaned up in a while, everything is a mess...

Time to think up a good excuse!

#7 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 3h ago · · ·

>>1729078

Personally, I'm going to re-read it when I'm not bouncing off the walls and can sit still for more than 2 seconds without laughing like I'm doing a Trixie impersonation. :pinkiehappy: Just to make sure I didn't smeg up while doing the edits. If I did... epic facehoof will be epic. :facehoof: I'm almost positive that while editing I did them all in Word, rather the documents themselves. But I'm also all anxious and nervous and that makes me doubt myself. :twilightblush:

#8 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 3h ago · · ·

To sleep or to read this?

I think we all know the answer.

#9 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 3h ago · · ·

>>1729198

Oh man, that is a tall order, maybe if I can in a couple weeks, going into finals and I am procrastinating even harder.

#10 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 2h ago · · ·

Chapter 3 has broken italics starting at the point where Regulus joins the discussion, running until the end.

#11 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 2h ago · · ·

>>1729751

Danke! Corrected! (Well, re-corrected. :facehoof: )

#12 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 2h ago · · ·

You have a bit of an italics problem starting around luna's conversation with the stars.

#13 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 2h ago · · ·

>>1729865

Yup, it's already been dealt with. I had corrected it during editing, but guess I forgot to put the corrections into the word document. Now to be paranoid that I forgot to put other more important corrections into the proper files. :twilightoops:

#14 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 2h ago · · ·

Fuck yeah Peewee! Protecting Twi like a boss!

#15 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 1h ago · · ·

Damn that cover pic is beautiful. :twilightsmile:

#16 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 1h ago · · ·

Cadence is Luna's daughter? Not sure how I should react to that. :unsuresweetie: But this is a really interesting Alicorn Twilight fic. Please, continue.

#17 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 1h ago · · ·

Well when Fluttershy arrives with the Alicorn youth they better realize what is going on otherwise you're making them dumber than they actually are, you'll just be pointlessly dragging the story out if you go the denial rout. also they should probably have a bit of difficulty defeating the new titans. unless they find the rest of the Alicorn youths that have been accidentally scattered by the poor wind.

#18 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 1h ago · · ·

By the gods, this story is amazing!

#19 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 44m ago · · ·

Well then.

*upvote*

#20 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 13m ago · · ·

>>1728979

Well, it's on the Feature Box, at least. So far, so good. [img]//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Lyra_dealwithit.png[/img]

#21 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 10m ago · · ·

>>1730582

:rainbowlaugh:  I just steepled my fingers and went 'Eeeeexcellent'.... :moustache: :pinkiehappy:

#22 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 10m ago · · ·

>>1730582

It's in the slot normally reserved for updates.  Just when I start to think I understand the box.

#23 · Chapter 0 · 72w, 5m ago · · ·

>>1730606

Hmm... That might be the result of folks accessing the story "early". Otherwise, yeah, odd bug. [img]//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Derpy_Hooves.png[/img]

#24 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1730630

Now, the real question is...  Can it take two slots at once?

#25 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Yes... Let the pony flow through you. I'll admit, I saw your blog post when I went to work, and that was the longest day ever.[1] For real, I was staring at the clock all day long![2] I finally got home and I whip out my phone to find out... The internet is dead in my house. Well, normally that wouldn't be a problem bt I get literally no service in my area. MY cel provider actually gave us a free landline because they can't even find our phones on their network while we're at home :s INTERNET'S BACK. I'M READING IT NOW. My body is ready, but my mind sure isn't.

[1]  Ha, side-quel to Longest Night? Longest Day? No? Fuck me then.

[2] Aaaaas usual.

#26 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Excellent the story is finally up, great to see a new Alicorn Twilight story and interested in seeing where this will go.

#27 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1730599

...and it fell off again. [img]//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Sweetie_Belle.png[/img][img]//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Scootaloo.png[/img][img]//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Applebloom.png[/img]

#28 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Hmm. I shall give it a read.

#29 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Pretty good start.

Fleur-De-Lis, an interesting premise, and one of those rare stories with a well-characterized Trixie? (I'll admit, I like your take on her better than the new episode) This looks to be good. :twilightsmile:

#30 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Awesome thus far :twilightsmile:

#31 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

3rd Chapter in and i really still have no idea wtf is going. Going under my read later tab until i can make sense of what is happen.

#32 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

This looks very promising, ill have to keep an eye on it :moustache:

#33 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1730844

You Fucking better. Tundara took three chapters to alicornify Twi. You better continue the trend, fool.

Oh before I forget: MOAR.

#34 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

This is coming along nicely, keep at it

#35 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Mental scorekeeping.

Fluttershy, Zecora, and Applebloom found an alicorn.  So have Trixie and Gilda.

Luna's found one too, but ... :twilightoops:

And hopefully a few of Twilight's first actions in controlling the stars is re-educating them on how to treat her friend.

#36 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Well, i can't say this didn't intrigue me.  I eagerly await more.

#37 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Out of many many alicorn Twily stories this one is ... different . :pinkiehappy:

#38 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Consider this story tracked

#39 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Dun dun duuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhh

#40 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

WOOHOO I LOVE THIS SO FAR! Bonus points for actuly letting Peewee in this and having him have a action roll! :pinkiehappy: YOUR GONNA DESTORY US ALL WITH YOUR AWESOMNESS! :pinkiegasp:

Gentle breeze guide you home, a warm smile to welcome your return.  :twilightsmile:

#41 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Okay, I'm getting a serious 'Midwych Cuckoos/Village of the Damned' vibe from this start.

#42 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Yep, those three foals are going to turn out to be trouble alright! Looks like the current generation has lucked out and are going to enjoy that most rare of catastrophes a god-war.  Y'know, legions of fanatical cultists who class anyone else, even neutrals as 'infidels' who need to be killed.

#43 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

After this chapter, why is this all that truly stuck with me?

Twilight watched as a pair of ponies, a tan earth pony and a dapple grey pegasus purchased a flower, the earth pony tucking it behind his wife's ear. A little smile touched her lips similar to the one Celestia would always get this time of year.

DoctorXDerpy. Married. Not companions, married. Planning on trying for a foal. Wat.

#44 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Really? Interesting; so that implies the alicorn foals are not necessarily inherently malign but could easily be corrupted.  I'm presuming that the fog is one of the Titans, maybe the last.  So old, perhaps, and so demented by long millennia in Tartarus that it can no longer differentiate friend from foe (assuming, of course, that the adult alicorns are 'friends' and that isn't certain by any means).  I wonder where it is going...?

#45 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

I think something bugged when it went into the update slot. Longest Night broke in after more time and less views/likes.

#46 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1732298

We'll get there, we'll get there... sooooon... right Twilight?

See? She agrees with me!

So many comments... So much positivity... Such a great way to start the day. Thank you, everyone! :twilightsmile:

#47 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Flickering in a star-shrug, Ras Thaoum replied, You know how excitable Rukbat can get. She swears she once saw a teleporting dragon with a biped on its back.

Neverending story reference?

If you're trying to come up with a spell to hide your wings, me and Cadence can show you a couple.

~~~I feel like this should be "Cadence and I" since Luna is generally very formal.

A thief would have an easier time plucking out a ponies soul. There were spells capable of the later, there weren't for the former.

~~~"pony's" is ownership, rather than "ponies", which is a plural and doesn't make sense since it follows "a" which is singular.

~~~Add another t to later and make it latter, otherwise it's "later" as in: I'll perform those spells later; rather than latter: between having a meal and stealing a soul, I'd rather not perform the latter.

If the fog was not alive, they why was it acting like it was searching for something, Luna silently wondered.

~~~Then, not they.

Really like this story so far, but don't know where you're going to take it. Currently I'm at "All the alicorns are going to end up fighting titans at some point" but only time will tell... AND WHAT IN CELESTIA'S NAME IS AN EXAMPLE OF AN INTANGIBLE ALICORN!?! :raritydespair: Is it like how Ares is the god of war? Rather than an emotion, being alicorn of an idea?  And Tyr thought Fluttershy was Artemis? (Chapter 2) Goddess of the hunt doesn't fit her, but Mistress of Animals? Oh yea. Fluttershy could totally have been an alicorn. I know she's probably not going to be since there already IS an Artemis (by extension of Tyr's calling her that) but for curiosity's sake, whould she have been a Physical Alicorn of wild animals, or an Intangible Alicorn of the Hunt?

Upvoted, Favorited, yea. Keep this story going!

#48 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

WOOT it seems you are making the story "Sharing the Night" were the old author quit.  Great job!

#49 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

"Countess of the Everfree" ..... I like it!  :pinkiehappy:

Looks like a fun story so far, so consider me hooked.  :twilightsheepish:

#50 · Chapter 0 · 71w, 6d ago · · ·

Wow, I forgot about this over the weekend, I feel so bad about that. Sorry, Tundara, I have failed you :fluttercry: (I blame League of Legends and TF2)

Oh well, I'll be reading this for just entertainment purposes soon.

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