He felt horrible keeping it a secret from their friends-even if it was a promise. He felt upset that one day every year he had to lock them both away to keep their friends from finding out the truth. He felt selfish when he was alone with her, seeing her for who she truly was-and never being able to free her, no matter how much he wanted to. He felt like a liar keeping this promise.
A feel was felt.
You have caught my attention...
interesting...
lets see where you run with this
Very interesting....I'll reserve my opinion until the story gets fleshed out a little, but it's definitely caught my eye.
This has definitely caught my attention continue if you will.
Let's light this candle!
Very interesting! You say it's not a shipping but it can very easily become one!
Please continue!