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Fluttershy The Vampony Hunter

When Fluttershy gets a letter from Princess Celestia and exsplains in Great Detail the peril of Equestria's Vamponies, Fluttershy and Angel will learn the ways of Vampire from the one and only- Master Spike!
[Some Proofreading, Didn't fix ALL Mistakes! Help is always Great :D]

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Wolf Counsler

Wolf Counsler #1 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · · Celestia's Letter ·

interesting...
Don't fail me

totallynotabrony

totallynotabrony #2 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · · Celestia's Letter ·

Spelling and Grammar

No further comments.

Herpidty Derp

Herpidty Derp #3 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · · Celestia's Letter ·

Fix this wall of text with paragraphs and your set. Good luck!

Foalicon_

Foalicon_ #4 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · · Celestia's Letter ·

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Smurf

Smurf #5 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · · Celestia's Letter ·

please continue

ponys were born gay

ponys were born gay #6 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · · Begin Training ·

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this is how all ponys must die

MuffinDuffers

MuffinDuffers #7 · Oct 4th, 2012 · · · Celestia's Letter ·

Very few grammar errors, interesting story, I'd like you to make spaces between your paragraphs. Thanks! (Not as if I don't make grammar errors or anything, few to none in this case on you're story. I do very much enjoy it. Also, every writer makes mistakes, thats how we all learn to become better. ;3)

-Muffin