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Becoming a princess is a big change. Twilight knows that change isn't always easy, especially when you have to say goodbye to your friends.

Before being crowned Equestria's newest princess, Twilight must perform her final friendship assignment; enjoy her last week in Ponyville.

She can do it as long as she remembers, that everything is going to be just fine.

Based on the transition from Twilight returns to the Princess Twilight Cometh. And nothing more.

Cover image provided by BaldDumboRat

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 7 )

Looking forward to see where this is going.

This looks really promising.

Also- I kinda figured the coronoation had a timeskip. I knew she learned how to fly before then.

I noticed that you didn't follow the scene where she is meeting her frineds again directly from the episode. That is fine if it makes a better story, but at the same time... I don't think that she WILL be being taken away from her friends. Especially based on the statements we have from the creators about season 4.

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Well everything is pretty much left to the imagination until S4. Me personally; I think there will be a shift of somekind. They did say the season opener will focus on Twilight being a new princess which leads me to think she will move to Canterlot, i.e. away from her friends. Not to say she will removed from her friends forever, and this story will show those worries as well.

very good! but i give a one more edit fix some spelling errors. other than that? great! Rainbow Dash was written very well here!

i'm soooooo so so so glad this is back. but i gotta say, i think i liked the first draft a little better. i really liked that scene you had where the other five chipped in on Celestia's pep-talk and i thought Twilight's internal monologue was done better. and i really enjoyed the scene you had with her working out her schedule. the characterization there was great. but still, a good job and can't wait for chapter two!

2846083 Well its what my editor said to me, them discussing who should do what in what order is something thats more implied and doesn't need to be outright said. Its like the characters going to the bathroom. You know it happens but you don't need to see it to know it happens.

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