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VashTheStampede


Providing a realistic simulation of life on a natural satellite since 2012

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RD's the strong one, the brave one, the one who never lets anything get her down. But one day, she sees another Apple Family Reunion, and something sticks inside her.

Elsewhere in Canterlot, a couple ponder what life would have been like if they hadn't given up their daughter.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 35 )

*Looks at the tags*

It's not...

*Reads the story*

Motherfucker! Yes! This is what I want! More of THIS!

You have peaked my interest, Do go on :moustache:

A little to contrived of an ending, I believe RD would have been angry as all get out but good story nontheless

I like the idea, I can see it work. But it needs a lot of fleshing out. Multiple chapters, spanning tens of thousands of words at the very least. A mere 2200 words can't do this justice. There is no room to write an emotional story and it will always feel rushed.

I teared up... Just wow....

Rushed ending. Should have taken a few chapters to explore the emotional repercussions of the news and how they all adjust.

1693856>>1694240>>1694397
I do very much like the concept, I just wanted to do a little one-off to get back into the swing of things after a week-long break from fiction writing of any kind. I may flesh this out into a longer story at a later date, perhaps after I finish Adventures of a "Schoolteacher" or Shipwrecked.

I would absolutly love to see rarities reaction to finding out this.

....Ok, several things.

1. This seems really, REALLY OOC for Dash. This is the pony who takes offense at small things and tends to blow stuff out of proportion, and ditching her at an orphanage as a foal because she's the wrong colour and a pegasus is.... probably going to cause a big reaction, and not a "I love you mom and dad!!!" one.

2. MOAR.

1694654 :rainbowlaugh: yeah should be funny,
The most 'uncouth' cocky and egotisticao pony in Equestria is the daughter of the highest, richest ponies in Canterlot :rainbowlaugh:

Why end it here? I think you just got a good thing going, it doesn't do it justice to suddenly end it here.

I SAW THE CHARECTERS AND SAID "OH NO."

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NOW I SAY " OH YYYYYYYEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!":rainbowdetermined2:

1693796me:i agree with you.MORE.
metal sonic:we need more.
metal scourge:a fucking sequel to this awesome story.or a motherfucking new chapter.please?me: metal scourge wach your language.
metal scourge:sorry master.
me:it's ok.but this needs a new chapter. or a sequel.

WE NEED A SEQUEL I WANT TO READ THE EMOTION ON RARITYS FACE WHEN SHE HEARS THIS:flutterrage:

1694654>>1694742>>1695167>>1697009>>1750529

I do plan on doing a semi-rewrite/continuation of this, I just have the slight issue of having three other running fics, papers I need to write for school, and finals. I can't plan too many things asdfghjkl;

BUT KNOW THIS
I do plan on reworking and extending this story. I will almost certainly do it, just not now.

Its been two weeks, feel like writing that story now?:pinkiehappy:

Wait, the fuck??

Who in the name of Hitler's monobollock gives a fucking week old infant to an orphanage?

Would they even have the facilities for that?

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Ponies seem to develop rather quickly, or at least are healthier faster. I mean, look at the Cakes' foals - they were up and walking around after one month. It would seem logical to me that sometime within the first two weeks a foal would be healthy and mature enough to move out of a hospital.

2064188 But they'd still have had to hand her over when, I'm guessing, she was less than a week old. Hospitals don't often let you stay that long, and Fancy Cunt is too busy being a grade-A douchenozzle,so she'd need to hand her over immediately.

Looks like Monoclebut is regretting his actions :rainbowkiss:

MUST HAVE MORE!!! WHEN WILL U UPDATE??? please...:fluttercry:

Hey, you know that kid we gave you? Yeah, we kinda need her back.

... That's not really how it works here, sir...

See, it turns out she actually is my daughter after all. Heh, thought my wife was a cheating, two-timing whore.

*orphanage explodes*

Years later...

I totally forgive you for sending me to an orphanage and never being there for me and all the bad things that happened indirectly because of your actions! I love you both!

... Fleur, darling, are you sure she's really ours?

Huh? Sorry honey, I'm trying to eat this cotton candy.

... That's my hair, mom.

I definitely think the longer version has some promise. The one shot seemed to be over far to quick and the development felt very rushed.

Now that's Gerge Lucas-ing it, this is a lot far better than the original chapter!

When can we expect the next chapter? Can we expect one at all?

I haven't actually read this, and I don't expect that I will. I just wanted to let you know that the title reminded me of a song I really like but that also completely destroys me every time I hear it.

I'm crying now, so, thanks for that.

Her name is Fleur Dis Lee, not Fleur Le Dis. Nice job, though!

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