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Twilight wakes up one morning to find everything going just right, and even gets something she never knew she wanted.

A/N: Supposed to be nothing more that pointless cuteness.

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Comments ( 51 )

D'awww... that's nice. :heart:

I always love stories that have Twilight as/becoming Spike's mother, is good.
-Sturrn

Yes, this is adorably fluffy as advertised. Success!

So much love.
Sweet Faust, so much love.

Nice, short, cute story. Always loved having a family bond between Twilight and Spike, good job on the story.

Well done, good sir. A happy, cute little bit of SpiLight (F,Fr) fluff... one that I enjoyed immensely!:twilightsmile:

OMG! It's. So. CUTE! :heart:
D'AWWWWWWWWWW! :heart:

Both my brain and my heart almost exploded 'cause it was so dang cute. You, sir, surpassed every. Single. Expectation. That I had for you. And I just found out you wrote True Love Never Changes!
Keep up the good work and I gladly anticipate more D'aw induced heart attacks :twilightsmile:

I should write some pointlessly cute stories about Twilight and Spike. They aren't my forte, since I like stories with plots, but a story with just Twilight and Spike talking to each other is just what I need.

Maybe after Christmas, though. Regardless, shall be watching to see what else you do. :raritywink:

(Oh, and this story. I fell in love with it.)

Dear god that was adorable!

Princess Celestia says that dragon mothers do that normally to imprint the fact that they are the baby’s mother into the child’s mind. When a pony hatches a dragon, normally the amount of magic they can muster is only enough to hatch the dragon. You managed to both hatch me and imprint on me.

That is one of the better explanations for why we don't see many other ponies with baby dragons.

Continue please :raritycry:

At first I thought this would be shipping, but this is a million times better!:pinkiehappy:

Only reason I would EVER dislike this is because you freakin' killed me. My heart exploded. Very well done. Amazing that you could give me all of those feels in such a brilliant short story. :raritydespair::raritycry:

That was lovely. Though I actually hate (read: really, really, really, really, really, really, really, reeeaaallly dislike) the idea of Twilight being a mother to Spike. The act toward each other like friends and siblings, and motherhood is just a role Twilight steps into from time to time the same way an overbearing big sister would. Besides, their relationship is far too ambiguous for so simple a label.

OMG! LOVE IT ALL!
:moustache::heart::twilightsmile:

I feel the need to comment but don't know what to say. Other than my heart feels like jello after reading that.:rainbowkiss::pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::heart:

That is just too beautiful!!!

Great work. I'll have to check your other works too. If they are half way this good, I think I have found the way I want to die. Cuteness overload...

Like and Favorite well earned!!

DAMN! Take a Warning note the next Time, when you wrote a Story Like this.

Somthing like:

WARNING!!! Reading this Story can bring a heart attack from overflowing cutness! Dont read with a weak Heart!

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I would take Picture 3^^

This would be an awesome episode I think or like the idea for an episode in Season 4. We haven't really discovered the true origins of Spike's egg and it would be awesome for Spike to call Twilight mom in Season 4. Beautiful fanfic. :twilightblush:

Efdksjaihjhakkadjbdbkashkkdiaidbxsaaaaaaaaagagagaakdjdskskaayyayayayayayayaaaaaaa....
:fluttershysad::pinkiesad2::raritycry::heart::heart:

*drags himself away slowly, clutching chest with one hand*

Time from reading to breakdown: 2 mins

Part: happy mothers day.

Thanks for an enjoyable read.

There are not enough likes in the world for a story like this.

The world need a little more joy and sweetness. You have given it just that. Good work.:twilightsmile:

HNNNNG OMFG TOO CUTE EEEE <333333

To fuuuuuuuuuuking cuuuuuute whhyyyyy

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Ok that earned you a single tear, wonderful work

sooo emotional :raritycry:

SO MANY FEEEELS! :fluttershysad::twilightsmile::heart:

i liked the story alot but did twilight really need to equate an amazingly heartfelt gift to "the worlds most delicious cookie"? :ajbemused: other than that i really enjoyed it! :heart:

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Given that Spike eats gemstones, yes, and it's entirely appropriate.

This certainly put a smile on my face. I, like many others, have viewed Twilight serving as Spike's mother more than a friend. Very well-written and very sweet. Instant fave!

Hm... I'll give you an upvote despite how sappy it got after the letter.
'A single tear', really? :trixieshiftright:

But still, a nice story.

Manly tears

Erk! Too..... Cute.... Buaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! (Falls and pretends to die) I'm dead.

Hnnnnggggghh! *dies from diabeetus*
Well f*ck this. Who needs to live anyway? Now I can't get diabeetus!:derpytongue2:

Well. There goes my heart.....it 'sploded on me.
:heart::raritydespair:

you are literally the only reason that I'm here

Come off of it, Spike! If not Twilight, than I'm sure some other filly would have hatched you! Sure, you wouldn't be Spike then, but still!

yayyyyyyy!!
this was wonderful! :pinkiehappy:

Well the hart strings have bin tugged at again. I rate this fic 10:twilightsmile:/10

Okay this is going to be long, but it's no criticism against this story, simply me ranting.

Even in the shows official Canon, I could never actually see these too as friends. The fact she hatched him kinda makes it hard to accept that. When they interact, it feels more over like a "sister-little brother" or "mother-son" relationship.

Why the show can't simply hint at or vaguely know at it rattles my brain. It's not like it's controversial or taboo to have this kind of affection.

I mean at least give us a scene where Spike's life could be in danger and emphasize twilight's emotions and actions to protect him.

Yes it's happened before, but has it ever been a focal point to a episode?
No
And I know dhx and hasbro can do it. it's not like they intentionally went nowhere with Flurry heart after her episode *coughcough*hyped episode builds up to nothing. *coughcough*

The show that centers around friendship has yet to dive into the most important aspect of relationships... Family (beyond sibling rivalry and mischief)

Just show us she legitimately cares about him in a focused manner. I don't care about shipping because that's a little more complex, but family? Come on hasbro!

This was adorable and uplifting to some degree nice job in the writing all together though ^~^

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Very nice molly pic

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Instead we get her using spike as bait in best gift ever

That was so adorable! :twilightsmile::moustache:

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