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Rarity gets a special present that might help another pony get just what she wants. But sometimes getting what we want means giving others what they want. And sometimes, it means giving up what we want completely. This story is about what it means to be a role model, and how it can bring out the best in us.
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Great story! Really enjoyed it.
The characters were played just like an episode of the show I feel. Hell, this could be a good episode for the show!
Uh... Soarin talking to inanimate objects is kind of a bad habit
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I always like to think about the next story while writing my current one. I don't think I am quite done with Soarin
. And your right, he shouldn't talk to inanimate objects, it's neurotic
.
Also: I really appreciate the upvotes and comments (seriously, its like writer fuel!)
1638112 then I shall stalk you and give you unlimited up votes!!
)
(one for each story of course I may have unlimited but I ain't giving them away for free
That was really good! I can't wait for more of your stories!
I don't like the alternate universe fimfics, or the clops, but I really like the ones that seem like they could actually be written by the producers!
Keep 'em coming!
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I'm with you, I don't really like AU fics, the universe is already given to us by the show, there's plenty of room in this universe to expand. And clopping is just...no
I won't say every story I write will be like an episode from the show but I don't think you've seen the last of them either.
Nice story overall. It could do with proofreading for spelling and grammar errors, but the overall sweetness and solid story let me push past those. Well done!
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. I do have my stories proofed before posting but...lets just say my first choice for editor wasn't the absolute best. I recently switched to a more brutal editor which is pushing my writing to a higher level (I hope 
). I'm hoping my next story will be even better.
Oh if you find any of those little horrors (spelling or grammar mistakes) please point them out so I can KILL IT WITH FIRE
Glad I stumbled upon this one. Good read, I enjoyed your characterisation, seemed about right. I'm also a sucker for well written stories with Soarin, so yeah... You got me good.
I did find a little bit during the time in the skybox a little hard to follow but that's a minor complaint and that could have just been me. Maybe things jumped around a little too much. Not sure.
Overall: Good story, would read again.
Also, as amusing as it would be, I'm sure you meant sugary, not surgery.
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'preciate it, and fixed.
*sigh* the things editors miss...
i really enjoyed this story, do i sense a lil sorin dash pairing in the future?
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Such a sharp eye you have gentle reader....
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/65649/sweet-n-spicy
1968038 heh didnt know that was a sequel its already on my read list
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Future, as in not now? Now I no longer feel compelled to read this.
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I just finished reading this....
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Sequel? Darn it! I read Sweet 'n Spicy first!
This is one of those stories that I enjoyed once, but part of it killed my interest upon reread.
In this case, it was the segment where RD had to wear the dress in public.
Even though she eventually enjoyed it, and it was really only a small part of the story, I still feel that was a bit OOC.
If it was just modeling the dress in the Boutique, I feel it would have worked a LOT better.
Everything else about the story works for the most part, but that ONE segment bugs me enough to the point that I can't enjoy it as much as I once did, to the point where I can't even upvote it.