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For the last month, Twilight and Trixie have been having regular skirmishes. But when Twilight decides that Trixie's presence has become so normal that she might as well be living in the library, what will Trixie do? Perhaps more importantly, what will everypony ELSE do?

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Interesting. I'll keep an eye on this.

Oh, you are so watched!

Really enjoyed that chapter! Your pacing is pretty good as you have me wanting to find out what happens next. Keep it up! :twilightsmile:

Promising, lets see where this goes.

As the 3 ponies remark, let's see where this goes...

.... :pinkiecrazy: ...

I like this. I look forward to seeing what will happen

FIRST POST!

So you're having this take place after "Magic Duel"? Understandable.:twilightsmile:

Looks like we're getting some Twixie foreshadowing in this chapter. Nice.

Spike's nonplussed reaction to seeing Twilight and Trixie locked in combat...sounds just like him.:rainbowkiss::moustache:

Looking forward to more!

P.S. I regret NOTHING!!!:rainbowwild::trollestia:

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That must've been one very comfortable bed or they were that tired. I loved how Trixie started their friendship on a roll.:derpytongue2: I really want to know what is in that basket, and more importantly, how did Fluttershy got the nerve to go get them?:twilightblush:

That grin was replaced with a look of shock as a pinkish-violet aura closed around the blue mare, curling her body up into the shape of a wheel.

Turning Trixie into a wheel, clearly the ultimate insult! :rainbowlaugh:

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Blushing scarlet, she set it back down, slid it under the bed, and backed away. "The consideration is appreciated, mysterious note," she half-coughed, "but Trixie thinks you may perhaps be getting ahead of yourself..."

I seriously doubt Trixie would have that reaction to noodles.:duck::derpytongue2:

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I think you underestimate the grand potential of the humble noodle. You just have to think creatively... and now I have mental images I can't get rid off.:pinkiesick:

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Would it help if I said they were in a can?

1737605 You monster.

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A veritable fiend for it. I can't believe they let people like you walk free.

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That depends on how much she loves noodles.

A very promising fiction. And one that does not start with Twilight/Trixie hooking up in the first chapter. Even if Fluttershy thinks so :fluttershyouch:

Your story is not bad and has a decent premise, but your title is incredibly bland.

Hmm, interesting. Okay, I'll ask. Will the fact that those three were inarguably rude to Trixie when she first showed up and/or that she fought the Ursa while they did literally nothing be brought up? Or will it all be Trixie's fault?

Okay... here's hoping this doesn't end with Applejack being completely in the right. Also, Twilight? Your friends were the bullies. Not Trixie. :twilightoops:

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This story isn't about who was right back then. Twilight and Rarity are trying to be diplomatic - Trixie was actually going to bring up Applejack and Rainbow Dash's behavior during her first visit, but that wouldn't have helped her now.

Besides, I always take issue with stories that are interested in defending or condemning a character, because the characters start talking like bickering fans on the Internet. That's why I tried to make their argument in the first chapter less about what actually happened and more about the idea of a grudge itself.

Applejack was wrong in the first chapter. I thought that was actually made pretty clear. Here, she's still ticked off, but she's at least giving Trixie a chance, which is a step in the right direction. The past is going to stay in the past.

I hope you get back to this soon, this story looks like it's going to be a lot of fun.

I am most curious about this story. I am definitely going to give this story a fair shot. I look forward to your next update.

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Fluttershy saves up all the noodles that fall out of her saddlebags.

Trixie was moments away from making a solid point in the previous chapter. Rarity, Rainbow, and Applejack were the ones criticizing Trixie right in front of her audience loud enough for everyone to hear. Trixie was only standing up for herself.

Can't decide if I'm going to love this or roll my eyes at it. On one hand, it's an entertaining premise, you manage to generate laughs just by having the characters do things that are typical for them, and there is potential here for chemistry between two of my top three favorite characters (the lack of interaction between Spike and Trixie is simply ridiculous when measured against how much Twixie material exists and how important Spike is to Twilight...I'm gonna have to ship them just to bring the damn quota up). On the other hand, it's a Twixie story...a ship that is all over the place.

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First, it's not quite as common as people say, second, it's common because it's good, an' third, most Twixie stories are abandoned or badly written, or have sad endings, or are jus' straight-up clopfics or drabbles that don't really have a story ta tell. An' though ah haven't been updatin' lately due ta school an' such, this ain't gonna end up bein' any a' those if ah can help it.

Any idea when this story will be updated?:twilightsheepish:

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Sorry, ah've done some work on the next chapter, but ah'm waitin' until ah've got at least one chapter ready fer mah next Manehattanverse story before ah really devote time an' effort to this one. But ah'm now workin' on that story, so ah'm hopin' it won't be too much longer!

I'm loving this so far!

Fun story! Any chance of us seeing more chapters?

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Workin' on it! Ah'm a slow writer, sorry :applejackconfused: but ah'm prob'ly gonna update this story next...

Well...didn't expect this to update. Good read, and it's a good thing I'm pretty good at remembering stuff, otherwise I'd have been completely lost :twilightsheepish:.

Thank you for updating!:yay:

'Apple family traditions' are the reason they're always so strapped for cash. Just sayin'.

To say nothing of the fact that she lost her home and career because of that event. What did they endure? Being laughed at by the locals for a bit. Which doesn't seem to have made them laughing stock for the rest of their lives.

Yeah, sometimes the claim of "She made fun of us" feels like a really hollow justification.

Damn earth ponies. How dare they deny the unicorn master race. Magic is more efficient. No wonder Winter Wrap was late and the Apples are always on the verge of losing the farm.

I loved the interaction between Trixie and Rainbow Dash.:derpytongue2: I'm also happy to see Applejack actually give Trixie a chance. Now Trixie needs to interact with Rarity and the CMC. As well as Fluttershy. I still want to know what was in that basket in the last chapter, and how she got the nerve to obtain said contents. Does Twilight find out what's in there? If so, what was her reaction?:rainbowwild:

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Ta be perfectly fair, she lost her career 'cause apparently everypony in Equestria went totally insane.

Nice to see this update. Regarding the previous chapter, isn't it a little odd that Trixie manage to close such a large power gap?

wooow, I had given up on this updating. I am glad you proved me wrong. : ) I am curious to see how this develops, especially with Trixie and Twilight as their odd rivalry continues.

holy shit:rainbowhuh: IT'S ALIVE!!

i had forgotten this existed

The Apples run on 'hard mode' around the clock. It's been a while, 'eh? This is the only fandom I know of where I can expect a story that's been dead for almost a year to come back to life. 'Course, I already knew you were still active, but still!

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