Kidnap Twilight's dragon. Check.
Hypnotize him. Check.
Command him to ruin Twilight's life. Check.
Accidentally make him fall in love with you. Ch........Wait, what?
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OK I'm interested where this goes
This looks promising...
just not for poor Spike.
--Spade
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Agreed. This looks interesting.
you got my attention now.
Why do I think this is exactly the kind of mess Trixie would put herself in?
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Because misfortune always seem to follow her
Interesting. Will follow!
Yup, very interesting, hope the next chapter doesn't take a long time lol
I hope is damn good love funny.
Am i the only one that would of taken more then just the gem, i mean the shop pony dude is panicking, so you could take more artifacts if your going strait up rob the guy.
I can't wait to see how Spike 'ruins' Twilight's life. I bet he mixes up all the books in the library, or misplaces one of her checklists. Maybe he'll put her quill on the left side of the parchment instead of the right! He'll drive her nuts! And after it all, she'll blame Rainbow Dash.
very nice, VERY nice! I await the next chapter.
6132068 At first that sounds like a good idea but there is a slight problem with that. The fact that you have no idea what any of the other artifacts do.
Buy my mixtape It's called i am going to enjoy this fire story
6137611 motherfucker gots stuff that you can use to take control of dragons and stuff that have you match the power of the girls that controls the FUCKING SUN AND MOON, i think i can grap any thing in there, it will be useful.
6139680 True but not knowing what it does could lead to it blowing you up or something like that. The best option is to ask about some of the artifacts like your browsing then rob him.
[Anticipation Intensifies]
Was it a mare screaming or a stallion screaming like a girl?
When Spike finished his rant I didn't feel bad I was like ooooohhhhhhh in yo face!!!!!! But seriously Twilight is my favorite pony.
The typos add to the humor.
"oink blur", ha.
Poor Spike... Wait, sorry.
Poor life's punching bag that holds the title of 'Spike'.
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Haha I know that made me giggle.
Wait a second, there is a mistake in this chapter:
Everyone know that Spike is Ponyville's third most famous reptile, what about Tank?
As a Tank fan I feel insulted about you demeaning his character and his importance.
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Pinkie Pie is a vert outgoing pony. No doubt she has been seen around Ponyville with Gummy or talks to other ponies about him. Ponies see Spike walking around Ponville himself, plus he is the assistant to Celestia's prized pupil. Rainbow Dash doesn't really take Tank around town much and wouldn't be the type of pony to talk other ponies, besides her friends if course, about Tank. While I have no problem with Tank, he is probably one of my favorite pets, the facts just say he's the third.
yes go on my friend
Exaggerating Twilight's negligence to increase sympathy for Spike, Pinkie's cheap dialogue, Spike's bland reaction to Pinkie... Since it's a Spixie story, I had high hopes but low expectations. The latter won.
6154480 He wasn't getting pissy at you, dude, he was continuing the joke
uh oh shipping just got real
It begins!
Uh, where is Pinkie? I don't see her in this chapter.
That's better. A little over-the-top at times, but a much better to give Pinkie Pie zany things to do and comical ways to screw up rather than just baffle Spike by talking fast and yapping about parties.
It was stupid of them both, however, to prioritize an errand that was far less important than a child's safety. You don't leave a kid restrained--like bait--in a very dangerous location, where you have seen predators emerging to hunt with your own damn eyes.
Author, if you're open to suggestions, I highly recommend Dash and Pinkie return to find Spike missing, suspect Timberwolves, and collapse with overwhelming guilt, thinking they just got Spike violently killed. They deserve to experience the consequences of endangering a child's life.
Dang, and here I was hoping it was a Spike X Chrysalis fic based on the description. Oh well. Read later.
6182269 True enough, pinkie doesn't break her own cannon.
I think he going to crap pearls.
Don't mind him Trixie he is just hanging around.
Although the chapter wasn't bad... I don't think i liked how you were using Pinkie. Yes she can be oblivious to others feelings at times, but having Spike repeatedly punch himself in the face for fun? I dunno... the prank was cool, but the running self-punch gag... wasn't.
Still enjoying the story though!
Wow... Pinkie can be a little callous (usually when she's pointing out something someone would rather not know), and plays pranks, but doing the "stop hitting yourself" constantly is mean. Even if she somehow doesn't think that doing that is mean rather than playful, when Spike politely asks her to stop, she would stop.
Ok I think Pinkie was way out of character, sure Pinkie say things but she would never hurt anyone for fun. The stop hitting yourself is something a bully would, not the element of laughter.
Hmm, I don't like this chapter as much. Like everyone else said, I didn't like how pinkie was portrait. She also made a Pinkie promise to not do that again, yet, she kept trying to do it, definitely not a pinkie style of play.
And Rainbow Dash leaving Spike tied up, hanging from the tree, at the edge of the everfree forest. Yeah, doesn't sound right. Also, couldn't spike just use his claw or his dragon breath to cut/burn the rope.
Over all, just really bad character style. I hope Trixie take Spike with her and Rainbow Dash and Pinkie Pie start feeling remorse of their friend gone missing.
P.S What kinda prank was this anyway, this just seem like bullying to me.
what they did wasn't a prank, it was straight up bullying. and the fact they just left him there was messed up.
ahhahahahahahahhahahahahahah
to be fair, he has been heavily taught not to use it (or his claws) for attack purposes and has been known to freeze under pressure
Panic equals irrationality. If you intimidate a person enough, you can make a schoolyard knot and they'll still be tied up.
Good to see Pinkie acknowledging that this prank may have crossed the line a mite.
See, this is was happenings when a 'dragon' is raised by 'ponies'!
Like the show but, COME ON!
Good job. Please continue!
Well i actually like last chapter so kept up the good work!
It's starting to look like Trixie won't even need the Nightingale to get Spike to go for her. The mane 6 aren't looking too good right now.
6187651 Yeah pretty much my thought too, this is a really really flanterized PINkie pie in this chapter. She not THAT random and ineive. Dash yeah tying to ah tree and in theeverfree no less...uh did they just forgot the timberwolves, cocatris and other dangers..no cause i sure didn't.
Uh-wow, indeed Spike. xDD
Cool story, Bro. Do hope there will be more.
R.I.P