I left for eight years. Now I've returned, a changed beast.
(Sequel to Trial and Error. If you haven't read Trial and Error, read it at my page. There are some elements you'll only understand if you were to read the prequel.)
Nick is your average, every-day High-School Brony. One day, as he was walking to lunch, he was pulled magically into the magically amazing world of Equestria. Now, thanks to Fluttershy, he's trapped there, and needs to go home. Can he find his way back, or will he fall prey to his desire to stay in Equestria?
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Interesting story, I won't say that the premise is original because it isn't but so far it looks promising. HiE are as good a place as any to start.
112524 Obviously the premise isn't original. Those are next to impossible to find these days. Everything's been done, what else can we do? I will say this, though: The story is original. The events occurring in this story were made up on the spot, and they happen as they come. To the best of my knowledge, nothing so far has happened quite like this before, so I reiterate: The story is original.
looks promising so far..
put the part where he explains earth in the second chapter :3
112668 Too late. Chapter two was written last night.
SPIKE NO!!!!! He gonna fuck some shit up...
115442 ... The fuck?
i came here just to comment on the title. i am hoping it is an oblivion/skyrim reference.
129166 It is. The MLP/Skyrim memes are on the rise, hoping to break the arrow in their knee.
I just imagined Spike going all badass and fucking up the whole town. I agree, the fuck?
133063 I'm afraid only Fluttershy gets to be a badass.
135521 This I agree with.
If I didn't know any better, I'd say you already had these ready to go. Good thing, too, seeing as you won't have the time to now that I've got my claws around your throat.
Adding, are we? I suppose that using Brae as a catalyst would come in handy for the fifth temple, against VGAARKLAK. But I just ruined that chapter, so I'm happy to shut up now. Feed me some hate!
Many typos there, but i enjoyed it.
I'm waiting for next chapter...
145635 There were quite a few. Sorry, my editor and I had a problem to work through, so I am glad I usually write these i advance. I've been busy lately, and haven't had the time to write as much, and my editor was also falling behind. Thanks for bringing that to our attention, it should be fixed now.
Fluttershy has no guest room/bed, that's why she slept on the couch when the CMC slept over, they took her only bed. Btw cool story
147322 Nick is on the couch now.
But I know you're right. It's more commonly a storage room, anyway, that's why it's not shown. Did you know that her kitchen doesn't really have a table, either? and that Twilight doesn't even have a kitchen?
Referencing me? Joke's on you. My story got a red light. There will be no "Next Stop: Ponyville," unless I revise the character list to where I have to expand it every chapter..
Did you know that dirt tastes like dirt?
149073 I THOUGHT IT TASTED LIKE MUFFINZ!!!
149133 While we're on the subject, Who was surprised at today's episode? Derpy had lines! And I wasn't expecting her to sound like that!
Yalort. Why does that sound so familiar?
154717 SQUEE!!
!!!
158475
Nice chapter, thought I think this one is shorter than usual and I try decode the puzzle for an hours I almost give up
then God give me a hint 
and when I found it out, I feel really stupid since it is actually so easy haha 
Wait, for next chapter! To read and to proofing my answers is right
158475 Why did you squee?
167447 I squee because you say that YALORT sounds familiar. Therein, you may just have an inkling of what the story is really about. So hooray for you!
He read it at insane speed? Why not LUDACRIS SPEED!
I await the next chapter!
172369 Because I can't find that segment. Dark Helmet had that part taken out of the movie, remember?
As it has been written withinthe holy book, Feed him your knowledge, and he shall feed you his. Ah, Gim.
Mindcraft. Ha. I hope they mentioned Kroghmm in there. He's important.
Glowstone? You must play minecraft. Do you?
176684 I do. I was hoping that somepony would realize that the only ingredient from mnecraft and not from the elder scrolss IV: Oblivion would hold some signifigance before the main characters did. Why didn't Nick see that?
Because I'm not Nick. He may be based off of my arms, and my ability to speak latin, and my love of Fluttershy, but he's not me.
Seriously why does Yalort sound familiar... It comes with the term 'Priest of Yalort' in my memory so it's either a god or a church.... Also, pony Dark Brotherhood? ......YAY MURDER!!!!
180451 I'm so very proud of you for coming this far. If you don't have it in a few chapters, I'll have to drop another cameo, but for now,
General Bong Bong McFtong the Moderately Bonkers.
If you don't remember in five more chapters, I'll drop you a link to the source information. I used that, coupled with the dark brotherhood, to create a religion, of which I am currently high priest. So there's the basis of my story.
Polytheism anypony?
WHY CANT I REMEMBER WHERE YALORT IS FROM?!?!?!?!?! ITS KINLLING MEEEEEEEEEEEE
Still nothin. Damnit, i have such a fucking selective memory.
That name is pimpin
....Is his talent Minecraft?
About time you updated... Very good chapter.