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Dr Atmosphere is in control of the madhouse now! Mare-Do-Well will have to pull out every trick in the book to defeat his master plan! Mare-Do-Well is based off the Mare-Do-Well in the fanfic Waking Nightmares by KnightMysterio. Moderate swearing. Nothing too bad though. Cover by lordbojangles or something like that.
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You are aware that Dr. Atmosphere is a character in Rainbow Factory right?
Oh! Me like. ^_^
Is jeff based off of the popular creepypasta?
Good start. Lets see how MDW beats the snot out of these guys.
3213045 Yup. That's pretty much where the inspiration came from really.
3214785 Yup.
Isn't this doctor atmosphere more like the lesser-known villian the mad hatter.
I'd like a few corrections. It's not Moonbow Peak, it's Moonbow Peek. Anyway, nice to see this here on FiMFiction.
Shimming? It's shimmying.
I think you should replace dived with dove.
different was past them - different way past them
There are a fair number of spelling errors other than these. And remember to type thoughts in italics. And a not that as of your writing, my story is still starting at Season 2, whereas your story is already past 3.
3222074 Ah. Sorry. I'll correct those.
(EDIT) I've recently looked at a map of Equestria. According to that, Manehatten is located off the coast, so I've changed the location from Moongate Valley to Moongate Island, as a valley wouldn't really make sense.
(ANOTHER EDIT) I have now introduced maps! Maps for the sake of maps! How wonderful!
Give me feedback on these. I want to know whether you want them there or not.
(YET ANOTHER EDIT) Sorry about this. I've just looked at the most recent chapter of Waking Nightmares, which is where I got the inspiration for the Jeff character. His appearance in that fic didn't quite match the one in mine, so I edited it. Again.
I would like to say that if Chronicle saw/heard you-know-what happening, that inmate would be left an absolute wreck if not dead outright.
3313380 Without a doubt.
And we just now got to bane.... lovely.
3363735 Beast is going to be slightly different to Bane... but yeah. Pretty much.
This is honestly a brilliant adaptation. The slight differences really make it worth it, rather than just a direct rip-off, even if it could do with a bit more difference. Still, I'm following and waiting to see exactly how different. And how you do the Game Over trick thing in the third Scarecrow/Fear Fear Feeder part.
3372851 Thanks! I'll make it worth your while!
This fight was exciting! I can't wait for Mare-Do-Well: Moongate Origins!
3473734 Yup, that'll come eventually. But I'm doing the Moongate series in order of appearance, so Asylum to City then Origins. And then I'll do a fourth game after that if there is one.
3474545 There will be one. With Kevin Conroy as Batman again yay!
3474554 EXCELLENT. MY MASTER PLAN IS ALMOST COMPLETE. (Maniacal laugh)
Why isn't there a mare cave on moongate. Just curious.
3482986 Yeah, it's something different. I don't believe that Pinkie's a serial killer.
3483842 Well, during Arkham Origins, you can fly to the Batcave whenever you like and I didn't see why Mitta couldn't have done that after Moongate Origins.
3484016 No, I haven't read Cupcakes. And I never will.
As far as I'm concerned, Cupcakes isn't canon to Moongate Asylum.
And now crap hits the fan.
Exactly who plays the joker and Quinn in this exactly. I'm getting mixed results.
3516403 It's complicated.
Just try to explain. Is it like switching between the two. If so I say make atmos joker that way he has no choice but to accept pinkamenas help in moongate city.
3520534 I actually have a plan for Moongate City. But in answer to your question, Atmosphere is the Joker and Pinkamena is... Pinkamena. I honestly don't know what character she represents.
Just saw the arachnid picture. That's one ugly sonuva bitch.
Gonna read this later.
LOL the MLP theme!
In spite of his invulnerability to Discord's magic, I think my character would still be influenced somewhat by your Scarecrow-expy's gas.
3591364 You mean Fear Feeder's gas? Yeah, I don't think Chronicle would have much invulnerability with that stuff. But I also think that it would be like MDW, where he briefly experiences his worst fears, then goes to a platforming section, goes to a beacon of hope or something and then manages to get out of the nightmare.
And then Feeder would probably have to run for it.
The opening was a little sloppy. Mostly because I have no idea what they were talking about with the whole fluttershy kidnapping and pinkamena being a cousin but you have gotten better. And atmos isn't bad just please write a backstory soon. Or does he make an appearance in the third story moongate origins. Probably should also adjust the cave bit back to the island. Cause when the plants grow they didn't reach the city. They stayed on the island and it makes a lot more sense than coming in through the caves because of antiaircraft system. This maybe a high security prison but even they don't have that kind of budget. Also give the killer laughing gas to pinkamena, makes a lot mor sense for her to have it and not constantly using fear gas. Maybe when pinkamena has the two guards hostage have reveal she made her own poison. But the idea is nice. I have actually been waiting for someone to do this and with mitta being an earth pony no one would suspect her of being an alicorn and the princesses have an alibi. It totally works.
3660836 1: I'll try my best to rewrite Atmosphere's backstory.
2: SPOILER ALERT: Atmos and Pinkamena will appear in all the Moongate stories.
3: You make a good point with the cave thing...
4: Pinkamena's not exactly a chemical pony. However, I could introduce a villain that could use chemicals like that...
5: Thanks for your feedback!
Thanks can't wait for the pictures. About the list, I'm just going to assume mitta uses pinkies power of the suit to get the list and pinkamena will be confused how she did that. Speaking of pinkie I was so certain she would be with the warden but nice little surprise, she wasn't. Also I think it would be a good idea to kind of imply that flower and pinkamena dated at one time. And may I ask, when you do the city story are you going to include like a side story for the side missions or are the going to be part of the main story, because I would love to see that happen especially riddler and azreal. Gadgets are most likely to be part of the main story I'm guessing. These are simply suggestions from so do what you feel needs to be done.
3663731 Yup, I'll do the side missions for Moongate City. However, I won't tell you guys what side missions I'll be writing... too many spoilers isn't good...
3663853 I only have one question. When you do Origins who's gonna be in place of the eternally bad ass Slade Wilson, aka Deathstroke the Terminator?
Saw the picture and I thought it was good. Even gave him a different name and made flower power his alias. I like
3665137 Spoilers.
3666831 PM's
Hey is al capow like the penguin, black mask, or the ventriloquist their all mobsters so I'd like a reference point later on.
3690589 Al Capow is just a punny and pony version of Al Capone.
3691185 I know that but is a counterpart for one of the batman mob bosses. Even if it is just referenced like falcone... Or would be falcon for a griffin mobster.
3728305 ...That is an excellent idea for the Falcone thing. But no, Capow isn't based off any of the Batman mob bosses.
3728350 I'm kind of focusing on future villains that will be used in the later series.
Atmos is already taken though he may have made an excellent strange. Penguin- maybe dodo for like a flightless Pegasus, catwoman I can't really do anything for that, you're on your own, ra's al ghul raising ghouls maybe for a unicorn, maybe take a page from another mare do well writer, for death stroke and freeze. That's about all I've got and these are just suggestions for the villains of the later stories. So just put them under consideration.