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Servant Phoenix


Christian brony who loves writing superpowers and emotional depths.

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Twilight Sparkle finds new information about the Elements of Harmony. Because of not being worthy to their elements, the six mares are called give an account for their mistakes. A fight starts. A fight against the shadows of Darkness, a fight for redemption.

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Revised on 2013.09.26. The story happens before season three.
Reformatted on 2014.04.27.
Rewritten on 2014.07.06.

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 14 )

I hope you will enjoy my novel. This is my first story in my life ever that I wrote in English. Feel free to send me grammar mistakes that you find.

[edit] Most of my story is already complete, but the later chapters still have to go through a few revisions and grammar checks. I plan posting chapters daily, so stay tuned :twilightsmile:

[edit2] After two months of wrestling, I have finished rewriting the whole story on 2014.07.06. At this point, the views/likes/dislikes were 494/14/3, which is from now on completely invalid, as it no longer mirrors the massively improved quality of this fiction.

Pretty good so far. I like this story so far, and I hope you continue writing more chapters.

nice job, a few spelling mistakes, such as at the beginning you put has and not had, but good nonetheless, I look forward to the next chapters:twilightsmile:

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:rainbowderp: :rainbowhuh:
I did not even know this story exists. After checking a few chapters I can assure you that the two story will be completely different, despite the title.

1577259 Well okay. Guess I'll give it a read.

Huh...now this seems familiar...(That's because it sounds like MY story)

Just playing, author. I gave this a read. Although I'm a bit iffy on the the whole shadow concept, this is definitely different from my story.

Just...watch out, okay? Don't be stealing nothing...

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My story was 90% complete before I even learnt about yours :twilightsmile:. I read a few chapters of yours, and the concept, the characters will be completely different, so do not worry. By the way, I liked your story, the bagel chapter cheered me up :rainbowlaugh:.

MOOOOOAAAARRR:flutterrage:

Yay :yay:! An upload! Please continue.

Dear Readers!

I am both happy and sad to announce that the novel has reached "completed" status. Thank you all who encouraged me. I really enjoyed writing this, and I really hope that you will enjoy reading it. :twilightsmile:

Ah, "love". Well, let's not dwell upon this anymore.

This is a really great story! Good job!:pinkiehappy:

4081291 Thank you. :twilightsmile:

This was my first story ever.

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