• Member Since 21st Jun, 2012
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Jet Cannon


I came here to read awesome stories, post mediocre ones, and chew gum. And I'm all out of gum. Well, actually, I never had any gum in the first place, but you get the idea.

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Hey anybody who reads this! :twilightsmile:

Just a little note: this is my first short little oneshot, and also my first "story" not involving some form of darker or more serious undertones. This kind of thing has probably been done already, but hey, now I've done it and there's nothing you could have done to stop me! :pinkiecrazy:

It may strike you as somewhat disjointed, but I reckon that's what Twilight, clever though she is, would probably be like if she's just phrasing a family letter off the top of her head, without the same care for structure etc. that she may put into a friendship report. Just my thoughts on the matter.

To Kirakina, if you read this: I'm sorry! I'm sorry! :fluttershyouch:

Well, I liked it. It was nice and it sounded like somthing Twilight would write. Well done, sir!

If a foal wants to read the latest adventure novel by Anthony Horseowitz...

And that's what gave you a fav :pinkiehappy:

But seriously, well done! A good story that I enjoyed immensely!

Very sweet, and very much in Season One character. :twilightsmile:

1529614>>1529857>>1529976 Gaw, shucks... :twilightblush:

This made me all warm and fuzzy inside.

loved this, it was really sweet, and not difficult at all to imagine in Twilight's voice.

This was really sweet. The one line that got me laughing out loud was

If another Unicorn wants to read about Starswirl the Bearded’s magical theorems… well, it hasn’t happened yet, but if they did then they can come to me and my library!

I can't wait to see more stories like this! :twilightsmile:

2506830 I was picturing her excitedly rambling on at this point, then suddenly deflating a bit as she remembered that she's the only pony in Ponyville likely to be interested in them! :facehoof:

Thank you for your kind words, but as to whether any more sweet little nothings are on the way... well, we'll see. :twilightsheepish:

After all the shipping-stories-with-detailed-sex-and-implausible-pairings, after all the dark and violent alternate universe fics, after all the human-in-Equestria with uninteresting OCs, I was finding fanfiction in this fanbase depressing. Nice to see someone hasn't forgotten the shows roots! :twilightsmile:

I don't mind darker undertones, but some of the stories I've read are so out of character it might as well be a different show, and they seem violent simply for the sake of violence, so something short and sweet toned like this is appreciated :yay:

2508061 [All his other stories can probably be summed up by that first paragraph's complaints] Yup! Important to remember where we came from, after all! :twilightblush:

Sweet, fun and, more importantly, believeable. Twilight is clever, indeed, but also really emotional at times, so a little bit scatter-brained syle is what is actually expected, seing as it's dictated by her, not written by horn. And indeed, that seems to be exactly the kind of thing in-the-show Twilight projects about her status and current whereabouts. Which makes this amazingly close to canon characterisation. Bravo.

I could see this being canon. Feels very in-character. A thoroughly enjoyable little read.

2736618 'Twas my intention, and thank you. :twilightsmile:

Ah, the joys of being a librarian. You never know what you are going to be asked to help find. You often learn a lot about things that you never knew existed while helping people. (Sometimes you wish you could have stayed blissfully ignorant of some things, but I digress.) I thoroughly enjoyed this. It has the perfect tone, and it certainly reads like something Twilight would pen. (Or have Spike pen, now that I think about it.)

2865648 Oh, I imagine she knows most of what's in there already, knowing her. :twilightsheepish: Thank you for your kind words.

3706481 It's a conspiracy, dude... :derpyderp1:
(And, y'know, thanks. :yay:)

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