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  • T Feathers of Blue and Gold

    Spitfire and Rainbow Dash come to grips with the aftermath of a thunderstorm gone wrong, crippling injuries, and the struggles of a young relationship in the sequel to Fire & Rain  · Ruirik
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When Spitfire finds herself grounded on the team injured list just before a show in Manehatten, she prepares for her life to crumble around her.  The experience leads her to come across Rainbow Dash, temporarily managing the Manehatten weather teams.  The two fliers will discover that sometimes it takes the darkest moments of our lives to find the brightest ones.

The Sequel: Feathers of Blue and Gold is out now!

Video Review by Goomba Brony!

Edited by the wonderful Taxus, Sorren, and Sojourner.

I do my own cover art.

First Published
23rd Oct 2012
Last Modified
2nd Jun 2014

You've got me interested. I'll be waiting for more.

>>1490880

Thank you for the comment!  More will be on the way soon, this is my project when I need a break from my other story.

Hm....  I like how this reads.  Story seems solid, and I can't see many (If any) grammar problems.

Fav'ed and tracked.  Keep it going.

~SkeeterTL

:moustache: Please good sir, go on and bring us more.

A couple of errors: I saw one instance of Soaring and strait should be straight.

She drifted to the inside of their aerial track, --> comma should be semicolon

where-with-all --> wherewithal

half-to-death --> half to death

his grip loosening as he let her breath. --> breathe

>>1490996

Thanks very much!

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!:pinkiehappy:

Jex

Has plenty of potential. Will keep an eye on this one and see how it develops.

Good luck!

interesting, interesting...

I'm excited to read more :raritystarry:

One Last Thrill - Slash with Myles Kennedy

Will read later - Too tired.

YAY DASHFIRE! OR SPITDASH!

Great story u just got a like and a fav

Not bad, pretty well written, can't wait to read more.

Damn. I keep coming in on good stories and have to wait ages for them to be updated. But this is bound to be good, so i eagerly await the next chapter.

nice, veary nice.  I like sing the bo;ts more layed back like this. but i dont think Dash is all that younger then spit.

>>1491184

I see your One Last Thrill, and I raise you Night Train :moustache:

>>1491231

It's only the best ship ever :eeyup:

>>1491336

Thank you very much! :twilightsmile:

>>1491662

Soon :rainbowdetermined2:

>>1492914

It's all just guesswork, but I'm kinda running on the general guess of a 3-5 year age difference.  By the way, loved Time in Equestria :twilightsmile:

>>1493809 personal opinion, twidash is best. but this is third. behind rarispike. you never see spitdash anywhere...

>>1493820

Twidash is my very close second, but good DashFire (hard as it is to find) I prefer by a hair.

>>1493826 very good sir... i like rarispike second because it usually has tragedy to make them see the romance. i love those types of fics :twilightsmile:

>>1493853

If you enjoy more sad romance stories (pardon the shameless self-promotion) I'd recommend you check out my other story In an Instant if you haven't already.

>>1494031

Hope you enjoy it! :twilightsheepish:

>>1491203

Hope you enjoyed it!  And funny enough it took me all day to realize the Dune reference in your name :rainbowderp:

This story is............. AMAZING I LOVE IT Can't wait for the next chapter .... Kudos to you :pinkiehappy:

Definitely a very solid start :twilightsmile: From a grammatical standpoint, the only thing that stood out enough to detract a little from it was one instance of "In case" being in one word. Aside from that, it's a very good setup, I'll be tracking to see where you take it.

man, and I thought Rainbow's accident was bad. not a bad start, keep up the good work. (as much as I'm embarrassed to say it, when will the sappy stuff happen?)

Yes. Just. Yes. This has my like, and if I could spam the upvote button, I would, but I can't, so sorry, no over 9,000 thumbs for you. But I'll be watching this... closely. :twilightsmile:

>>1505470

Thanks so much!  And Chapter 2 will be up tonight!

Why is Rainbow always in Manehattan?

>>1507322

Plot device I'll explain in part 3: extreme: the revenge

ohhh i can't wait to see how the convo between RD and SF goes. hopefully this ponyrazzi keeps away from them long enough

>>1507100 Massive epic point, dude(tte)!!! You have received :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

>>1507571

All them manly mustaches!  And I am indeed a dude

Because RainbowFire always seemed hot in my head... :rainbowderp:


>>1507838

Welcome to the club, we have jackets!

>>1507845

:yay::yay::yay:I'll wear mine proudly!:yay::yay::yay:

Darn, well done! But really, the author needs to write faster!

>>1513446

I go as fast as I can :fluttercry:

>>1513611

Nah, take your time, it's worth ever bit of it! Nice cover art btw! :twilightsmile:

>>1513839

Thanks very much!  And for the record, I'm just finishing up the next chapter of my other story.  After that I plan to write chapter 3 of Fire & Rain.  It should be ready this weekend unless I get derailed by writers block :twilightsheepish:

I'm loveing this story so far. Its well writen and not rush as I've seen all to often with fan fics. I need to stop reading these stories befor they're finished. I hate waiting. But don't rush it. Like Lazerace said its worth it.:derpytongue2:

This is exciting! I can't wait to see what comes next!

Ok, see what you meant. Well the long road is nice too. I'm gonna watch where you take this :twilightsmile:

Have to say though: I'm not a fan of cliffhanger :trixieshiftleft:

It's a very good build up and I wonder what reason you will give them to go out

>>1520767

Thanks much for the comment, I'm actually about halfway into chapter 3 now.  Hopefully I'll get that uploaded sometime today or tomorrow morning.

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