Spitfire grunted as her hooves contacted the soft grass, her wings outstretched to help cushion the impact. A mild ache persisted in her right wing where her muscles were healing nicely enough. Spitfire looked at the wing with a small smile.
She had made great progress since she had started seeing Triage regularly. A daily regimen of stretches and exercises had given her full extension of her wing, and nearly three weeks after first injuring herself she was able to glide again without pain. On a good day she could even fly short distances.
Spitfire turned as Rainbow Dash landed beside her, the weather mare flashing the Wonderbolt a giddy smile.
“That was great, Spitfire! You glided at least three-hundred feet!”
“Thanks, Dash,” the Wonderbolt replied with a genuine smile.
“Does your wing still feel okay? Do you need to take a break?”
Spitfire took a second to look at her right wing, flexing it several times and carefully noting any sensation she felt. “I think I have a few good glides left in me, but after that I’ll give it a rest for a couple hours.”
“Sounds like a plan to me,” Rainbow said as she leaned close enough to steal a chaste nuzzle. “Just let me know if anything changes.”
Spitfire returned the nuzzle. “Sure will, Rainbow. Thanks again for flying me all the way out here to practice.”
“Hey, you made it a good chunk of the way by yourself. Besides, what are marefriends for?” Rainbow asked, sheepishly rubbing at the back of her head.
Spitfire chuckled as she leaned over to kiss Rainbow’s cheek. The hill that Rainbow and Spitfire had come to for Spitfire’s gliding therapy was the same hill Rainbow had landed on after the rainboom. It was also the same hill Rainbow had set up their picnic on almost two weeks earlier. It had become their spot when they needed to get away from the noise and crowds of Manehattan, their spot to hide from the responsibilities of the world.
Spitfire could hardly wait until she could fly the whole distance on her own. As nice as it was to hold close to Rainbow, to feel the beat of her heart and the breath in her lungs, Spitfire would always prefer to fly by her own power.
She had managed to glide a decent chunk of the way once she and Rainbow had found a few good thermal updrafts. Spitfire had felt like a filly learning to fly again, but it was worth the awkward sensation to be riding on her own wings again. Rainbow had kept close the whole time, never out of reach just in case anything went wrong.
When Spitfire’s wing did inevitably tire, Rainbow quickly maneuvered under her and allowed Spitfire to ride the rest of the way. After eating the lunches they had packed, Rainbow had helped Spitfire with some wing stretches and then the practice glides had begun.
Spitfire crouched down before she launched herself forward, catching the air in her wings and allowing the wind to carry her as far as possible. Rainbow wasn’t far behind her, catching up with a gentle flap of her wings.
“Hey, Spitfire?”
“Yesss?”
“Got any funny celebrity stories?”
Spitfire hummed for a moment, her hoof rubbing her chin as she thought about it. There were countless locker room stories from her time as a Wonderbolt and even before that when she and Soarin’ were still in the guard. Those stories, while entertaining, fell mostly into the category Spitfire liked to think of as the ‘you had to be there’ stories, and most Wonderbolt stories revolved around various in-jokes that had developed over the years. Spitfire’s thoughts turned to meet and greets after shows, she smiled as she recalled an amusing event.
“Do you know Prince Blueblood?” Spitfire asked.
“I know of him; my friend Rarity met him once, but she just gets mad whenever anypony asks her about it.”
Spitfire chuckled. “That seems to happen around him. Anyway, this was a few years ago, before I was the team captain, and the first time that I had performed at the Grand Galloping Gala. We did our show and then we had to spend the rest of the night doing meet and greets with the fancy ponies in the VIP section.
“I did that for a couple hours, then managed to catch enough of a break to get some food and find a quiet place to take a breather. That’s when Blueblood spotted me. Well, he had a few drinks before that and he was in a very forward mood, so he stumbled over and started putting the moves on me.”
“I bet that was interesting,” Rainbow said with an amused snicker.
Both mares grunted as they landed. The took a moment to turn around before launching themselves in the air again.
“Oh yes it was,” Spitfire answered, her wings giving a light flap to stay aloft. “This was back when Zephyr and I were still dating, and I had been ordered to keep my interest in mares quiet. So when Blueblood started hitting on me I told him I was flattered, but I was already in a relationship.
“Well, he leaned back in a huff and asked where my date was. Before I could answer he was sitting next to me with a hoof around my waist and started trying to woo me with his words. Which is when I noticed he was wearing a horn extension.”
“Wait, what!?” Rainbow balked.
Spitfire nodded, an amused grin on her lips as they landed again. “Yeah, when a unicorn wears one, if you’re close enough, you can see the adhesive along the base.”
“So...” Rainbow put her hoof to her lips to stifle her giggles, “so you’re saying that... that Prince Blueblood has a t-tiny horn?”
Spitfire gave Rainbow a matter of fact nod, holding her front hooves out so that the space between them was somewhat less than three inches.
“That’s terrible,” Rainbow managed to assert as she laughed.
“Protip, Rainbow, if you ever see a unicorn with a horn longer than five or six inches, then they’re wearing a horn extension.”
“So, how’d you get him to leave?”
“Well, he was explaining to me this newspaper he was starting called The Canterlot Daily where he would “personally hoof pick every article to ensure quality” when Soarin’ spotted me and came over. I managed to slip out of his grasp and introduced Soarin’ as my coltfriend. Soarin’ went along with the act, and Blueblood left in a huff.”
Rainbow chuckled as she shook her head. “I’ll have to tell Rarity about that sometime.”
“Oh, I forgot to ask you the other night, how did your meeting with Fleetfoot go?” Rainbow asked.
“She wasn’t home, actually,” Spitfire answered. “Wasted half my damn Wednesday waiting for her, then I find out from Misty that Fleetfoot have been on a camping trip to Neighagra falls for the last week and won’t be back till tomorrow sometime at the earliest.”
“Ahh, well in that case, how about I go with you?” Rainbow asked.
Spitfire hesitated as she thought about it. “You sure? I mean, Fleetfoot’s a pretty cool mare, but when she’s mad she can be kind of a pain in the flank.”
“What would she be mad about anyway? I mean is it just that we’re dating or what?”
Spitfire sighed and dug at the grass with a hoof. “It’s your rainboom, actually.”
“What about it?”
“Well,” Spitfire hummed for a moment as she thought of how best to continue. “Well, Dash, let me put it to you like this: How would you feel about teaching anypony else the Rainboom?”
Rainbow considered the question for a moment before she answered. “Um, well, maybe someday, sure. But not right now, no.”
“Fair enough, but why not now?” Spitfire challenged.
“I... I’m not ready to be a teacher yet.”
“You’re teaching cloud pushers to be lightning wranglers.”
“That’s different, that’s for work!” Rainbow said with stomp of her hoof.
“I know, but these are the kinds of arguments Fleetfoot would bring up, and if you’re gonna get hit with them I’d rather you be prepared.” Spitfire explained, draping her wing over Rainbow’s back. “So, why do you think you’re not ready to teach anypony a rainboom?”
“I,” Rainbow sighed, running a hoof through her mane, “I can’t teach it. Not yet.”
“Why not?” Spitfire asked, her curiosity piqued.
“I can do the rainboom, yeah, but I can’t do a perfect rainboom. The first two were happy accidents, and ever since then I can only do it if conditions are perfect. The slightest turbulence and the barrier snaps back just like it always used to. I’ve got it down so I can do it most of the time, but not all of the time. And to be perfectly honest, when the barrier snaps back it’s really dangerous. If you can’t recover then there’s a really good chance you’re gonna get hurt, and I don’t want anypony’s blood on my hooves.”
“I agree, the sonic barrier is exponentially harder to recover from than a normal wipeout,” Spitfire agreed. “However every Wonderbolt goes through rigorous training in wipeout recovery techniques just for emergencies like that.”
“Spitfire,” Rainbow began, her tone as serious as Spitfire had ever heard, “how many wonderbolts have attempted the rainboom?”
“Every one of us has, at least once since you did it at the Best Young Flyer competition,” she admitted reluctantly.
“And what happened when the barrier snapped back on you?” Rainbow asked.
Spitfire frowned in disappointment. “For the ponies that didn’t complete an aerial recovery, the injuries ranged from cuts and bruises, muscle strains, twisted joints, and in one instance a broken wing.”
“Who broke the wing?” Rainbow asked.
“Wave Chill.” Spitfire answered with a simple shrug.
“Is that why he was out last season?”
“Yup.”
“Dang, sorry to hear that.”
“Eh, he got better.”
“True,” Rainbow gave a quick shake of her head to get back on track, “anyway, the rainboom isn’t easy to do, even for me. When I can do it perfectly every time, then yeah, I’ll teach it, but until then I’m not ready and I don’t want anypony to get hurt because of something I did wrong.”
Spitfire smiled as she leaned over and placed a gentle kiss on Rainbow’s lips. “You’re gonna make a fantastic Wonderbolt someday, Rainbow Dash.”
Rainbow’s cheeks flushed red from the compliment as she grinned from ear to ear.
“So, I can go with you to meet Fleetfoot?”
“We’ll talk to her together, cross my heart and hope to die.”
“Awesome,” Rainbow cheered, “this is gonna be great!”
Spitfire chuckled and slowly stretched her wing again, holding it out to its full extension as long as she could. “Say, Dash, why don’t you take a break. I’ll just do a couple more glides and some cooldown exercises, then I’ll join you.”
“Okay, well, if you need anything though, just say so,” Rainbow said, giving Spitfire a hug before she trotted up to the large oak tree where they had left their bags.
Spitfire smiled, she loved how gullible Rainbow could be sometimes. She watched as Rainbow fished through her saddlebag and pulled out her Daring Do book. Rainbow sat with her back against the tree, the book held in front of her as she settled down to read.
True to her word, Spitfire did continue her glides and cooldown exercises. At least until Rainbow was entranced enough by her book that she wasn’t paying attention to Spitfire. Thats when she set her plan into motion.
Spitfire casually glided behind the nearest large tree she could get to. Peering out, she observed Rainbow, her magenta eyes fixated on the pages in front of her. She was oblivious to the predator that now stalked towards her.
Spitfire kept her body low to the ground, blades of grass tickling at her belly as she advanced. She moved carefully, using whatever tall grasses or shrubs she could as cover until the last possible moment. Slowly she spread her wings, vengeance for her shameful beating in the battle of pillows was so close that Spitfire could almost taste it.
With a lick of her lips, Spitfire leapt at Rainbow in a fierce warcry. Rainbow yelped in surprise as she caught the full brunt of the Wonderbolt-shaped projectile. After an all too brief tussle, Spitfire pressed her lips to Rainbow’s, silencing any question Rainbow had thought of. She noticed the irked glare Rainbow was shooting her, and responded with a playful wink and a smirk.
Rainbow accepted the silent challenge, her forelegs wrapping around Spitfire as she pressed deeper into the kiss. Spitfire let out a soft moan, her guard lowering for a moment; it was all Rainbow needed. Spitfire barely had time to squeal as Rainbow leveraged her strength and rolled them so Spitfire was underneath her.
Her protests were silenced when Rainbow’s tongue infiltrated her mouth. She heard Rainbow giggle as their tongues vied for dominance. Spitfire took stock of her situation: she was pinned on her back with her marefriend running the show. Spitfire also decided that it simply wouldn’t do to be defeated so easily.
She bided her time and enjoyed the kiss until Rainbow seemed to lose her focus on holding Spitfire down. Not that Spitfire blamed her; the heated passion of their kiss was very enjoyable for her as well. Sensing her opportunity, Spitfire let her hoof trace a line down Rainbow’s spine, the delicate action sending a shiver through the younger mare. Her hoof came to rest on Rainbow’s cutie mark, eliciting a surprised gasp from Rainbow.
It was the distraction Spitfire had needed, and in an instant she was back on top. The Wonderbolt soothed the weather manager’s pout with another tender kiss. Her left hoof traced tiny circles over Rainbow’s cutie mark while her right hoof reached up to gingerly stroke Rainbow’s cheek.
In turn, Rainbow’s right hoof slid over Spitfire’s back, their duel forgotten in favor of simpler passions. The kiss broke only long enough so both mares could catch their breath. A filly-like giggle escaped Spitfire, her hoof stroking Rainbow’s mane.
“You know, you’re really cute when you’re blushing,” Spitfire whispered.
“Sh-shut up!” Rainbow said, her cheeks burning fiercely.
“Oh, if you insist,” Spitfire said, her lips planting a gentle kiss on Rainbow’s forehead and a second on the tip of her nose before their lips met again. Spitfire’s hoof teased over Rainbow’s cutie mark again, earning a noticeable groan from the younger mare. Spitfire reluctantly broke their kiss again.
“You okay?”
“Yeah,” Rainbow said, trying to avoid eye contact.
“Rainbow, what is it?” Spitfire asked.
Rainbow bit her bottom lip anxiously, her cheeks managing to achieve what may have been a new shade of red. She motioned to her hip where Spitfire was rubbing her cutie mark.
“Oh, ticklish there?” Spitfire asked, a mischievous grin forming on her lips.
“No, no, it’s... my, erm, well...” Rainbow squirmed uncomfortably. “It’s a um... you know...”
Spitfire’s face scrunched in confusion for a minute before the realization hit her like a ton of bricks. “Oh. Oh! Um, I’m sorry, I didn’t—”
“It’s okay, really,” Rainbow assured her.
“I won’t do that again, Rainbow. Sorry, I didn’t mean to make you uncomfortable.”
Rainbow was quiet for a long moment before she spoke, her body shivering under Spitfire’s warmth.
“You could, if you wanted to...” she whispered.
Spitfire’s hoof gently caressed its way over Rainbow’s shoulder, moving to her chest where it traced a delicate line down until it came to rest on her midriff. Rainbow’s jaw trembled anxiously, her cheeks flushed crimson as Spitfire’s eyes remained locked with hers.
“Rainbow?”
“Yeah?” Rainbow said breathily.
“Are you... are you sure you want this?”
“Y-yeah,”
Spitfire gulped, her heart fluttering in her chest. Her hoof drifted lower. “Tell me to stop, and I’ll stop.”
Rainbow nodded, her body quaking like a leaf in the breeze. Spitfire leaned down, their lips meeting in another heated kiss.
sexy tiem!
keep it up i always look forward to this story
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Sweet chapter
lovely chapter
My Monday is complete! Nice to see Spitfire healing, if slowly. Can't wait for these two to get their hooves on Red Top!.
say = saying
too = to
So do we, Rainbow. So do we.
You might want to change that to left and right; I don't think Spitfire has her hoof crossing between them over Dash's belly.
Now, just a quick question so I will know for future reference; do you plan to write mature chapters in a separate story, or are you leaving it up to the readers imagination if they want to go that far?
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aww darn it i was hoping to see them get down n dirty
2466119 Considering the lack of a sex tag, I doubt it's going to happen. I think this story was meant to stay teen, and as such, no 'intimate' stuff will truly be described. Shame though... It would really complete the relationship since in my opinion sex is part of sealing ones bond with their partner. Unless it's just a 'fuck friends' thing, but I seriously doubt this is the case here.
I like how this chapter turned out, Although I was rather surprised at the ending, I couldn't help but smile a little Rainbow, while normally really clammed up and only acting tough and sometimes unforgiving, she really is a big softy. I like how she gets portrayed under Spitfire's gaze and company. As if RD would ever be so... soft. Wow, I really like it! 10 out of 5!
I like how this chapter turned out, Although I was rather surprised at the ending, I couldn't help but smile a little Rainbow, while normally really clammed up and only acting tough and sometimes unforgiving, she really is a big softy. I like how she gets portrayed under Spitfire's gaze and company. As if RD would ever be so... soft. Wow, I really like it! 10 out of 5!
...aaand scene.
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Fixed, thanks!
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Make no mistake, they're fucking. I'm just leaving all the messy details to your imaginations as I'm not interested in writing clop.
As always great story. Though I cant help but feel somethings are missing, left out, or forgotten. Going from one chapter to another feels like a record skip. <-- just being honest.
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Could you be more specific about which things? Cause while chapter 30 is the largest difference of time in terms of the other chapters, there is a reason for it.
2466159 That's pretty funny. You're not interested in writing it (I am assuming because it is somehting you dislike), but you're implying it so blatantly that we as readers can imagine it is perfectly fine. You sir have me confused, but don't think this is an attack on your reasoning, it's just pretty ironic.
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I noticed the gap more so in the transaction from telling soarin about the newspost to this chapter. and I was a little lost when Spitfire was talking about visiting Fleetfoot. I am sure you have great reason for them in due time. And when this story is completed and read from start to finish everything will tie together. If I notice anything in the previous chapters I will message you them. anything to help out my favorite FireRain Story and Author.
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I suppose it would be simplest to say: I just don't feel like writing a sex scenes. That said, I try to write characters as naturally as possible, so if it makes sense for them to rut, they're gonna rut. Someone else can feel free to write the messy details. For now though, I prefer to leave that to the imaginations of those who are interested in it.
2466196 Sorry for interrupting, but i have one question about your nicname. Does "Ruirik" mean the name of the first russian tzar? And if it does, are you russian? И если и здесь я угадал, то это очень приятно встретить своего на fimfic.
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I am not Russian I am sad to say. The most dominant ethnic bloodline in me is Greek. That said, my nickname "Ruirik" is a direct reference to this Rurik who I stumbled across during a late night Wikipedia expedition. Still not sure how I found him, but I did and I liked the sound of his name. As for why mine is spelled Ruirik and not Riurik or Rurik, that was a typo that I didn't notice until later and have been way too lazy to fix.
I'm off of the net for a few days, I come back this is updated.
What a thing to come back to. Hehe.
Nice chapter as usual, can't wait for more. (I want a home and a place to use my computer, damnit)
~Skeeter The Lurker
2466260 That what i was trying to say. Whatever, pronouncing don't change anything=) This Rurik is the first foreign ruler of Russia. And really, how did you run into this article?
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A combination of insomnia, alcohol, and Wikipedia.
2466336 Heh =) that wasn't kind of "Twilight's" studying, was it? By the way, thank you for this story, i am gonna read it in 2 weeks. It would be better if i do it right now but i have to read Background pony at first. And this fanfic is PRETTY big, but it is really worth it. You will have nice time if you would read this story
Great work! I am loving this story!
Russian emperor or not, your writing skills still continue to impress.
You've made Rainbow a lot more soft-spoken and docile than I would expect her to be. (I'm reminded of this here in this chapter). While this is the sort of thing that would ordinarily bother me, it doesn't. What's impressive about it is not that you've done it, but how well you've done it; by adding just the right about ice cream, you've really enhanced the flavor of the monkey brains without overpowering any one element! The flavor speaks for itself and little justification is necessary, I like it!
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In regards to Rainbow's personality--specifically her more docile nature in this-- I justify it as this is how she acts when her guard is down. We see moments of this occasionally on the show, such as in Mare Do Well (an episode I do hate) where she gets very sullen at the prospect of being alone, Sonic Rainboom, where she gets very bad stage fright, And Read it and Weep. Further still, we all tend to act a bit different around certain people, be they family or romantic interests.
With Spitfire, Rainbow registers her as a figure of authority--someone she looks up to and respects. Moreover, she also doesn't have the experiences that Spitfire has, so she is more inclined to be subservient until she is more comfortable with her own *ahem* skills. However the more comfortable she gets, the more she starts to assert herself, hence the little dominance duels they have now and again.
All that said, I just have this funny idea in my head that out of all the mane 6, Rainbow would be the most romantically submissive, whereas Fluttershy is the secret dominatrix, Twilight is the control freak, Rarity is the proper lady who is in charge without appearing in charge, Applejack has a rope fetish, and Pinkie is the peppy christian girl who will party way to hard and get knocked up by some guy she's only been dating a couple weeks.
2466159 That is probably the most blunt and brilliant sentence I've ever read, "make no mistake, they're fucking."
Curse tuesday, wednesday, thursday, friday, saturday and sunday. They keep me from monday's Fire and Rain updates.
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I am tempted to try and convince you to make a side-story containing the "Dirty" stuff like some other people do
That aside, nice to see a new chapter out
And then sex happened.
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Great chapter, updates to this story are something I look forward to on Mondays. Secondly that random idea would be hilarious to actually read though I have no idea how they would work as a story.
Fucking adorable!
...literally.
Really though, you are an expert at this romance business.
Even "and then they fucked" becomes classy and heartwarming with you.
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I do concur Ruirik. And allow me to impress upon you that what I say, I do not say out of some abject need to kiss butts or anything. If I don't agree or like something I see online, I usually just ignore it or at the least, say nothing.
The unveiling of the mask and the examination of what lies underneath is a process that has always fascinated me (and countless others).
Rainbow's response to meeting her childhood heroes was fully appropriate. I would have expected her to flaunt and boast at least sporadically what with that being a fairly reliable knee-jerk defensive response for her, but you managed to address that just in time to keep both of my eyebrows at a nice uniform height. (With mare do well doodie).
Have you read the Pony Psychology series? if you haven't, I recommend it.
I like the idea of rainbow being a submissive lover for certain. The contrast in character to her public facing and most well known self is certainly exciting. As for the rest of the mane 6, all great ideas hehe.
Personally, if I were a horse-sex novelist, I would probably go with something a bit more... polarized. Hmmmm, maybe with Fluttershy as some kind of crazed tentacle fetishist? Rarity as a dirty street-walker? Hmmmmmm...
Yeah when it comes to pulverizing psychological foundations and structures, none of that wussy high explosive stuff for me, give me that good radioactive stuff that hungry guy in north korea is brandishing...
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***TWICE***
Awwww come on its just getting good.
Well... this wasn't what I expected from the chapter title and the first half of the chap^^ nice suprise^^ Good thing they're not in the city right now^^
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I try to keep you all guessing!
2467199 well you definitely hit the mark there^^ hehe
Tucker can you take it from here?
Thank you.
Cant help but think of this comic when I read this story. Will the Manehatten weather ponies be able to handle the upcoming storm or will Rainbow Dash have to save the day?
And here i thought i weren't gonna go explicit on us, good chapter :)
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It's been a really good day for updates, i have read about 28 chapters today Including the updates it's been great.
CB
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I don't think I went explicit, I just drove up to it and parked the car there
dey make rainboomboom
see and this is why i now cant wait for mondays keep up the good work
Oh... If only there was an option able clop scene ;(
I know you won't write it, but someone needs to make a good Spitfire/Rainbow Dash clop story!
Personal rant aside, I loved the chapter! Even if it maybe ended a little prematurely.... IMO
Naw, I don't have any real complaints, mind you. Keep up the amazing writing
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Ended prematurely you say?
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Oh-ho-ho I like where this is goi-...damnit so close
Someone will be hunted or make an additional clop scene....