• Published 2nd Jan 2012
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The Fillycaust - Jiopop



Princess Celestia orders the extermination of all Earth ponies throughout Equestria.

Comments ( 38 )

I'm going to hell for reading this...
Allwell,
Hail celestia.:trollestia:
Good day.:moustache:

DAMNIT! WHERE'S THE FUCKING EARTH PONY TOURTURE? :flutterrage:

Long live the New Lunar Republic!

I haven't even read this but I can go ahead and say fuck you good sir fuck you :twilightangry2:

346502 And I can go ahead and say fuck you for judging a book by it's cover. People need to stop commenting on books they haven't read.

346551

I'm just pissed twilight hasn't killed celestia (if that's a later add in i apologize and I will read)

hail lunar and maybe a bit of celestria ;D cant beat filly turor nom nom xD

:unsuresweetie: ugggg I don't want to read it but..... ITS TOO DAMN GOOD!!!!
Also you need to have AJ and PP encounter other earth pony side characters such as Cherilee, mayor mare
Other than that.... Awesome story ignore the bad comments. This was a good idea!!

Is it bad that I'm dissapointed in the lack of earth ponies being raped and otherwise harmed by unicorns (emphasis on the former, since in this world I'd imagine unicorns wanting to breed out inferior earth ponies with their noble unicorn sperm)? I guess that is bad.

Oh, well... :trixieshiftleft::trixieshiftright:

Hm.. You know what, fuck it, I don't even believe in hell, so TRACKED GOOD SIR! :moustache:

~Parajack :twilightsheepish:

347987 No, it is totally normal to wish harm upon those who have done harm to the people. The earth ponies should either get the race-change proceddure, or accept that they are inferior instead of attempting to kill our beloved Chairman (Or Chairmare) Celestia.

I like where this is going, now there will be more prisoners.
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patience happyface, this is likely just a build up to the tragic and hilarious ending where they all die slow, painful and horrific deaths. It will be a funny sight to see.

350436 yes it shall indeed, Oh btw, there is another flame war declared, check my blog post for more info.

I'm tempted to make a spinoff called "Rutting Squads". The concept would be, instead of running camps with are inefficient, Celestia decides to simply breed the earth ponies out of existence by creating these squads of magically superpowered pegasii and unicorns to impregnate female earth ponies and create pegasii or unicorn offspring. Meanwhile, the male earth ponies are magically castrated and put to work efficently in specificalize work plants.

And then the protagonist would be one of the female associates of the aforementioned squads, such as Rainbow Dash, as she hunts down un-impregnated female earth ponies and un-castrated male earth ponies.

What do you guys think?

Well done!

"after Princess Celestia orders the extermination of all Earth Ponies throughout Equestria."
She must have been really fucking bored.

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347987 yay!! I'm not the only sick bass terd out there!! :pinkiecrazy:

Great story man!! Can't wait for the next chapters...

I see you have received more than your fair share of hate mail, so how about a genuine review for a change?

I am very glad I pushed through the awkward setup in chapter one and continued to read this story. This is a surprisingly good story, all things considered.

I'll start with the drawbacks so this can end on the positive note that it deserves:

There is extremely little setup, and most of it is rushed-through and comes across as not being well thought-out – if at all – and as being there simply because something has to be there. I do not know if it has been developed or not, that is just how it seems. Also, Twilight feels completely out-of-character in the first chapter; Celestia does as well, of course, although her behavior is required for the story and is somewhat in line with the various "The Nightmare got Celestia" tales. Perhaps an "Alternate Universe" tag would help alleviate some readers' initial disappointment or distaste. There are also quite a few little grammar, syntax, and spelling errors but, overall, the technical quality of this is well above the average fanfic.

Aside from Twilight and Celestia, the rest of your characterizations are pretty damn good. Quite impressive!

I have not yet read any of your other works, but I see that you are inclined to choose topics of a rather unpopular nature. Obviously, you have either quite a sufficient level of testicular/ovarian fortitude or sheer gall; or perhaps both, so commenting on that is unnecessary. However, I find it interesting to note that – in writing dialogue and character interactions – the more lighthearted and peaceful situations seem rather forced and cheesy, yet you definitely shine in the bleaker situations, which are quite well-written.

Now, while I took my time in getting around to reading this story because the title and image seemed to shout "schlock trash-fic juvenalia", that impression is very far from the truth. The situation and results are quite atrocious, but you have been careful to address them respectfully and with whatever dignity can be afforded to such terrible things. You even steered away from snuff- or rape-clop as well as unnecessary gore, and focused on the story in a character-driven manner, rather than by event. I am absolutely amazed and in awe.

This is a very good story about a very tragic and horrific scenario, and you have done an excellent job. I see it has been a while since the last update, but I really do hope you will continue this story to completion. Yes, you will receive massive amounts of hate no matter how well you write it, but I hope they do not deter you from seeing it through to the end.

Are you going to continue this?
Because your story is well written and thrilling and it would be a shame for all of this to go to waste

This story needs an update!



Please.......?:fluttercry:

please continue this story

I-I wanna keep reading, I really do~ :fluttercry:

please finish this-its been nearly a year

No worries...the earth pony race will rise from the ashes and show them the true master race.

3696523 The Mud Ponies are doomed to failure, I believe. Such is their fate.

This is literally the most touchy subject ever, and you go ahead and ponify it.
Some things shouldn't be ponified. This is a case of that.
No. Just no.
...
Just a tidbit:
Apple Bloom would have been gassed if she entered a concentration camp. She's too young to work, so there would be no point in keeping her around to the Nazis.

Soldiers, Sailors, and Generals of the Imperial Legion Expeditionary Force! You are about to embark upon the Great Crusade, toward which we have striven these many months. The eyes of the world are upon you. The hope and prayers of liberty-loving ponies everywhere march with you. In company with our brave Allies and brothers-in-arms on other Fronts, you will bring about the destruction of the Celestial war machine, the elimination of Celestia's tyranny over the oppressed ponies of Equestria, and security for ourselves in a free world. Your task will not be an easy one. Your enemy is will trained, well equipped and battle-hardened. He will fight savagely. But this is the 3rd Era, 420! Much has happened since the Celestial army invasion of Ponyville. The Imperial Legion have inflicted upon Celestia's great defeat, in open battle, pony-to-pony. Our divisions has seriously reduced their strength in the air and their capacity to wage war on the ground. Our Home Fronts have given us an overwhelming superiority in weapons and munitions of war, and placed at our disposal great reserves of trained fighting men. The tide has turned! The Earth Ponies, Pegasi, and the Unicorns of the Equestrian Resistance rebellion are marching together to Victory! I have full confidence in your courage, devotion to duty and skill in battle. We will accept nothing less than full Victory! Good luck! And let us beseech the blessing of Almighty Talos upon this great and noble undertaking.

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