He... Is not a doctor. He is a sadistic monster. He has broken a sacred oath to do no harm. He has wrecked torment across innocent souls. This.... I cannot even call him a pony.... Demon, does not deserve the title of "doctor"
199889 We don't know that Pony Doctors have the same oath. Sciencetist maybe? I don't agree with the lack of general anesthesia but sacrifices must be made for science. i.imgur.com/yfYPj.jpg I mean we kinda do the same thing to mice. Good day.
If he has magical abilities, then why doesn't he use his magic to hold the wings in place and then stimulate connections inside her body (blood circulation, nerve endings, etc.)?
Using these clunky metal plates to hold the wings in place and so on sounds so... so... inefficient.
199935 He is using magic but combination with medical instruments (plates and screws are used for broken bones/limb transplants). I know this sounds terrible but if the whole operation relied on magic it wouldn't be nearly as interesting.
199940 I know but lets all reflect for a moment on the irony of someone trying to make others more efficient using inefficent methords. It's reichdiculous. Please speer me the puns thats goering to far. Ok I'm out of them now. But in a seriousness, the Doctor should probaly be put in 'special' care. Good day.
200000 I think you understand what I'm getting at. Celestia's grand goal is a perfectly ordered society with maximum productive efficiency with pure social/medical hygiene. This will involve-- at the end stages-- some way to systemically turn all earth ponies into more useful pegasii or unicorns through a routine process. Clearly, the best way would be to do this through magic to stimulate their heads to produce horns or sides to produce wings-- preferably starting when the inferior earth ponies are in the womb. Magic is the solution-- the stupid Doctor should know that.
Also, you have post 200,000! *Throws out balloons*
>I'm thinking about this way, way, too hard aren't I... I suppose my problem is that in my mind I often seem to read too much of myself into evil characters and view them more sympathetically than I should. Celestia wants a perfect collectivist society with perfect order and perfect sameness just like John Lennon put in his song "Imagine"... As evil and twisted as it is, it is at least understandable. Still an evil idea that must be fought though (I hate that damn song so much).
200159 I swear to whatever powers that be, if keep doing that I'm will find and end you. For the last time, it is not a clopfic. There is no sex, no romance of the sort. It is dark and it is horror, not Clopfic. Good day.
200191 I may have gotten a tad bit carried away there. Please allow me to sincerly apollogize for posting those horrible comments. I swear to Celestia I will not allow it to happen agin. But I must say that I agree with Celestia on the Earth ponies being inferior. I'm sorry and good day
200231 Unicorns and pegasai (but mostly unicorns) are weaklings who are too lazy to do any HONEST work. Earth ponies have to EARN their keep. Therefore they are superior.
200334 ... One of the Pegas are lazy (RD) but the rest are hardworking. I mean I took Applejack an entie day to do half of the trees where as Twilight picked hundreds off at once, add machinary like the one Flim and Flam have means that 3/4 Unicorns could do the work of an enitire family of earth ponies. Also Pegasai have a tradition as warriors, lighting beats meele any day. If anything the earth ponies are lucky that the land hasn't been mordernised, they are woefully uneffecent. Good day.
200364 use of *spits on ground* magic, is a sign of a weak civilization. PROPER civilizations advance through their ingenuity. They use physics to their advantage instead of just cheating physics out. As for pegasai lightning, lighting us pretty easy to counter. You could build armor that functions like a Tesla cage. Boom. Lightning=useless.
200423 Any significantly advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic. So by that logic technology is wrong as well. So have a horn that channels latent telepathic power is a way of interacting with objects is wrong? I think evolution says otherwise. Going around physics? They have cartoon physics. (Twilight surving all the stuff droped on her head.) Tesla cage, yeah because farmers that get drunk on cider are really going to figure that out, and if they do,so what? Pegasai can controll the weather, see how your crops grow in 30 feet of snow. Also all the ponies use magic, the Earth ponies have a magical connection to the ground, Pegasai use it for cloud walking and Unicorns and sirect it with thier horns.
hmmm... I found this chapter different then how i would have expected. The general horror of it all put aside, Doctor D. (bothers me, because he has no respect for sentient life, but that is another debate that I am unwilling to have right now) mentions that the pegasus would soon be an Earth pony, ( After removal of the wings) But Don't Pegasus have an entirely different anatomy? Like, less dense bones, tighter muscles, and higher hemoglobin levels? also, should all Pegasus have air sacs in the bodies? meaning that with with about the same size as an earth pony or unicorn, the rest of their organs have a less space?(indicating that their organs are smaller in general) I think a physician who knows enough to fuze wings to an earth pony should understand those kind of anatomical differences... And at first I thought that it was going to hold a semblance to the Nazi's regime and genocide of Jews, in that they spent all of their time trying to show that Aryans had obvious superiority, and also tried to find any and all differences in the anatomy of different races. But this seems that Celestia, or whoever is conducting this 'cleansing', is trying to convert earth ponies to the higher species, and almost completely forgetting that the species have different traits other wise that magic and flying.
and about that, dont only earth ponies have the will to keep working in a extremely difficult situation until the end? Twilight gave up trying to figure pinkie out, and Rainbow gave into reading books (maybe not the best of examples, but anyways.) Why do you never see any other race trying to farm/do back breaking labor? Are they just that lazy that they simply must take advantage of their attributes?( Oh and, flying and using extreme magic seem just about as tasking as physical labor.) It's because they aren't good enough at it. If the Unicorns had enough magic to move something a million times larger than the earth, wouldn't it just be simpler to plant their own seeds in the ground? Unicorns seem to be to concerned with individual ideas (which is what makes them smart and fashionable) to be any good at farming. (point being, why didn't the flim flam brothers farm their own apples instead of becoming traveling sale ponies?) and Pegasus are not strong enough to due elongated physical labor. Rainbow dash can't compete with Apple jack at stopping that carriage from The Mysterious Mare Do Well. The only real muscles that pegasus have that can stand up to the well toned earth pony's, are their wings. and until Pegasus learn how to plow a field using their wings, I think that earth ponies have their job set in stone. Each of the three races can only do their jobs,(Pegasus can't use magic, Earth ponies can't make weather... etc), and besides, the elements or harmony include kindness, which kind of kicks this whole genocide thing in the plot (darn!)
but that is just meh ramblings... Happy Writing!(if writing this does make you happy, anyways)
(P.S. Is righting this making you disturbed? Or are you already messed up? Or do you really not care about earth ponies? whatever the case, I do like your story)
As much as I like this story I have to wonder.... Where the hell is Luna? I don't think she would just sit around doing nothing as her sister massacres a bunch of earth ponies no matter how inferior they are.
200875 . I'm in the Seceret Service's database as a suspected terrorist, The ringtone on my cellphone is the national anthem of the Soviet Union, And I wrote a story about Twilight rapeing and murdering Mel Gibson. Add all of the previouse comments I posted on this story, Yep I think i'm a tad bit crazy to. Oh and George W. Bush was a satan worshiping Lizerd person who lives in the basement of the Taj Mahol. Good Day
200976 In case you were wondering Yes I'm being dead seriouse about everything in my previouse comment. (Exept for the George Bush being a lizerd person one, That was for teh LoLz.. Which is probably why Celestia is eradicating the earth ponies in the first place.)
I hope Night Flare "gets" Pinkie Pie agin...... Not because im mental, but b ecause I belive it will make the story more interesting seeing how Pinkie copes. And mabye if he gets Apple Jack too.
>> mrhappyface #28 luna is the rebelious type, possibly in appaloosa
anyway when he said donor or traitor here was my thoughts { O MA GOSH fluttershy is same color as Applebloom and he said he might give traitor wings and omagoshomagosh, Jiopop wouldnt do that... would he/she } oi
My thoughts on this chapter.
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Good day.
He... Is not a doctor. He is a sadistic monster. He has broken a sacred oath to do no harm. He has wrecked torment across innocent souls. This.... I cannot even call him a pony.... Demon, does not deserve the title of "doctor"
199889
We don't know that Pony Doctors have the same oath.
Sciencetist maybe?
I don't agree with the lack of general anesthesia but sacrifices must be made for science.
i.imgur.com/yfYPj.jpg
I mean we kinda do the same thing to mice.
Good day.
If he has magical abilities, then why doesn't he use his magic to hold the wings in place and then stimulate connections inside her body (blood circulation, nerve endings, etc.)?
Using these clunky metal plates to hold the wings in place and so on sounds so... so... inefficient.
199935 He is using magic but combination with medical instruments (plates and screws are used for broken bones/limb transplants). I know this sounds terrible but if the whole operation relied on magic it wouldn't be nearly as interesting.
199940
I know but lets all reflect for a moment on the irony of someone trying to make others more efficient using inefficent methords.
It's reichdiculous.
Please speer me the puns thats goering to far.
Ok I'm out of them now.
But in a seriousness, the Doctor should probaly be put in 'special' care.
Good day.
199916
Mice aren't people.
199959
I mean looking at this from our piont of view, ponies are the same as mice.
Morals wise.
Good day.
199968
of course, the ponies In this world are not sentient.
199989
In ours no.
In thiers yes but My piont is my as a Race we can't judge this bad, I mean over all we've done much worse.
Good day.
200000
I think you understand what I'm getting at. Celestia's grand goal is a perfectly ordered society with maximum productive efficiency with pure social/medical hygiene. This will involve-- at the end stages-- some way to systemically turn all earth ponies into more useful pegasii or unicorns through a routine process. Clearly, the best way would be to do this through magic to stimulate their heads to produce horns or sides to produce wings-- preferably starting when the inferior earth ponies are in the womb. Magic is the solution-- the stupid Doctor should know that.
Also, you have post 200,000! *Throws out balloons*
>I'm thinking about this way, way, too hard aren't I... I suppose my problem is that in my mind I often seem to read too much of myself into evil characters and view them more sympathetically than I should. Celestia wants a perfect collectivist society with perfect order and perfect sameness just like John Lennon put in his song "Imagine"... As evil and twisted as it is, it is at least understandable. Still an evil idea that must be fought though (I hate that damn song so much).
Are you sure this isn't a clopfic?
200030
Exactly.
Good day.
200000
I am judging him as a person. Some people may have done things just as bad, and maybe even worse, but most people are not like that.
200030
Magic is for the weak. it will be crushed by the might of steam, steel and gunpowder!
200159
I swear to whatever powers that be, if keep doing that I'm will find and end you.
For the last time, it is not a clopfic.
There is no sex, no romance of the sort.
It is dark and it is horror, not Clopfic.
Good day.
200177
Why? He's a pony, our morals don't apply.
Good day.
200191 I may have gotten a tad bit carried away there. Please allow me to sincerly apollogize for posting those horrible comments. I swear to Celestia I will not allow it to happen agin. But I must say that I agree with Celestia on the Earth ponies being inferior.
I'm sorry and good day
200193
*raises eyebrow*
That's not what I see.
200231
Unicorns and pegasai (but mostly unicorns) are weaklings who are too lazy to do any HONEST work. Earth ponies have to EARN their keep. Therefore they are superior.
200334
... One of the Pegas are lazy (RD) but the rest are hardworking.
I mean I took Applejack an entie day to do half of the trees where as Twilight picked hundreds off at once, add machinary like the one Flim and Flam have means that 3/4 Unicorns could do the work of an enitire family of earth ponies.
Also Pegasai have a tradition as warriors, lighting beats meele any day.
If anything the earth ponies are lucky that the land hasn't been mordernised, they are woefully uneffecent.
Good day.
200364
use of *spits on ground* magic, is a sign of a weak civilization. PROPER civilizations advance through their ingenuity. They use physics to their advantage instead of just cheating physics out. As for pegasai lightning, lighting us pretty easy to counter. You could build armor that functions like a Tesla cage. Boom. Lightning=useless.
200423
Any significantly advanced technology is indistinguishable from magic.
So by that logic technology is wrong as well.
So have a horn that channels latent telepathic power is a way of interacting with objects is wrong?
I think evolution says otherwise.
Going around physics?
They have cartoon physics. (Twilight surving all the stuff droped on her head.)
Tesla cage, yeah because farmers that get drunk on cider are really going to figure that out, and if they do,so what?
Pegasai can controll the weather, see how your crops grow in 30 feet of snow.
Also all the ponies use magic, the Earth ponies have a magical connection to the ground, Pegasai use it for cloud walking and Unicorns and sirect it with thier horns.
Good day.
i love tha comments on this fic!! anyways, great chapter, it really brang out the goriness!! hope for some more chapters soon.
hmmm... I found this chapter different then how i would have expected. The general horror of it all put aside, Doctor D. (bothers me, because he has no respect for sentient life, but that is another debate that I am unwilling to have right now) mentions that the pegasus would soon be an Earth pony, ( After removal of the wings) But Don't Pegasus have an entirely different anatomy? Like, less dense bones, tighter muscles, and higher hemoglobin levels? also, should all Pegasus have air sacs in the bodies? meaning that with with about the same size as an earth pony or unicorn, the rest of their organs have a less space?(indicating that their organs are smaller in general) I think a physician who knows enough to fuze wings to an earth pony should understand those kind of anatomical differences... And at first I thought that it was going to hold a semblance to the Nazi's regime and genocide of Jews, in that they spent all of their time trying to show that Aryans had obvious superiority, and also tried to find any and all differences in the anatomy of different races. But this seems that Celestia, or whoever is conducting this 'cleansing', is trying to convert earth ponies to the higher species, and almost completely forgetting that the species have different traits other wise that magic and flying.
and about that, dont only earth ponies have the will to keep working in a extremely difficult situation until the end? Twilight gave up trying to figure pinkie out, and Rainbow gave into reading books (maybe not the best of examples, but anyways.) Why do you never see any other race trying to farm/do back breaking labor? Are they just that lazy that they simply must take advantage of their attributes?( Oh and, flying and using extreme magic seem just about as tasking as physical labor.) It's because they aren't good enough at it. If the Unicorns had enough magic to move something a million times larger than the earth, wouldn't it just be simpler to plant their own seeds in the ground? Unicorns seem to be to concerned with individual ideas (which is what makes them smart and fashionable) to be any good at farming. (point being, why didn't the flim flam brothers farm their own apples instead of becoming traveling sale ponies?) and Pegasus are not strong enough to due elongated physical labor. Rainbow dash can't compete with Apple jack at stopping that carriage from The Mysterious Mare Do Well. The only real muscles that pegasus have that can stand up to the well toned earth pony's, are their wings. and until Pegasus learn how to plow a field using their wings, I think that earth ponies have their job set in stone. Each of the three races can only do their jobs,(Pegasus can't use magic, Earth ponies can't make weather... etc), and besides, the elements or harmony include kindness, which kind of kicks this whole genocide thing in the plot (darn!)
but that is just meh ramblings... Happy Writing!(if writing this does make you happy, anyways)
(P.S. Is righting this making you disturbed? Or are you already messed up? Or do you really not care about earth ponies? whatever the case, I do like your story)
I made the horrible mistake of reading this chapter before my dental surgery today.
Then, as I was being moved down with pointy things going for my mouth, I was all like:
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
As much as I like this story I have to wonder.... Where the hell is Luna? I don't think she would just sit around doing nothing as her sister massacres a bunch of earth ponies no matter how inferior they are.
200450 Mr. Wilhelm, Do you speak german?
Good day
200831 Oh don't worry Luna's somewhere
this is really good dont let applejack find out about what you are doing to her sister but keep up the really good work
200856 He should show AppleJack her sister after the "Transformation", the look on her face wil be priceless.
200870 dude i think you have gone nuts im kinda scared off you
200875 . I'm in the Seceret Service's database as a suspected terrorist, The ringtone on my cellphone is the national anthem of the Soviet Union, And I wrote a story about Twilight rapeing and murdering Mel Gibson. Add all of the previouse comments I posted on this story, Yep I think i'm a tad bit crazy to. Oh and George W. Bush was a satan worshiping Lizerd person who lives in the basement of the Taj Mahol. Good Day
200930 ok well i have to say you are not a tad bit a lot but crazy people are awesome because they are quite funny at times
200976 In case you were wondering Yes I'm being dead seriouse about everything in my previouse comment. (Exept for the George Bush being a lizerd person one, That was for teh LoLz.. Which is probably why Celestia is eradicating the earth ponies in the first place.)
201038 ok i will have to say you a really crazy but thats just you
201153 it's alright you did not know that i am getting better it's still a little hard but i will work hard
200831
Why, does one what to know.
Good day.
202348 Just asking.
202507
I see.
Good day.
200855Please hurry! all this waiting to find out if Apple Bloom's operation worked is killing me!
Oh and I figured out why Celestia is doing this, The Earth ponies are all spawn killing noobs on Battlefield 3.
I hope Night Flare "gets" Pinkie Pie agin...... Not because im mental, but b ecause I belive it will make the story more interesting seeing how Pinkie copes. And mabye if he gets Apple Jack too.
>> mrhappyface #28
luna is the rebelious type, possibly in appaloosa
anyway when he said donor or traitor here was my thoughts
{ O MA GOSH fluttershy is same color as Applebloom and he said he might give traitor wings and omagoshomagosh, Jiopop wouldnt do that... would he/she }
oi
I love the fighting in the comments. I find myself agreeing with Willhelm. My name is all too fitting for this story.
Are you sure Doctor D isn't really Doctor Richtofen? Cause this seems sorta like his thing.