To be honest, now I'm feeling as if there needs to be more sex in there. If I'm linked, then there must be some serious sex.
Pinkie is clearly being kept alive for some compelling reason. Perhaps she's well understood as the guards' favorite squeeze, both from her wonderful body, smell, feeling, touch, and so on as well as her warm personality. She might even be drafted to start a group of 'comfort ponies' or something like that retained for their physical usefulness. You could write more about that-- with some nice details please.
Oh, praise Luna, now I feel all ill just from thinking that and typing that. Sorry (?)
Have Pinkie take a gigantic creamy load of NightFlare's warm, thick sperm filled with superior pony genes into her inferior earth pony body. She should be honored to accept his noble seed. Rather than let AJ have fun, though, she should be tied up and denied orgasm as only Pinkie gets the noble seed-- thus compounding the pain for her brother's death as Nightflame screams about AJ's inferior genetic bloodline being cut out, weeded out to allow for the efficiency of pony society. All of the sex scenes described in total detail, the more the better.
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Yeah, I do feel sick after typing that. Jiopop, what are you doing to me?
One pony versus HUNDREDS of guards, whelp, it just doesn't add up!
Now factor in wings and magic versus earth pony, put the proportions for life to death ratio into the calculator, and start making calculations, the life to death ratio out of 100% is 0% and 100%.
Why oh WHY am I tempted to draw fanart for this? Oh yea, I know why, 'cause you turned big mac from Badass Level, to Chuck Norris's Apprentice Level. Well done sir!
> Studies WW2 on a daily basis for the hell of it. > Sees "The Fillycaust". > Reads description. > Spits soda all over the laptop. > Tracks and begins to read.
>and then they all died
Eh, at a certain point the deaths just become like scenery only.
Also, why oh why is my fic about having sex with Miss Mayor one of the 'similar stories'.
297114 swipe your so cool xD
297114
Becasue we all messed up.
This is fitting.
Good day.
To be honest, now I'm feeling as if there needs to be more sex in there. If I'm linked, then there must be some serious sex.
Pinkie is clearly being kept alive for some compelling reason. Perhaps she's well understood as the guards' favorite squeeze, both from her wonderful body, smell, feeling, touch, and so on as well as her warm personality. She might even be drafted to start a group of 'comfort ponies' or something like that retained for their physical usefulness. You could write more about that-- with some nice details please.
Oh, praise Luna, now I feel all ill just from thinking that and typing that. Sorry (?)
297576 Yes it does need more sex. I would suggest that NIghtFlare rapes AppleJack as revenge for her brother's crime. And Pinkie Pie again.
298541
YES!
Have Pinkie take a gigantic creamy load of NightFlare's warm, thick sperm filled with superior pony genes into her inferior earth pony body. She should be honored to accept his noble seed. Rather than let AJ have fun, though, she should be tied up and denied orgasm as only Pinkie gets the noble seed-- thus compounding the pain for her brother's death as Nightflame screams about AJ's inferior genetic bloodline being cut out, weeded out to allow for the efficiency of pony society. All of the sex scenes described in total detail, the more the better.
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Yeah, I do feel sick after typing that. Jiopop, what are you doing to me?
sweet jesus big mac as a bit of a bad ass when fighting go big mac
One pony versus HUNDREDS of guards, whelp, it just doesn't add up!
Now factor in wings and magic versus earth pony, put the proportions for life to death ratio into the calculator, and start making calculations, the life to death ratio out of 100% is 0% and 100%.
Stupid higher mathematics.
Why oh WHY am I tempted to draw fanart for this? Oh yea, I know why, 'cause you turned big mac from Badass Level, to Chuck Norris's Apprentice Level. Well done sir!
Parajack
308474 lol glad you liked it man and I'd be honored if you drew fanart, if you ever do just let me know
Big Mac went out like a Bawss
> Studies WW2 on a daily basis for the hell of it.
> Sees "The Fillycaust".
> Reads description.
> Spits soda all over the laptop.
> Tracks and begins to read.
dat last part,almost brought a tear to my eye