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mrhappyface
Yay! I have a Bio nw! I am a ** year old living in ********** ** ******** I am a communist and when I'm not playing Skyrim or Fapping I'm writing fics on this site. Praise Satan!
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There are no emoticons, images or words that can convey my disgust. You have shamed the fandom.
*Reads fic
*Looks at movie shelf: Nekromantik and Nekromantik 2.
I have no right to judge anyone.
242701 Is it weird if I fap to this?
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The fic or the comment?
242735 The fic
No matter how well written this is I hate you.
I noticed a few small typos, but beyond that, I think if you rework the final paragraph a bit to have a bit more of Fluttershy's characteristic shyness in her speech patterns and actions you could really increase the disturbing nature of this story, the way it is now, it feels like her in name only instead of personality.
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Uuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhh............
Oh shit - you did this just to piss me off, didn't you?
I honestly thought the walrus was bad, but...
Fuck, man. And not in that way. You probably think this is a compliment, don't you.
- Midnight Specter
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Get the fuck out of FIMfiction
Cheers
~iralqlobstah
Pattycakes was more creepy and interesting than this.
Yeah, I just went there.
I said Pattycakes!
242826 Oh God, shameless self-promo here, but I have a fic that you'd like - it fits your description pretty well, I think. Harvest, it's called. Oh Celestia, I'm such a relentless Scumbag Author.
Anyway, to make up for that, I think I owe you a proper critique of this story, not just some OHGODWHY things.
This idea had at least some sort of tiny potential spark there, but I get the vibe that this was a joke that you just wrote for the lolz and then uploaded, like you lost a bet or something. If that's so, disregard the rest of this, you silly troll, you.
If you were actually trying to write something thoughtful and meaningful, then you really need to sit down and think about how Fluttershy developed this fetish. Was it something in her fillyhood, or perhaps something that somepony influenced her to do, subliminally or not? Perhaps incorporate some flashbacks or a point where Fluttershy feels remorse and either ignores it and lets her insanity fester or ends up owning up, turning what used to be her friends into her enemies and perhaps having her exiled, or at least sent to Coventry (I don't know if you'll understand that phrase, but it basically means that everypony ignores her and will never speak to her again).
Welp, time to go bleach my mind.
You sir, have balls. Not balls of steel, no, balls of fucking diamonds. I commend you for having the testicular fortitude for writing this, aside from that I am disgusted beyond words. Fluttershy is not a necrophiliac, nor is she a pedophile. She's cute and harmless, she would never act so out of character. I further praise you because this story is not the only one of it's kind. You have written many others like this, no matter what anybody else says. Congratulations on that, I guess. Please, do tell me how pony hell is, I'd be interested to know.
she......ah......WHAT!? very well written but im just about to puke for the second time now.
lol but dont get me wrong.I just wish it would describe more about why she molested a dead filly. Anyway you certainly have a talent for writing gridmark fics kudos to you my friend for i can now go build an apartment complex with all the bricks I just shat. 
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Wut.
me after reading this
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Well, That was interesting.
mlkshk.com/r/82WA You lose. Good day, sir
You know, I won't lie, I was a little too disgusted and too busy trying to keep my lunch down to actually really pay attention to the writing...
This is one of the most disturbing things I've read to this day, and I read fucking cupcakes (hasn't everypony
) but it's so disturbing to me simply because it's so out of her character and you provide no explanation! 
I have to sit here and imagine what awful thing's must've happened to her in order for her to develop any form of pleasure from this.
You sir, have successfully caused me to imagine the unimaginable...compliment or insult, take it how you will, you merciless bastard...
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Well, this was pointless. It wasn't just gross and offensive (and, to be honest, I like a lot of things that are meant to be gross and offensive). It was random; there was no plot or characterization or anything else.
*shrugs*
There isn't enough love and tolerance in the community to save you. May Princess Celestia banish you to the sun to burn.
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If you can't take the heat, get your hand out of the cookie jar.
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...... Sometimes I think people like to troll too much. That's the only explanation for..... whatever you want to call this.
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This storry was so bad it gave me AIDS.
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If you got offended by this you wont BELIEVE what me and my friends come up with when were drunk.
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Dont worry i fapped to worse..............A LOT worse.
This is even more fucked up than my Candy fic! There's a line between a fucked up fic, and just pissing all over it. You pissed all over it, good sir!
243364 On that note that was a great fic.... Not that I read it! Yeah...
Well this was fairly gross, to say the least. But for some reason it made me want cookies. So thank you for that.
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Perhaps it's you who should consider the idea of relocation. The all of you who are too weak of mind and will to truly comprehend this, comprehend its grand, and philosophical nature, are the ones who should, "Get out", or better themselves. Many of ye invoke the time old tale of 'Cupcakes', but that is truly nothing, but a stepping stone in enlightenment. If thou wishes to better one's mind, body, and soul, they must learn to be able to fully enjoy the text of those such as Mrhappyface, and all those who share in his enlightened fortune. But if they cannot, why don't you go read something more your speed? Like tis, "Fallout: Equestria", that I've heard so much about from the weak, perhaps that is more of your kind of grimdark, ha, if you want to even give that the honor if using such an honorable word in accordance with it.
Hillariously disgusting!
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I want to hear what your friends came up drunk.
243455 Okay.
I refuse to be called weak by someone who uses the terms 'ye' or 'thou'. We 'weak' people are only stating the obvious: ew. MY statement of, ahem, 'GET THE FUCK OUT', was based on my opinion of the story. Sorry I read it and commented on it. OH WAIT, I'm not. I'm glad that >>mrhappyface is getting attention from this, like every author should from their stories, I just wish it was more...less...this, really.
1. wat.
2. I don't read those types of stories. In fact, I don't think I've read any Grimdark type of material while on this site. Sure I've read cupcakes. I mean, who hasn't? But I will certainly not read stories with gore of any kind. The only reason I read THIS story is due to me having a week of from school and being bored to tears. Stories like these are sick.
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That body is way to rotten to only have been buried for one week. The rule of thumb for the decomposition of a body is that, at the same temperature, 8 weeks in well-drained soil equals two weeks in the water, or one week exposed to the air. This is more or less how a body decomposes:
Green-yellow skin
Marbling
Glistening skin
Skin slippage
Purplish skin
Blisters
Distended abdomen (after one week – caused by gases)
Nlood-stained fluid oozing from body openings (nose, mouth, etc.)
Swelling of tissue and the presence of foul gaseous odor
Greenish-purple face
Swollen eyelids and pouting lips
Swollen face,
Protruding tongue
Hair pulls out easily
Gloving
A large amount of body swelling
Internal putrification. (Heart becomes flabby, brain melts into ooze, lungs become brittle, kidneys resemble wet sponges etc)
I'd expect to see discoloured skin and possibly marbling at the point which you describe, even factoring in the way rainwater has been "soaking through the coffin" (<- The fuck? That doesn't happen and even if it did bodies floating in the SEA wouldn't be that far gone).
All in all, I rate this story D-. It has great potential, but you didn't do your research so it just fails to shock me in any meaningful way, meaning that the story, which you clearly wrote for the shock factor, loses its horror and instead becomes unintentionally hilarious.
I'm not even into necrophilia, nor pedo/fillyphilia, but I seriously want a sequel (At least a little one!) with Twilight and the rest's reactions when they see the corpse
I'm just amazed at how much hate this fic has aquired in such a little time... and I'm almost certain it was intentional, so congratulations
.... you sick twisted bastard. 
HOW DID THIS GET ACCEPTED?
THE NAME CRIES FOR A TROLLFIC GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD HEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLL BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUURN
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Learn the proper spelling of words, guy.