I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Hm. Commence read.
Plan(s) coming to fruition? Or will they conflict against each other? Twist seems to be breaking down slightly. Silver seems to still be conflicted. Luna and Celestia are up to something. Fancy? Rarity- still in prison. Spike...? Sweetie?
Then the balance....how will it influence what happens?
To await further story and inquiry.
THe only thing that surprises me is that there's on grown up masochist.
Or grown ups like this:
Oh this story just keeps getting better!
Hope that is okay.
Some author's notes on Chapter 7, just because:
* This chapter was planned completely differently in my head. It was going to focus entirely on Twist, featuring only her perspective, with Silver Spoon only showing up in the very last sentence of the original draft, when Twist walks into the private room and finds Silver waiting for her.
* Twilight was going to show up, but I decided I wanted to focus on life in the Gallery for a chapter, aside from the bookend with the Princesses. More Ponyville stuff next time.
*Happy Tune's name was chosen because I wanted the most cutesy, G1-ish, fluffy girly name I could think of, to contrast the fact that she is a mentally ruined trainwreck of a foal.
*A ton of supporting characters in the Gallery were cut for time and relevance. Peregrine was originally going to have a whole gang of jerkasses who go around bullying other foals, and eventually Twist and Aurora would have stood up to them. The whole subplot was cut because then I remembered that this was a freaking rape dungeon, not an after school special.
*Other deleted supporting Gallery foals included a catatonic filly who had completely lost touch with reality, and a pair of female twins, one of whom was extremely protective of the other, letting herself be raped and abused in her sister's place. These two were reimagined as the brother-sister pair of twins who show up in this chapter.
*I keep looking for a way to give Pinkie Pie a cameo, but I just don't think it's going to happen. Just imagine that she's off somewhere, happily full of babies.
*I think this chapter brings the total tally of mentally ill foals up to about six. What is wrong with me.
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There probably is, but if I detailed every perverse thing that I imagine happens in the Gallery this story would be 100 chapters long.
so like is one princess trying to stop while the other supports it? I'm lost.
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You'll see. Right now all you need to know is that Luna is doing something behind her sister's back. You won't have to wait long to find out what.
I'm actually happy Luna is doing something against celestia's flawed logic of one evil down another will come.
But that's the best kind of rape dungeon.
Question: How much of a bad ass is Twenty? Like James Bond bad ass? Or super covert Sam Fisher bad ass?
And if he is, will his story be expanded upon?
Twenty is % cooler.
Wait, what happens to foals born of gallery fillies? Are they set aside for the extra-sicko patrons, or set free, or what?
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There's a difference?
1776612 since this is the last of the tarnished silver series what will you do after this one
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You will learn more about Twenty soon enough.
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I imagine there are enough patrons who enjoy pregnancy and birth that knocked up gallery fillies are kept quite busy. After the baby is delivered the mom isn't allowed contact with it, as such attachments would just distract from her "duties" in the Gallery. Plus the Gallery really isn't set up to handle infants anyway. Thus, Fancypants has set up an "orphanage" for such foals, which he maintains mostly because it provides him with a highly lucrative tax write off each year. No one bothers to look too deeply into where all the "orphans" come from, so it helps Fancy look heroic to the general public,too, which helps feed his galaxy-sized ego. When the kids get a little older, interested Circle members and their associates are allowed to "adopt" them in exchange for a "donation" to the orphanage. Thus most of them end up as personal slaves to Circle members. Those who don't might get shipped off to brothels overseas. In any case, the foal is never told who or where its mother is, and the mother is never told the fate of her child.The mom is encouraged to forget the baby so she can get back to the work of being a sex slave. Friendship is magic!
(I actually thought of this question some time ago, wrote down the answer you see above, and quickly realized it would never make it into the story because it's just not important or relevant to the plot. But I guess author notes and clarifications made in comments still count as "canon." So there you go.)
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Long, self-indulgent answer: After Tarnished Silver is over (sometime around the year 2097, the way this thing is going) I plan to step back from writing about ponies for a while. I'll probably drop the occasional story around here, but it will almost certainly be a one-shot, say, something around the length of Many Loves of Pinkie.
My plan is to concentrate on original writing featuring my own characters (none of whom are ponies or have anything to do with ponies.) I've spent the last two years using fanfiction as a kind of training ground for what I want to do with my life, and after completing a longform project like Tarnished Silver (which surpassed the generally accepted minimum length to be counted as a novel some time ago) I feel like I might just be ready to move on to the next step. Am I good enough to deserve to get published? I don't think I am, but I'm getting there, little by little. That's always been the goal.
But like I said, every now and then I will return to my roots and randomly post a story about Iron Will getting raped by Scootaloo or something.
Short, less useless answer: I'll probably write this crazy adventure novel that's been rattling around in my brain since roughly 2006. It does not have ponies in it. Or rapes.
Wait, come back.
I've actually been planning to write a review of this ever since Twisted concluded, but thank goodness I've waited; the style's shifted enough that it would have been rather unfair to you.
I'd greatly appreciate your opinion.
Bravo! Hams, you never cease to amaze me... what you are doing with poor Twisty is honestly breaking my heart. You have talent. A lot.
One thing I don't really get is why Silver asked for Twist... she needed an unicorn. Maybe she can refer one to her? Anyways, I know the answer to that question will pop up later on...
1792515 Iron will raping scootaloo is disgusting wondering if you could do a FluttershyXScootaloo fic
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I agree. Which is why Scootaloo is the one doing the raping. Iron Will is no match for scooter pony, who is merciless and terrifying.
Anything's possible. But I am not taking requests at this time, and probably will not in the future. Sorry.
1793889 woah now thats just weird i mean how can a filly over power a manticorn
>Don’t say her name
I do not think that Luna should use a contraction
1776493 >this story would be 100 chapters long
YES! MAKE IT HAPPEN!
1792515 >It does not have ponies in it. Or rapes.
Well then
>Wait, come back
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Fucking thank you. Finally one of the three is acting how I want her to. Now let's hope there's some serious rape soon.
dafuq incest in a story? why do such cruel things?
Shit is about to hit the fan. Wait, scratch that.
All the sewage of Manhattan is about to hit the turbines of an Antonov 225.
Suddenly, German. Or is "verboten" also an English word?
4125007 from what I can tell by a quick Google, it's an adopted word from German.
have they left some toys in the gallery as well?
I had kind of expected the gallery to be a more organised affair.
I think you should expand the scene in the gallery a little. Show more of what life down there is like.
Wouldn't they try to disguise Silver Spoon? Maybe use a spell to give her a new color and change her CM (not the actual CM but just it's outward appearance)
I think this chapter could use a rewrite and a great expansion.
This seems far too hectic and like an orgy. I would think that a club for the elite would have very complicated rules and a lot of strict ethnics (As twisted as they may be). You really should introduce that as it would greatly strengthen the story. Put in that they still believe treating a foal in certain ways is abuse and wrong and make the readers question themselves more. But mainly just explain more about the organisation itself and how it functions. Later on we get plenty of info about how the leader works but not much of how daily life goes on in there. As well I would think they would have toys for the foals to play with when they are not being used and perhaps even a small playground.
Of all chapters in the story I think this one has the most improvement points. Especially seeing how it's so important.