I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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OH! SHIT!
buck!
Hopefully Celestia still has her head on straight enough that she and Luna will take this brawl somewhere else. Otherwise there's no way in hell that any of this can be covered up.
Well this is about to get... Shakespeariean
Commence read.
Ha. Peregrine...you doubt.
Deep.
So Celestia executed Twenty. I wonder how many other "Silent Knights" have gone mad after being freed from their silence.
Definatelly expecting an epic fight in the next chapter.
I think i know how this is going to end, at least part of it, i hope i'm right.
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Every time I consider how this will end, I hope I am wrong.
Another Good Chapter! I just came back from a trip out for ice cream and returned to find this! What a great evening!
This chapter is certainly interesting. Everypony is all in one place and Celestia just killed Twenty! I actually can't say I really happy about that
I mean I was really conflicted about sparing Rarity. On one hand Rarity is guilty of extreme sadism and multiple rapes. But oddly the reader gets attached to her at the end of the story. So Really I don't know if I should be happy or not!
I found the last chapter more emotionally powerful because Silvers evolution as a character grew over the whole series, we've only known Twenty for a few Chapters. Also I liked the Diamond quote: “I am getting really sick of being accidentally teleported places with this mare" a little comic relief!
Also Celestia declared that Twenty committed treason against loyalty! That's Pony Manure! Celestia commited acts against kindness honesty and very possibly laughter by her acts in this story!
Also as a quick final question.
Is this going to be 29 chapters plus an epilogue creating 30 chapters in total?
Or will this end as 29 chapters as a final count with no extra epilogue?
Damnit, Twenty! Well, I can't blame you for being a decent guy and not traumatizing foals, but still...
LUNA: FOALS! FAIR PATRONS OF THE NIGHT! PREPARE TO JOIN YOUR PRINCESS IN BATTLE! A BATTLE TO DECIDE IT ALL!
sorry, needed to throw that out there.
And fuck you, you fucking bitch, I can't wait to see your sick, morally twisted disgusting fucking ass either die a horrible fucking death, or go fucking burn in the god damned sun!
And yes, you managed to make me hate that sun bleached bit far more than I thought possible.
Seriously, 'It's okay to commit forced sexual acts in such ways as long as it "balance" the nation'?! Then you bend the fuck over bitch!
You want to fucking claim it's for the good of the nation, yet you can't even take part in what keeps 'your little ponies' safe, Celestia?!
Fuck you, fuck your bullshit moral, fuck everything about you, and if you had been in the place of my father, I would have killed you with a fucking grin on my face as I watched you fucking die!
SHIT. JUST. GOT. REAL!
Wonderful and very intensive chapter. I'm glad Tia got before Luna.
2554701 Well, considering that Celestia raised the sun during the night and that whole Balance at stake, it seems that covering up right now is not a huge priority for her.
Nessescity of evil...
Ham, have you ever heard of A Clockwork Orange?
It's all I can say. That and, RIP Twenty...
I know I shouldn't... but i'm really rooting for Celestia.
I mean she has plenty of experience, and she's probably right about balance.
Also...
I don't want this story to end!
Luna please banish your bitch of a sister to the sun
That'l learn her for killing Sir Twenty
This is what I'd like call a good old mexican standoff!
AAAAWWWWW shit. Shit is about to get REAL! Can Luna send her to the sun? PLEASE ? That would be bucking awesome !
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Chapter 29 IS the epilogue. So yes, 29 chapters total. Assuming no more delays (ahahaha why would you assume that) the series will end on May 23rd. TRIVIA: If I were to delay it by six days, the finale would drop on the one-year anniversary of the day I began writing Tarnished Silver.
But if it does get delayed, it won't be because of that. Promise!
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I like your enthusiasm, but I feel I'm missing a bit of context for that last line.
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Your avatar fits your comment so well!
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Yep! Love the movie, should really get around to reading the book.
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Hmm, perhaps I didn't make that sequence as clear as I could have. Celly didn't raise the sun; what she did was basically cremate Twenty alive with some localized solar heat. She put her hoof on him so only he would feel it (that way her spell doesn't melt half of Canterlot.) The "daylight" the foals saw was actually the light created by Twenty's execution. That's why it goes back to being nighttime so quickly afterward. The line about "her wrath burning as hot as her sun" isn't just a metaphor.
I imagined that the heat she gave off was something approaching the heat of an actual sun. Fans of Twenty might want to take consolation in the fact that someone exposed to that level of heat would die instantly. He would not have felt any pain.
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Well, it's a good thing someone is! Everyone else seems to hate her. Without you, this comment section would lose its Balance.
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-I think we would forgive you for that six day delay.
-Damn... A clockwork orange was a tough book to read.
I see what you did there.
On a related note - Why did they have to call that smiley 'rainbowkiss'.
2560543 sorry, context is totes mcgotes towards Celestia.
I just can't stand shit like that. It's one thing to know it happens and be powerless to stop it, its another thing to just sit there and let something terrible happen.
That and I may have lost my shit a little with that last line...
I'm half tempted to suggest delaying it so this little project goes full circle, but it's a really good read overall and I'm glad I came...across it
2560543 LMAO! Didn't realize it, but absolutely right! Shame that this story is coming to close. It's been awsome read. THx...
Alicorn Fight!!!!!!
Place your bets! Place your bets!
: 50 bits on Luna winning.
: No way, Celestia will win.
: No way Darling!
: Your're on Rarity!
NO TWENTY, NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Celestia, I hold out a very small (dwarf sized) flicker of hope for your immortal soul that you'll see reason! Well this can end a number of ways, Battle Royal style, Luna loses, Celestia loses, the possible recreation of the Circle...DAMN THE ANTICIPATION IS KILLING ME!
You know what, if Celestia, Luna, Twilight and Chekhov's Dragon are going to start shooting lazers at each other, Rarity and the foals teleported by
plotaccident are horribly outgunned, moreover, with such awesome(andrequired by plot to beunwieldy)power at work, they are terrifyingly likely to be caught in the crossfire.Rarity is no fool, she should know how slim her chances of survival are. But no one cares about hurting her much. Thankfully,
plota lucky coincidence comes to her rescue.If I were Rarity and noticed that a firefight is imminent, you know what I would do? I'd scream at the top of my lungs, "THINK OF THE CHILDREN!"
Oh, and Happy Birthday, Ham!
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I lost it at that point, my sanity and resolve. I will be stealing those very lines, hope you don't mind
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As a Follower of the Balance i do not agree with this statement. Burn on the lands of the Majjarret bitch
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2594038 Stalk my comments long enough you're bound to find plenty of interesting things.
As for that...well I've a bit of a soft spot for kids, and if there's one thing I hate more than a child molester/rapist, it is one who tries to justify it through some bullshit reason.
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isthere a double meaning to that? i seriously dont get, it might be in part because im 13
2594821 Don't read too muc h into to it son, I just meant I come up with funny things every now and then.
So, I finally caught up This story is so intense I sometimes need to take a short break, I suppose. Now I can't wait to read the next chapter! Only two more left! I'm sure the ending will be spectacular, so I look forward to it even though it means the end of this amazing fic. Anyway, it's fabulous! Keep up the awesome writing, and I'll try to save the sappiness for when you put out the prologue...
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13? why are you here...
Every time Celestia opens her fool mouth I want to scream. Luna and Styngian seem to think she may be wrong about the Balance, but frankly it doesn't matter if her theory is wrong or right - what she is doing is wrong. A true leader accepts the burdens that come with leadership, rather than shunting them off on their subjects. I'm waiting for Luna to say something like "I would become the Nightmare again, or banish my own sister, before asking my subjects to do so."
Hmm, now that I've said that, it occurs to me that it may be time for Tia to have a little time-out in the sun...
I can tell you right here that's an untrue statement.