I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Excellent.
As cool as it is that Fancy had his final 'fuck you' set up like this, having the mansion ALREADY on fire kinda reduces Spike's roll in this to that of an evac chopper.
Also, has Diamond already met up with Silver and Twilight? Because if not then some kind of 'elsewhere' might be needed there.
Fire cleanses all sins.
I love how the fighting started with a thrown wine glass. A very classy way to stage a coup.
On the other hand, I found it hard to believe that any Circle Member would fight to support Fancypants. Not because no one would be loyal to him, there were probably plenty left outside of Rarity's group, but because they have very little to gain and a whole shit ton to lose if someone kills them. The first example that springs to mind would be Egypt in 2011, where the generals felt which way the wind was blowing and left Mubarak to the dogs, or in Algeria where Ben Bella was removed without incident.
The guards would probably have fought, but I just can't see the circle members trying to fight for someone who gives them very little against someone who might give them more.
Also, isn't it wonderful how something that took you the better part of a year to write can be read and bitched about by some jerk on the internet in less than two weeks?
Oh, God damn it! That son of a bitch pulled a Mother Brain and started a self-destruct sequence.
Now that I think about it, when was the last time I played a Metroid game? I really should get back to one or two after the semester ends.
The next chapter's name is "Dying breath". Don't you think that is an overly foreboding title? Whatever, I can handle it. Cue the obligatory compliments!
man rarity should have done this to Fancy and I'd enjoy every minute of it.
if you're wondering what anime this is it's Higurashi and damn dark mind you. if you don't like dark things THEN DON'T WATCH!!!
seriously I'm such a kind natured person but for all the shit Fancy has done, galleries of fillies and colts, among other things. oh and Rika cannot truly die because she exists in multiple timelines so don't feel bad for her or do but that is up to you.
Alright a new chapter! And we are getting close to the end!
I didn't see the of the chapter coming but, it was well-forshadowed in Twisted. So . . . . . Continuity!
Looking forwards to see how this concludes.
Jeeeesus fuck, guy! It's like I'm watching a movie in my brain! The suspense!
Congratulations fancy, you hit James Bond level in villainy
Commence read.
The suspense.
Hoofbein? Huckbein? RTX-008-R Huckebein R?! During the R unit's first testing, however, there was an accident with the Black Hole Engine, causing the unit to suffer a meltdown that dealt significant damage to the Technetium base located on the moon, and the destruction of the R unit itself. MOTHERFUCKER!
wow this cliffhanger... I have nothing else to add, good job then
This chapter is FUCKING INSPIRATIONAL!!!
Of course he would have some dead-man's switch type device set up to take everyone out. He's is pure evil! You have got to expect every possible way he can screw you over!
And the only thing I can think of is
All that fire, and a whole song about lust. Its perfect.
Don't end up like Game of Thrones and start killing everyone we like off...
Excellent chapter. A little short, but still excellent.
No, no n,no NO!! It cannot end in a pile of ash! please, don't
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Yikes, you're absolutely right. I meant to put large spaces between Diamond and Silver's lines to show that they weren't in the same place, but I either forgot or FimFiction's word wrap screwed it up. Either way, I added a line making it clear that they are not in the same place. Thanks for catching that!
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Well, recall the sequence a few chapters back where Fancy muses on how he cultivates loyalty in others by creating the expectation of cruelty but then showing mercy. I imagine he's used that trick with plenty of Circle members over the years. And then there are the ones like Jet Set, who just dislike Rarity.
Having said all that, it's true that I probably should have provided a bit more explicit motivation for the ponies on Fancy's side.
I'm actually kind of a glutton for this sort of punishment. Useful, well-written criticism is one of the most important things for a writer, and I find it terribly enjoyable.
Speaking of Mubarak, he and Fancy both seem to be from a similar school of villainy.
Fancy: If I lose I'll get back at you all by BURNING THE CHILDREN.
Mubarak: If I lose I'll go to prison quietly, have a giant stroke a week later, and end up in a coma on life support, which the prison system will be obligated to pay for, thus screwing over the Egyptian taxpayer one last time!
Fancy: Yeah, okay. My idea's better.
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Considering your user name, I'd say you have no choice.
Next year in February 2014, FIMFiction should have a best fan fiction of 2013! And this story should be nominated! Just imagine:
And the Best Fanfiction Writer Award goes to. .. . .. . Hamgravy!
And the Best Fanfiction of 2013 is . .. ... . A Silver Sky: Four Little Ponies
And the Best Pony Award goes to . .. .. .. . Baby Dewdrop Dream, despite having no speaking lines or chapter appearances!
To be honest if we did have a FIMFiction Awards Ceremony this year for best fiction of 2012, then Twisted: Four Little Foals should have won!
That... was the most incredible thing I've ever read.
"Of course, Rarity thought. Hoity wasn’t running for the door. He was securing it. They havn’t given up."
Forgot the 'E' in haven't
"He was stopped by a well-aimed wineglass aimed at his forehead ."
'Wineglass' should be two words (wine glass).
“You’d better hope they don’t kill her too quick, then,” said the guard. “Fancy gave orders to keep you safe for
now.
Leverage against your sister, I guess. But once she’s dead, you’re no longer special.”
Unnecessary space.
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This is the first comment I've made on a fic in awhile, and the first I've made on any of yours. Let me just say, you have written something truly remarkable here. It's the best fic I've read since RagingSemi's opus, Our Last Goodbye. You've managed to create some of the most engaging characters I have seen, and tell a dark, controversial story without coming across as overbearing or schlocky. I commend you for that. An amazing story, my friend. Simply amazing. I'll be there for the final chapter, where I'll compose my final thoughts on the series as a whole.
Oh god, ^this! It may be the sleep deprivation kicking in, but I just can't stop laughing!