I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Finally I can use that image... It has been rotting in my reactions folder for far too long...
As always, I praise you for writing such an amazing chapter, and I'll be waiting for more...
Just be sure not to delay that much... Because... Well... Things happen...
'Beware the fury of the Patient Man'
Rarity is clearly learning this first hand.
Gotta wonder how she is going to talk her way out of murder when she can no longer produce the living body.
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I love everything that you have done/are doing with this series and I eagerly await more! I feel so horrible for loving this version of Rarity so much but her calm face is simply fabulous
I just love this Rarity so much. I can't believe I want her to triumph and molest foals another day as a slap in the face to all her challengers! Ham you do terrible things to me ;-;
ITS SO BEAUTIFUL!I i hope there is an epic twist were derpy somehow saves her dinky doo after shes kiddnapped and she sonic derpybooms through fancypants dundgen.....................................also were the hell is fleur de lis,aint she FPs wife or somein
I actually hate this version of Rarity. I'm mainly reading this story to see if she and the circle are brought to justice eventually. Although the story seems to be slowing down a little and if it ever happens I don't think it will be for some time. This story has a lot of potential though. like Twilight going off at the princess if she finds out that she is letting this happen. Also if Twilight finds out about indigo she is going to lose it. I can think of so many things that I'd like to see happen. I doubt any of them will though, I have a bad feeling the circle is going to survive all this without a problem, which is disgusting, but some things are in life I suppose. Good writing though, keep it up.
Also I don't think Fleur is married to Fancypants in this reality, but I could be wrong.
So that was why Fancypants waited to get back at Rarity. Now that he has Silver Spoon, there is no way for Rarity to prove that she is not dead. I like it when things make sense Sweetie belle is now well on her way to being Rarity's self-portrait keep her fighting! Good chapter as always
Commence Read.
It's rare that I see a story wherein I desperately wish for a majority of characters to fail in their endeavours - including the princesses even!
Also, Rarity's reasoning is... Twisted, to say the least. "Father hurt me, he was bad, I'm hurting you because of that, it's not my fault, you should thank me, I'm doing you a favour by making you a sadistic rapist like me, I'm good, you hate me, I'm doing what you want no matter what you want, we're better than other ponies except daddy who's a slimeball," et cetera. It makes sense for her to think like that, though; especially when she claims she's not actually responsible for her actions.
DUELING OPINIONS.
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A lot of people seem to be rooting for Rarity, and a lot seem to be against her. She is quite the divisive figure, I suppose. I'm a bit torn on my opinion of her myself. I mean, sure, she's basically evil, and has brought suffering to many innocent lives. She has committed monstrous acts,
all of which were my idea,and is a terrible pony who does not deserve forgiveness. But she does love her sister (in a very wrong way) and she commits her unspeakable actions with such style, that I simply can't hate her.I'm not sure what it says about me, but she can be tremendously enjoyable to write.
Of course, none of this necessarily means that the end of the story will favor her. Then again, maybe it will! I decided a long time ago (partway through Twisted) how Rarity's story will end. Obviously whether Rarity gets a good ending or a bad one, there's no way every reader will be satisfied with what happens, but I hope you all at least enjoy the ride.
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I had considered introducing her along with Fancy in Chapter 8 of Twisted. She was going to be a jealous trophy wife who tolerated Fancy's foalfiddling but became vicious when she noticed Fancy's creepy crush on Silver Spoon. In the end she was cut from the story because she overcomplicated things and didn't really add anything (and we have enough goddamn characters scheming against each other already )
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This seems to happen with all my stories. Scenes that I thought would last a paragraph end up lasting a page or two because I find new angles on them and new ways to flesh out the action. Hopefully it doesn't come off as too slow or drawn out. There's a fine line between a long complex tale and a story that's just long for the sake of being long. I hope I can stay on the right side of that line.
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Judging from the terrible things I've been doing to these ponies for the last few months, that appears to be my specialty. Oh god, what kind of cutie mark would I even have.
1662951 Oh the story is moving on at an acceptable pace, I just noticed it slowing somewhat. Also considering what you have done to poor Rarity and many other ponies, I think your cutie would be a twisted quill. I mean that with the utmost respect. I think you're a great writer, but you certainly twist many ponies characters. Which makes for an exciting read, if a little disturbing at times. Keep up the good work.
Needed more incest.....
*goes onto FIMfiction, sees update* NNNGNGGGGGGGG! I came. Everywhere.
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My goodness. I can only imagine what you do when you read a chapter that actually has sex in it.
>with spell after spell
>spent a week without sleep
Double spaces
>The only time Rarity had been seen in town since then was during very occasional trips to the marketplace to buy food.
I suggest changing it to this:
>The only times Rarity had been seen in town since then were during very occasional trips to the marketplace to buy food.
Also, there is a double space after the period
>a pony can only go back in time once in her life
Please learn the rule for "only"
>He is my eyes
This does not seem right, but I am unsure of how to fix it
Why is this split?
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Another great chapter. I get so into it that it seems a lot shorter then 5000 words.
hmm I hope the not safe for woona doesn't get banned but I have to use slugboxes artwork for sadistic rarity. yay for nsfw now for the sfe fow woona version. squee she's soo pretty
Hmm...
At some point this story turned from a really good clop piece which also had a pretty okay story, to a phenomenal piece of any kind with an awesome story which also happened to have some (really good) clip; until now, I didn't even notice.