I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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WOW, just wow.
Wow... though a certain detail of the plot confuses me ill look pass it. Other wise this came out well done.
I am so excited! I can't wait to see where this is going. I wonder what sort of secret code our clever Sweetie came up with. Keep it coming!
Rarity clearly has the superior position in this matter. Twilight is going to have to get more than a little creative on this one. Outright accusation isn't going to work when the highest ruler of the land herself is telling you to leave it be.
What is Sweetie up to now? she clearly has a plan, but at this point, there is not enough information to work it out.
One or two little errors
but whatever the reason, it doesn't change the face that I know what you've done! (Fact)
a few spacing errors between full stops and quote marks.
I love how Rarity miscalculated her own position. It was... Well, cathartic.
Awesome development. Also Twilight is clearly not an evil mastermind: I suppose she has enough of magic power to destroy each Rarity's leg without killing her(or at least enough to hold her in place and swing giant sledgehammer 4 times). No one said that Elements can't be wielded by crippled pony after all. And cripples physically can't molest anypony.
And it's really nice to see that Rarity's manipulation is not omnipotent.
Kill rarity
NEED MORE POST NEXT WEEKS NOW!
My phone duplicated the story twice so I waslike wtf but good story
Why is the story duplicated?..
The content of this chapter has indeed been imported twice into the file. Might wanna fix that.
Dude. Fix the damn double-up.
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Yeah, I don't know what the hell happened with the text doubling. I'm pretty sure it wasn't like that when I posted it, or there would have been comments about it sooner. Since it's Halloween, I chalk this anomaly up to GHOSTS.
Anyway, fixed it now.
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Thanks! What did you find confusing?
1541890 A few things but ill just reread it.
Question: Will Diamond Tiara return?
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Don't worry, I haven't forgotten Diamond. She's got a part to play, and it's an important one.
1554031 My hearts is at ease.
Holy fucking god that was intense!
Damn, what a good chapter! I love how you are making Rarity such a sympathetic villain. I also hate it when, in stories like these, the hero confronts the bad guy and threatens to reveal their plan, and the villain just plays it cool. Like, thats what Rarity started doing, but when Twilight was actually going to kill her, she got worried. And then how you let Twilight have the last word was awesome. So many things were done greatly in this chapter.
>Helping Twilight during the Winter Wrap up
Triple space + "up" should have a capital U
>all while failing to ensnare me.Either way
There should be a space after the period
Love this story.
I think the absolutely best way for this story to go (or at least what I would like the most) would be for there to be lots and lots of torture and rape and then in the last chapter Twilight, Celestia, and Luna show up and kill all the circle members. That way i get all the rape I want, but I also get Celestia, Luna, and Twilight being what I want them to be.
Began reading the final story.
Ah, forgive me if I'm wrong, but aren't the wielders of the Elements supposed to be actual friends and be in harmony with each other to make the Elements work? This was shown in the Discord episodes.
I doubt anyone of the mane 6 actually represents their element at this point.
So Rarity's argument is bullshit, the Elements won't work anyway. Which means Twilight can safely kill her.
Well, Rarity, you're a foalphile and no one suspects that, why can't Twilight be a killer? Paranoid people live longer...
Helping Twilight feel like she belonged for the first time her in her life...
Repeated word.
This is the only chapter I was really disappointed. Why did Twilight forget about Twist?(everyone forgot about Twist ). She was going to kill Rarity but she didn't ask any question about Twist. Where is she? Is she alive? She couldn't have known that Sweetie had that information.
All the rest of it is perfect, as always.
Twilight could have tried talking to Sweetie alone. She knows at least one stallion is involved who has no ‘elements’ immunity. She could have imprisoned Rarity. She should have remembered Twist.