I love you so much. I hate to admit it, but no pony in the world matters to me more than you. But it has to end. I have to stop you. No matter what.
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Twilight having those world changing realizations.
I guess Fancy wanted Silver to look exceptionally well.
You?
No pressure.
Glad to hear about Spike.
Then for the final act and for all the players to arrive.
This is waited, and makes me starve as always for the next chapter!!
ahahah you finally got into the feature box
Hamgravy in the update-feature box?! Impossibru! Also, am I the only one thinking something like this?
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dat cliffhanger man I wish to know if Rarity lives. I still feel bad for Rarity even if she has done unspeakable things to her sister and other fillies.
im too excited to hit the right immoticon... Great chapter, love the story... This is probably one of the best fics that i have ever read. And i have read alot.
So out of five.
Cant wait to see the big finish.
Who is Twenty again?
She has good perception I'll give her that, she could probably scope out a spy at any range.
The Finale Act! I have to say, I'm impressed you remembered all the subplots. I was begining to think you just forgot about Spike altogether. I am looking forwards to seeing how this concludes.
1. I really thought that you'd have have a scene where Rarity makes an epic speech to the Circle supporting her and it would be like the speech from independence day, but it would be about how, "Today we fight for the right to rape foals all across Equestria"!
2. I have a feeling that the ending will be really epic! However I am not sure if you how this will end. Maybe there will be a surpise and Domino and Fond Wish who we haven't seen since chapter one will arrive! Then they will bring in FancyPants long lost Brother, CommonPants and he will decided raping foals is mean and the whole Circle will stop raping foals. Then there will be a big musical number lead by Silver Spoon where everyone gets into a chorus line and starts kicking! And the song would be about "Life in Equestria Shines". THAT WOULD BE A TWIST!
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I thought twenty was Gaze...
I'm probably wrong though.
On another note.
Holy crap this is getting intense, I can picture it so well in my mind!
I really hope fancy wins.
Thanks Ham :-)
The next chapter sure is going to be one amazing ride!... Or an amazing train crash. I hope you pull it off, ham. Good luck! (You probably already have a draft of the next chapter, don't you?)
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Well to be honest we don't know that Twenty and Gaze aren't the same pony. We've never seen them in the same room together at the same time. However what we know is Twenty is a royal spy.
Princess Luna called in a GIANT DRAGON!!! Oh, I so hope it crushes Fancy's mansion.
And then Fluttershy crashes in all like, "I'm back, bitches!"
So.. It begins...
ok when this is all done i buying a packet of paper and printing this just so i can read it again and again. your so awesome hammy
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I did? I'm not seeing it on my end. Or did I miss it entirely?
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I fixed the Hoity typo, though I was tempted to just announce that "your whatsoever" is what Rarity calls Diamond's vagina.
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Twenty first showed up in chapter 7, then has been mostly absent until now, because of Reasons. Perhaps Twenty could join Spike's "characters who were gone from the narrative for ten chapters or more" club.
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Thanks so much to everyone for the kind words! You guys are all terrific, seriously.
I'm supposed to be writing drafts?
(I have a pre-formed fetal sort of thing that may grow up to become a fine chapter someday if it drinks its milk, stays in school and takes its vitamins. Hopefully it can do all this by Tuesday.)
2193465 Ham, I am not afraid of asking you this: What is the worst that you can make happen in a fic?
2193465 Ha. That would have worked as well.
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Vast fields of puppies, all exploding for no reason.
I honestly have no idea, and if I set out with the explicit intention of writing "the worst thing I possibly could," I would probably wind up with something really stupid. I know there's a lot of wrongness in this story, but over time I've found I prefer to let the wrongness happen organically as part of the plot. If I try to force it, things get silly.
So i guess my (unsatisfying) answer would be that I have no idea, but I'll know it when I see it.
2193763 i not mean the worst itself and no reason. The worst, shameless clop that you can insert in the story, without forcing. Just going over your limit.
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Our Fearless Leader Speaks!
Glad to hear the next chapter is in the works.
If we are lucky we might even get an author's notes by saturday or sunday.
first of all, here is my weekly grammar nazi session.
"Noticing the old mare’s puzzles expression," this is when twilight first entered canterlot and was remembering a mare that sold her a book.
"That is the only reason why I haven’t given to Sapphire, to be defiled and humiliated like you deserve to be." during rarity and diamond's conversation.
and now for the actual comment. looks like at long last we're finally reaching the climax. i must gather the most dramatic music i can find for this.
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I'm still not sure, I'm afraid. I a lot of this clop is stuff I never intended to write when I started out, but which ended up happening over the course of the story. The Many Loves of Pinkie Pie was supposed to have pregnancy in it, but not a damn birth scene. But it ended up happening. Twisted chapter 11 was supposed to have Indigo molesting Pip, but her kids weren't supposed to join in. All of this just kind of happened as I wrote. It's just how my mind works.
Perhaps someday I'll hit that "over the limit" moment and just freak myself out. If I do, I'll let you guys know.
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Thanks as always for the corrections! When I proofread I usually end up agonizing over things like the order of events or making dialog sound in-character, so smaller things like this often elude me.
2196548 Thanks, i am waiting
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Waited this long hoping that, when I do finally read the two latest chapters there'd already be the next update....
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You do know that updates are on Tuesdays now, right?
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<--- This guy doesn't pay attention to anything.
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And now that I've told you that, I have to go and change the update day.
You and everyone else should read this to find out how updates will work from now on.
i dont know if anybody else has caught this but vermillion wouldn't happen to be named after a certain slipknot song would he?
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I found an error in the "Two Days Ago" section, near the end,
Small thing, not really that pivotal, but it made me do a double-take.
Just thought I'd point it out.
Wow, this story is so freaking tense. The final act begins, and people better die. Just sayin. I'm so glad I'm reading this now, waiting would have killed me.