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RapeTrain-Express


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Darker versions of Twilight are always the best stories to read. Excellent job!!

This is the true Twilight. She's crazy without a stallion. Why do you think they keep shipping her with Shiny?

this was good. liked the idea of a spell of cadences fused with a changeling spell. Twilight is so awesome, she's got it all figured out.

Interesting, I wonder the next victim will be? Big Mac? Thunderlane? :)

Wait a second....

Dr Stable.

... Stable. A place to house horses.

...

...“No, it’s not Lupus...

...!

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that ending :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

XD And then she finds out she got knocked up. Good luck hiding that, Twilight! :3

Dear Princess Celestia,

Today I learned that friendship has to be gently encouraged, that it can't be forced.

...

On an unrelated note, would it be permissible for me to ask for a break of, oh, I don't know, five years-or-so from my friendship studies?

Your Faithful Student,
Twilight Sparkle

lol never thought Thunderlane would be into Twilight :twilightsheepish:

ooh, that reference to mrs. ten seconds flat. please carry on with that, don't leave us hanging. we all know rainbow dash wouldnt leave her friends hanging. You brought it up, so now its time to deliver. Next chapter needs to be: twidash

First! (for this chapter)

I feel like quagmire.... I like where this is going.

also, I do have just one bit of advice... perhaps you should use page breaks when theres a shift in scene, like when you jump back and forth between RD's fun times, and twilight's, you could seperate it with "------------------------------------------------------------". It just makes it feel more.... i dont know... clean cut I suppose.

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR

I wonder who the new victims for twilight will be :eeyup:

So Twilight`s targeting mares now as well? AWWWWWW YEAHHHHHHH!!!!

Quite interesting...

From reading this I'm going to say Twilight will end up targeting Shining Armor at one point. Because that would be awesome!:trollestia:

I'm I reading hints of a TwilightXShiningArmor clop chapter in the future? PLEASE MAKE IT SO!

Twilight going around and raping ponies and then removing the memory of it from them? This I gotta read more of!:pinkiehappy:

This is the only way I can forgive myself for liking this so much.

Too her left rested a rather that had a hint of flowers coming from it, ever so faintly.

It should be to not too.

Rarity. Maybe I should play you a visit and make you enjoy the benefits of mares like I did.

Wouldn't it be pay not play?

Twilight never made a habit of having pears around her because of the pear farm on the opposite side of AppleJack’s farm, which who was always competing with.

Looks like you added an extra word. I think it would be which

No Calm down Twilight!

Either uncapitalize the calm or put an end mark after no.

I don't even know why. This story does have a driving plotline which is actually entertaining to read. Kudos to you Express. I would have never thought it possible till I found your stories.

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And kudos to you for pointing out my mistakes in the stories.

1602779You are welcome. I'd like to think I read this so I can better authors of all kinds. In actuality I came here for the plot and remained here for the plot. Grammar and spelling are just a bonus.I'll probably end up commenting on newer chapter about mistakes.:ajsmug:

YES! I would hug you right now if I could!

Did I just read a story were Twilight raped her brother? :rainbowderp: and why am I turned on by this?:rainbowhuh:

incest is wincest! I seriously hope you do another chapter with both of them! :rainbowkiss:

Her plan is going to go horribly wrong somewhere, isn't it?

It was bad enough to hear it from the walking purple fax machine but to hear it from her brother as well drove her even crazier.

I had a good laugh at the mention of Spike being called a fax machine.

It had been a few days since Twilight first got the letter that was stating that her brother and the cor-ruler of the Crystal Empire,

Co-ruler?

The second he told her Cadance was pregnant any sort of logic she had leave got tossed out the door.

In this case, wouldn't it be left instead of leave? Also isn't it Cadence?

She wish she could turn her head just to see the twitching cock slamming in and out of her without pause.

If you are using the past tense (although isn't it technically past progressive?), it would be wished not wish.

It wasn't full proof but it was she could do for her reckless actions.

This sentence... I think it would be fool proof.. and I feel there is something missing between "it was" and "she could"

I loved this chapter... Not necessarily in that way but this chapter certainly fit and made perfect sense. That is enough for me to like a chapter.

sexually frustrated twilight is best twilight

I have only one thing to say: TWILIGHT DOES NOT GET TO FUCK LUNA! Beyond the mention of that, this was awesome!

Ha the back to the future reference was hilarious.

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