Both sisters have had things building up inside of them for the past 1000 years due to your actions long ago. As Luna ushers in a night, those burdens get revealed to one another.
Sequel to "A Secret Left Behind"
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Mmm, no. Even if Celestia can't be held accountable, she's still responsible for the child's death. It doesn't feel plausible that they would forgive each other so easily.
I liked it!It's always nice seeing a story between both the princesses especially when its a story about family bonding.
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Ehh, I think it can go both ways actually.
How can Celestia be responsible for a death she didn't commit? Ultimately it's actually Luna's own fault for what happened.
I find this story has a deeper meaning then most stories.
Time does help you stop feeling as hurt when something emotionally hurt you before and if anyone else was involved they probably wont bring it up anymore but, as with almost all wounds that heal up, they leave behind a scar.
Of course, sitting and sulking over the "wounds" will only make them fester and get infected, so it is better to just let them be, move on, and let them heal on their own to keep from it forming a larger and more visible scar.
To sum it up. Life happens and you get hurt. You just need to let the hard times pass and move on. Though you will always remember the bad times, they will seem more like a piece in your life rather than something trying to tear it apart.
Just something to think about.
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I honestly think both parties are to blame for what happened. Celestia for being reckless and Luna for being careless for not telling her she was pregnant in the first place.
1566526 1566582 Yeah, I don't think that either one of them deserves all the blame. But still, it happened. Luna became Nightmare Moon, Celestia reacted to that and banished her, then Nightmare's child was born and suffocated in the vacuum of space. Regardless of who should be blamed, it is a pretty huge deal that Nightmare's child died in a vacuum. It's not something that I think would be as easily forgiven as it has in this story. But who knows, 1000 years gives you a long time to think about things and probably immortal alicorn minds work differently to humans.
Aw. So precious.
Very good.
Why are Celestias ears so BIG!!!!
We need an episode centered sround these two for once.
I am going to be honest, this story had both parties out of character in great amounts, but I am not going into that because my opinnion is not the word of thou art god as most other people think they are.
but what I will say is that your sentance structure needs to be better drawn out, I had a similar problem with my first story, and i was flamed for that, I am glad that kindness was in your favor.
This story had great ammounts of telling in it, someone gave me advice and I must say it greatly helped, so here is a link and I suggest you follow it, because it is saving helping with my next story.
http://foremostpress.com/authors/articles/show_not_tell.html
I am serious though, you got REALLY lucky, if you don't believe me, just look up, "Best Intentions"
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