After untold amount of days of being cast out out Ponyville, Trixie returns to apologize to Twilight and her friend for her behavior that day. She also had another reason for going to see Twilight...
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It's okay... Kind of over-used concept though.
But um... So many errors!
You have so many instances in which you seemed to try to type a sentence one way,
then changed your mind and started typing it out another way, but didn't erase the sentence
that you had already started. Not to mention several times where you used incorrect words.
Oh man that was heartbreaking.
all those feels...
That was a very touching story. However, there were a number of errors. Don't worry too much, you can improve with practice and time. You might also consider getting an editor (if you can). I gather there is more to this story 'cause it's marked Incomplete. I look forward to see what happens next.
Beautiful!
Just Beautiful.
Yeah, in dire need of an editor or at least a proof-reader.
Sweet Celestia, how does this story only have 29 likes? I shall like this wonderful story
1586067 now it have 44 likes and 2 dislikes
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congratulations author
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The story was excellent. Those damned pressure points. Though it does make me wonder, what her life would have been like if her mother lived.
I was tearing up despite the fact that it was littered with grammatical errors.
D'awwww. Not exactly the type of inspiration I need for my own writing, but still d'awwwwwwww.
Well...this sad. Like...incredibly sad. Like...holy crap was this sad.