I feel like quagmire.... I like where this is going.
also, I do have just one bit of advice... perhaps you should use page breaks when theres a shift in scene, like when you jump back and forth between RD's fun times, and twilight's, you could seperate it with "------------------------------------------------------------". It just makes it feel more.... i dont know... clean cut I suppose.
First! (for this chapter)
I feel like quagmire.... I like where this is going.
also, I do have just one bit of advice... perhaps you should use page breaks when theres a shift in scene, like when you jump back and forth between RD's fun times, and twilight's, you could seperate it with "------------------------------------------------------------". It just makes it feel more.... i dont know... clean cut I suppose.
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I wonder who the new victims for twilight will be
sexually frustrated twilight is best twilight