I'm I reading hints of a TwilightXShiningArmor clop chapter in the future? PLEASE MAKE IT SO!

Twilight going around and raping ponies and then removing the memory of it from them? This I gotta read more of!

I KNEW IT!

This is the only way I can forgive myself for liking this so much.

Too her left rested a rather that had a hint of flowers coming from it, ever so faintly.

It should be to not too.

Rarity. Maybe I should play you a visit and make you enjoy the benefits of mares like I did.

Wouldn't it be pay not play?

Twilight never made a habit of having pears around her because of the pear farm on the opposite side of AppleJack’s farm, which who was always competing with.

Looks like you added an extra word. I think it would be which

No Calm down Twilight!

Either uncapitalize the calm or put an end mark after no.

I don't even know why. This story does have a driving plotline which is actually entertaining to read. Kudos to you Express. I would have never thought it possible till I found your stories.

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And kudos to you for pointing out my mistakes in the stories.

1602779You are welcome. I'd like to think I read this so I can better authors of all kinds. In actuality I came here for the plot and remained here for the plot. Grammar and spelling are just a bonus.I'll probably end up commenting on newer chapter about mistakes.

So. Fucking. ANXIOUS!