Twilight casts a spell on Spike and tells him to go and talk to as many ponies as he possibly can. A simple enough task for the dragon, until he sees just what kind of effects this particular spell is having on all the ponies he meets. Ranging from the usual gang that Spike is familiar with, in addition to many others, this little dragon sees far and wide just how strange everypony can be and the alarming swings in personalities they all display, and eventually... well, that's just the incredibly small tip of an incredibly large iceberg...
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Ya know, I like the idea of Bon Bon's voice changing with pastries! I would read a fic about that! I would write one, but I cant write for my life
Twi, you left him sleeping in the middle of a freezing-cold lake in which he could have drowned, and laughed while he got sick from the experience.
I like where this story is going. Keep it up.
D....Demoman?
I am liking this so far, please do continue!
This looks good. Remember to indent paragraphs when there is a new speaker or a new paragraph.
EG
"Hello," she said, "I am poop."
"Hello," he replied, "you are poop."
They both laughed for a while and were all like LOLOOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL>OLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL
...I am confused as all hell. XD Why is everypony behaving .... out-of-sorts?
1423218 I don't really get it either
:| This spell is causing pandemonium.
MR. FANON CANON, TEAR DOWN THIS TEXT WALL! TEAR IT DOWN!
REAGAN SMASH!
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Fixed by part 4, though I should probably work on those earlier parts.
That not Spike talking there, right?
Hm... Only read two of your many chapters and I'm very interested. Heck, I only started reading this because the title gave me a giggle.
Nice work.
dear princess celestia twilight has created a sentient spell that is effecting all of equestria please help
...Was that a Fallout reference?
I am so happy that I know what you referenced there.
This feels like reading Alice in Wonderland. I'll be honest, I wanted to stop when it got too confusing, and the plot seemed to be moving slower than I could handle, but something kept me reading, and that something demands that you update again soon!
Please?
Haha, really now, I'm not quite sure why I'm still following this story, but I think it has something to do with how interesting I think it is. Some of the chapters and even the writing style remind me of a certain trip down a rabbit hole.
I'm not quite sure where you're going with it, but I'm faithfully following none the less. See you in the future with your next update!
Hah, final exchange made me laugh.
It feels like this chapter doesn't flow quite right, but that could just be me. It's still a speedy exchange of quirkiness among characters, so it's still fun to read. Unfortunately, I think you've been spending a lot of time kind of...talking about the sentience of the spell and not really focusing much on quirky character exchanges anymore. You're probably building to something though...so I'll be quiet...
See you next update!
Hmm, I think that reflection needs to do a little introspection. Put it in a corner and tell it to reflect on its actions!
Twilight. You need to have a heavier hand with your kids! Teach it some manners.
This story is rapidly becoming incomprehensible. And it's really just not very good.
Haha, as always, an odd chapter. This whole story has been one mystery after another, and I hope it all gets resolved in the end!
"I am Heavy Confectionery Mare... and this, is my candy."
1412392 And Bon-Bon is heavy.
Apparently:
= Dumb
= Dang
= Darn
The CMC with the DDD.
hey, that rhymes!
Also, German Big Mac is best Big Mac.
Twilight is Spike's master, she makes him go hungry, and she bribes him with food just to do his job? Jesus Christ.
Yes hobbit and spyro references my life would be complete if you added drago or dragonode from bakugon
Lol if Big Mac is German that means that garble would have a Russian accent and talk about vodka because that's well what teens talk about in high school now which sucks cause I'm in grade 9 right now
so wait, the spell isn't on Spike.... does that mean that him talking is pointless now? She isn't receiving any thoughts or whatever from him, so just got do nothing and pretend you did.
Good lord how did you do that?
Their humble master?
What is Spike to twilight? Her pet?
1411605 Oh right, that happened.
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