Chrysalis finds herself in the Everfree. She is still a filly, planning to rule Equestria someday. But, she finds herself in the time a few weeks before her older self tried to ruin Princess Mi Amore Cadanza's wedding. Her filly self finds Fluttershy, but since she is still a filly, she knows nothing about the Canterlot plan. Fluttershy then cares for the young Chrysalis, and learns her side of the story.
"Maybe... she's not so evil... just misunderstood... maybe she's... good."
Almost a Chrysalis and Fluttershy version of Past Sins
Chapters (10)
I bless you with this stories first like.
And fave.
Real comment: so cryssy is getting a ground-hog day loop? I hope she gets to change what happens, becouse watching anyone die is sad. And be ready for a shitstorm if you kill fluttershy...
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are you supposed to be advertising on this site?
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it's a spammer
1427870, it was a bot account, it's already banned.
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Annnnnnnddd he is OUT HERE!!!!
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It seems pretty nice, but there are some grammatical problems throughout the story.
"but... your usually" should be "you're"
"Equestria then me and Discord" should be "than."
"a certan" should be "certain"
"always been enimies to Equestria" should be "enemies"
Those are what I found at least.
epic story Very sad but to the point
fluttershy would be proud 
1427856 I would never kill Fluttershy!!! But, Chrissy's real mother dies...
1427997 Thanks, I'll fix those soon.
1428122 I LOVE FLUTTERSHY!!!
So much win in this story. There is only one problem, though.
It's not long enough
1428334 You mean... you want more?
Yes>>1429576, we want more. Its a good idea, let Crys change it to a happy/bittersweet ending.
1429615 Thank you! I am so happy right now!
I wonder why this story hasn't gotten more views. It seems to be a winning one with lots of emotional promiseweknowmemes.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/02/full-of-win.jpg
1432387 Thank you!
The colored and big text effects don't really belong in a story.
That's a lot of blood!
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When I read this scene it reminded me of Lion King's Mufassa's death and the theme that came along with it
I kinda imagine in the next chapter young Chrysalis suddenly bursting out with raw green magical power, screaming, melting the guard's spears in her fury, knocking them away and escaping.
1436863 I thought it would make Chrisalis' fear more intense and the viewer would understand it more, 'cause not everyone is afraid of blood.
1437477 I WAS THINKING ABOUT THE LION KING, TOO!!!
And, that is an interesting idea for the next chapter! LOL!
This is a great story, much better than mine. Whatever you say. Faving.
So sad...... 
1457493 Thank you! But, your story is really good too!
And don't worry, mine will be happier, later.
Putting things in parentheses in the middle of a sentence is really distracting. In all instances where you did it, the reader didn't need the extra clarification. We know what's going on. So try not to do that.
BLOOD FOR THE BLOOD GOD!
I couldn't resist.
Everything has been building up to the moment she meets Fluttershy... I can barely withhold my patience
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Me: Now, now Apple Bloom, patience!
1464527 Okay. Thanks, and sorry
1467777 Well, they are Celestia's guards... so... maybe?
Even I don't know. And, are you really crying? My story made you cry? 
Do you... think it's a good story!?!? 
I really appreciate all the comments and constructive criticism. 
1468894 Don't worry, danail24... and Applebloom.
The next chapter is coming soon 
, and filly Chrysalis is actually from the past. She was a filly the same time as the rest of the mane 6, as told in the story. But somehow she meets present Fluttershy, or in her point of view, future Fluttershy. 
1470435 Yes, it did make me cry. Which makes this story even better. Getting emotions like that from your reader is a sure fire sign that you're doing something right.
Keep up the good work.
i wish i was not dead inside so i could cry when reading
1473705 Thank you!
1476340 Thanks?
I think the ending to chapter 3 was kinda sloppy. I was in a hurry to finish publish it, but I'm about to go somewhere, so there may be a lot of grammer and spelling problems. Sorry!
Celestia's eyes widened "She what!?!? How guards were there including yourself?"
"Two others, your highnes... but they became injured..."
This should probably read as
Celestia's eyes widened "She what!?!? How many guards were there including yourself?"
"Two others, your highness... but they sustained injuries..."
Still, this is getting interesting, and I'm looking forward to future chapters.
the possibilities here are worth the continued read
1494408 Thanks!
1494796 Yay!
Nice, nice! Not too much of a dialogue but the story is still progressing nicely. That Thunderstorm dude is a real lying bunghole though. He didn't even try to persuade the Changeling queen to come, he just threatened her then killed her when he didn't get his way! So he sucks and he lies!Just goes to show ya... Never send a racist general to do diplomacy!
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Yeah, don't worry though. In the end... well... I don't want to spoil it for you! 
Great story! My friend The Derpinator recommened it to me, and it was well worth my time. Thanks for the great read! I shall fave.
Oh wait, I forgot.
1515353 The Derpinator recommended me? I'll have to thank her!
And, thank you for reading! 
The story seems to be advancing well. A bit choppy on the narrating but fine. A tip though: make your future chapters longer! Its a bad idea to keep them that short! An average one is above 3000 words long.
1539996 Sorry about that. I was busy this week. I'll try to make them longer in the future!
1542556 Oh, don't be sorry! Just some friendly advice!
Good, good! Everything is shaping up nicely... The dialogue is as skippy as ever, starting and ending quickly as if everypony's in a rush but hey, its never easy... no pressuremedia.tumblr.com/tumblr_m2xyjxfwKP1r02qda.jpg
1588570 Thanks. I try to make the dialouge better... but yeah, it's hard. I really appreciate that you continue to comment. Thanks so much!
Wow. Did not know apples can cause an allergic reaction. Remember, I recommended this story for a reason. Keep up the great work!
1627209 I didn't either! It just came to me, then I looked it up, and it turns out to be true! And, thank you!
Here are some typos and grammar errors I found.
I remember your wish for your reasons to e kept to yourself, but I would like to know if it's alright. I might even be able to help.
e should be be
Before Rainow Dash could finish, a grey pegasus was suddenly on top of her, and there was suddenly a second whole in the ceiling.
whole should be hole
"Opps! Sorry Rainow Dash!" The pegasus said, with somewhat stupid smile.
Opps should be oops, and there should be an a between with and somewhat
"Don't fix it yet, not while she's still here..." While Rainbow said this, a whole new shelf was being knocked over in the backround.
backround should be background
After quite a while of thought, I realized that I haven't seen you nor your friends in quite a while. If you aren't to busy with your studies, and if you're friends are avalible, I would like you to come visit me, Luna, and your brother of course.
You're should be your and avalible should be available, and for some reason this letter isn't italicized like the others are. Also, while works better as bit
She and Chrysalis had been arguing over the past hour weather or not Chrysalis could still wear her "Princess of the Changlings Crown".
weather should be whether, and, if I remember correctly, the period should be inside the quotations marks here
Chrysalis growled, and emidiatley covered her mouth. "What was that?" Chrysalis heard a muffled Twilight say.
emidiatley should be immediately
Crystal sighed. Fluttershy's eyes were just too cute. She nodded slowly, trying to hide her saddness.
saddness should be sadness
Wow! Is there a moment where Rainbow Dash doesn't make an entrance by crashing? I thought she was a great flier! It seems that its the return of Rainbow Crash!
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The Derpy scene was Last Roundup, not Applebuck season.
Who is this "Deroy"?
1966196 Thanks so much, and I apologise for so many mistakes. I was in a hurry since I hadn't updated in 2 months.
1968804 Yeah!
1969870 Oh, yeah. My bad!
1970679 Oops... guess I pressed O instead of P. Sorry!
hmm not bad
, Im still waiting for the bit about the reasoning behind Celestia having the changlings staughtered though. yeah yeah people will whine she's this, she's that, about what I just said but seriously very few grow to be like Celestia is now by actually giving a damn about bathing in the blood of those that stand against you