Luna discovers the simple wonders of a peanut butter and jelly sandwich, which leads to a small rivalry between the two Princesses.
Rated teen for "Implied suggestive" content. (Just in case)
(Also: Title renamed for the sake of submitting it to "ponies doing things" group.)
Short story? Check
Silly/Joke-y subject? Check
Alicorn princesses? Check
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1363759 That. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Soarin_dayum.png
You forgot to add an end to the italics.
Very funny and entertaining.
But why is everything initalicsabout a third of the way through?Never mind, stealth edit while I was reading.
1363759 I can only hope
1363889 Thank you so much
1363920 Jphyper was nice enough to point it out. It should be fixed now
This is a very short but very interesting story!
I always love the comedy about Luna versus Tia in a hilarious way.
GJ!
Ahahahahahahahaha
I loved this story good job
Delightful--I literally laughed out loud!
"We thank thee butter Croissant!" She continued to hug the poor mare as she drape her across her shoulder.
*Butter
*draped
Overall, 3 out of 5 Trixies
I find this one to be one of the more silly stories that have been made here. Luna vs Celestia over PB&J? Priceless.
"Wit haste"?
1364772>>1364631 Thank you both. Feel rather foalish for not catching those, even after using a spell check
Milk form Denmilk? I don't know about you, but I always order my milk from Wiscownsin. Tastes fuller and creamier, to me anyway. Great cheese too.
Hahahaha oh god
'Equestria at a stand still as peanuts reign supreme! What you should know about our new legume overlords.'
epic
That was great, nice fun story.
I see what you did there...
I would consider replacing "stores" with "food banks" at the very end.
HAHAHA funny story. Luna such a troll!
I reviewed your story tonight you can find it here