The many planes and universes of the cosmos is a wondrous thing, but also not fully understood by many. So when a cowardly Kobold bard somehow finds himself thrown from his material plane, he comes face-to-face with a certain trapped god of chaos. Making a deal with the promise of being returned home, he is then sent to equestria to finish it.
Unfortunately for him, he knows little of the ramifications when it comes to invading another world. As he travels though this new land, he will find that ponies and parties will be the least of his problems. He soon discovers himself hunted down by a being of order to stop the chaos he may cause before it gets out-of-hand. With only his wit, knack of running from danger, and trusty lute, will he succeed in triumph? Or fail miserably?
Either way, he's about to make a giant fool of himself.
I love Deekin the Bard. I will be upset if this sucks. BRB READIN IT.
EDIT: I like it. Another!
uhm, Deekin is best-pony. somehow.
Hurray for Deekin! Too bad this is a past event that was before Deekin even had an adventuring carrer.
I actually was thinking about this and the starting point I would have gone with would have been at the end of Shadows of Undrentide (you know with the whole jump into a portal before we all die sort of thing). Also too bad since Deekin would be low leveled and wouldn't be able to show off much of his magic. Also immediately breaking the enchanted item entrusted to you so you can free the God of Chaos is something I found hilarious.
"You think that's bad? I once travelled with a Bard who rhymed sadder with bladder and sang fondly of his navel."
xD
NWN POWER ACTIVATE! Love the story so far, please update soon!
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NWN and ponies?
MUST HAVE.
Forgotten Realms is best realms
1056932 I could have chosen this story to happen either before he meets the player in Undertide, or between Undertide and Underdark. I never pictured Deekin to be that cowardly after Undertide, so i guess that's why I chose the former. Although It would be interesting for him to come in as a full red dragon disciple.
"Aw, so no super duper surprise dungeon party? I even brought my lucky D20."
even more lulzy than last time.
Keep up the good work!
Oh Pinkie!
"Aw, so no super duper surprise dungeon party? I even brought my lucky D20."
Excellent. Deekin has been best kobold for years now.
Excellent pace, Very good writing! (Couldn't see any mistakes so far). I have to tell you I was wary, so many bad stories out there. But yours has great potential, Deekin characterization so far is excellent, as for the ponies, it remain to be seen how well you do it. I believe in your capacity so far.
Five moustaches
Apologies if the description of Mechanus and its lifeforms are hard to picture. I don't have much to work with as I don't have the actual D&D books; only relying on internet sources.
Mechanus seems to fit what I know of it, great chapter too, only two errors in it.
An Inevitable? Those things are nasty
Hehe, The amount of amusement I get from this story is directly proportional to how much of a dork I am.
Funny roleplayer Pinkie is a go!dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Pinkie_Pie_lolface.png
Mechanus intervention?
dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Discord.png Everything goes according to plan...
Small OOCness of mane6? It's a comedy fic based on roleplaying... they will just get less experience for not staying in character. Try to make descriptions of situations a little clearer, I was really confused when the girls appeared Pinkymagically in Flutters' abode... Remember only Pinkie can break the 4th and 5th walls, and she can't take passangers
Just double-check your grammar please. There were several mistakes around. If you need help finding them just scream.
I'm not the kind of pony who does this sort of thing, but it's just too good to pass up!
OTP
Twilight Sparkle X Primus
If the Manticores survives it won't be hunting in that location anymore but to the fact it promised Fluttershy it wouldn't hunt there anymore I hope it suffers somewhat enough to teach it's stubbornness away.
1234038 Yeah, bunch of weird ponies keep appearing there. Probably best to keep away.
Is it odd that I want to read more shenanigans involving Hidden Aim?
Well this is great. Looking forward to seeing more of this. With any luck other denizens of the outer planes will be showing up too. Wonder how Celestia would react to learning that she had a plane of existence named after her.
This chapter was partially inspired by a certain disney movie. Can you guess which one?
The Emperor's New Groove.
1399492 A reference to The Emperor's New Groove, specifically Kronk and his conscience.
(take note I just saw this now)
OMG DEEKIN SCALESINGER!!!!!!
BEST KOBOLD EVER!!
*suddenly tracks without even reading it (after this post starts reading)*
Halt! Xanos wishes to speak! Xanos approves of this story, and thinks his companion should read it!
Me: "But Xanos-"
No! You will read it or Xanos will brain you!
*Sigh* Fine.
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Joking, I will read it willingly, but I'll have to do it later, I'm afraid.
"who wished to viist Equestria"
it´s a typo! fix It! in chapter 3
Deekin?...Deekin! An MLP fic involving the greatest bard in all of Faerun? Sign me up!
Deekin? Who´s that? Is he from a good book?
1479123 He is a character from Neverwinter Nights: Shadows of Undrentide; my favourite character to be exact.
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So not the main chara then? Is it a good book/series?
And now the fight is getting started, with any luck Hidden Aim isn't a standard kolyarut.
1484499 EYES LASERS PEWWWW (not really)
1480892 It's a PC game made by Bioware in 2002.
Here is a link.
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I'm guessing that he is, he's very (In Inevitable standards) social, and uses both disguise self and vampiric touch.
That's not to say that he couldn't be an advanced Kolyarut, he did use plane shift to get to Equestria after all
If Hidden Aim doesn't make a break for it, it won't matter what he is, Celestia will turn him into a pile of molten slag!
Oh my god, I saw Deekin and just had to check it out--this is going in the Read Later list.
Whoo, finally got a downvote.
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Neverwinter Nights, the game. Shadows of Undrentide and Hordes of the Underdark were expansion campaigns, and Deekin was a character you could have as a party member.
What?
What.
Did NOT see that one coming.
1522568 This is a... good thing?
The wording does seem a bit odd... *scratches head* I'll see what I can do.
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Ha, it's fine. I just wanted to express my surprise at that scene. Overall it was good, though I'd say Primus deserves at least a few hoofprints in his face for abducting Celestia's subjects without so much as a notification. Even if they are friends.
Those Celestia and Primus may be friends, I still say Twilight Sparkle X Primus OTP.
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Twilight > Checklists < Primus love triangle!
1528524 Good point.
Might be a stretch with Capella, but we'll see.
just because deekin is now In euestria, his worlds logic is aplied to equestria? seems legit
anyways, have a cookie
1567083 Uhh... what? *noms on cookie* Thank you
So let me get this straight, these Canterlot bandits can't be stopped by the royal guard in broad daylight, are messing with and immortal goddesses student, the student happens to have saved the world technicly three times from ancient evil and what not and is one of the most powerful unicorns alive...and is afraid of bandits
...no just no... The rest of the story is good so far I guess
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Well... She hasn't even hit anypony and also hasn't met pure violence before.